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  • it would of been perfect if there was also a monster inside the car in the end so when she drove away she would of died she really was a bitch but thats what acting is about

  • Awesome ! What will be your next project ?

  • @Scratshouille Thanks! Next film is A Cold Winter's Night. We start shooting soon.

  • I thought those were aliens...!

  • @Ahmadalibest Could be. You never know. ;)

  • Oh No its the KKK!

  • This was shitty.

  • go vera. JERRYS A DOUCHE!

  • Good job. Yet, ending too cliche. I'll be watching more.

  • Holy crap!!! I work at Loyal's House of Blood Production and I've seen this film 29 times having no idea you guys were Loyal's friends!! Good luck with Night of the Vampire!

  • @the13thchild33 Hey thanks John we're very excited about Night of the Vampire...it will be on YouTube late Halloween night.

  • The acting was kinda horrible the monsters were pretty creepy ....it was whatever better the most on youtube.

  • that girl is a bitch lol

    but really, that was good :]

  • @ngheartsu34 Thanks, glad you liked it :)

  • U go girllll

  • haha that was pretty good... I liked the creatures

  • those monsters were almost TOO convincing

  • @thesliffinator even worse in person and they were naked...scary stuff. ;)

  • had a moment or two. Wretched dialogue.

  • So the lesson here is, don't be a dick. Right?

  • @SubliminalKarate Pretty much. Pay back is a bitch so to speak.

  • Acting was pretty bad but still loved it man. Keep up the good work!

  • @beldonr Thanks for watching ;)

  • Interesting well shot.........!

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  • ahhh 2004 honda civic, I'd recognize my lame dashboard setup anywhere

  • GAY

  • i thought it was really good and i think the girl rather than the alien creature brings the real horror factor out i liked her acting and the ending was well done,so keep it up.

  • this was good, although my films are more in human than creatures, i like it.

  • The cinematic value was good aside the continuety once he hit the creature was off. If he was to drive and hit it surely the shot of the guy getting out the car would not show the shot from inside the front of the car facing forward? The acting was also a bit unrealistic but aside that it was good!

  • @iknowimtwisted86 Thanks for the feedback! Yep, the film certainly has its flaws but it was my first one.

  • Loved it!!!!!!! Well done

  • @Teehart83 Thanks!

  • the chick can't act...sorry to say but it's true.

  • Awesome!!! Good job you have inspired me more

  • @ExileHorror Awesome.

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  • What a bitch!

  • ... The only thing I don´t understand: Why does he look for what that thing is, AFTER he killed it? Maybe it was just an old lady, seeking for her earring?! xD

    Nicely done!!

  • Had to laugh at the 'Friday the 13th part 6' moment starting at 1:39. Great movie!

  • @bruvvamoff Glad you enjoyed! ;)

  • ...just can't get the laughter out of my head...reminds me of my ex...VT divorce court...the roadkill critters..the attorneys..the female judge!! ARRRRGGGHHHH!!!!!!!

  • @THECountZakula you took the words out on my mouth on the "divorce court" part. I can't help but wonder if the female judge looked like those radiating creatures.

  • this sucks

  • Nice teeth ;)

  • Cool short film! Loved your camera work and lighting! Thumbs way up!

  • He had it coming...good film.

  • what is this the descent creature??

  • @llcc1103 or The Dead from SEVENTH MOON?

  • he sweet job man!! how did you do the creature effects??? please tell me!!!

  • @albertansportsman Blithe spirit body paint (which tends to glow under light) with some grey monster cake makeup for shadowing and FX fangs/lenses/claws.

  • I would have done the same thing she did. Good short movie thank you for sharing.

  • @gozacomolia Thanks. Good to hear.

  • Dude Awesome! Lighting, editing, acting, directing, camerawork... it was just perfect. Kudos to ya!

    Check out some of my short horrors... trying to make something as good as that...

  • @DPKFineArts Thanks:)) I'll check out some of your shorts.

  • oh dang,what a bitch xD

  • Amazing man! What program do you use?

  • @yournotrandom This film was edited on Adobe Premiere...my Smog movie was edited on Sony Vegas. Sony Vegas is favorite.

  • What kind of camcorder were you using to shoot this?

  • @HEfilms Canon Vixia HV30...great little HD camera for under $1,000.

  • Great job, entertaining little movie! The sound fx really builds a threatening mood and sells the danger. It would've been nice (and here I'm just opinionating, so grain of salt time etc) to set up the angry relationship a little more, before the run in. What if, pissed off at her, HE'D made a comment "You're lucky I don't just leave YOU alongside the road one of these days, you little b*tch" etc? Something to set up the twist at the end. But you've shot a very enjoyable film!

  • @hauntedmoviehouse Thanks;)

  • @hauntedmoviehouse I agree, that would have been a perfect line.;)

  • The Descent Part 3?

  • @thedeadwalk2nite there ya go...

  • Pretty good, enjoyed watching it :)

  • @wimmebr thanks!

  • good short film, bad female actor

  • xD the guy at the begining made me laugh ahaha.

    "i dunno why dont u just shut up for a while" so funny.

  • Bitch move. Why would she drive away without him?

  • That was pretty good 5 stars dude =)

  • @Jigsaw4494 thanks man.

  • its directed by you?

  • @yerrypablo Yes, Owen Mulligan. Basically my first short.

  • Everything was brilliant especially the creatures, I like the mystery build up. The only negative is the female actor ;(

  • lol stupid girl in the end nice movie

  • I didn't really like the acting >.>

    But awesome stuffff xD

  • that was great! What did you use for the creatures?

  • @TheDecade1 Thanks :) Well I had my two actors strip naked and then we covered them with blithe spirit body paint, which tends to glow under lights a bit. The main creature also had some shadowing done around the eyes/mouth and he wore FX eye lenses (white out) and FX fangs.

  • @DeadFi naked? *plays back creature part* PORN!!! PORN!!! LOL

  • ooohh very fun!!!

  • @hannahdaisyfp Thanks ;)

  • @matthewcole13 She was sick and tired of his attitude and being treated like shit so she made use of the situation to get rid of the jerk. Payback is a bitch ;)

  • Nice idea and nicely shot! Well done. Look forward to seeing more!

  • @dkittv Thanks. For one of our 1st shorts I think it turned out Ok despite its flaws.

  • I. Like. It. The End.

  • @KaidSmith Thanks.

  • come check out my video called the hamburger lady

    Its a scary / disturbing video made to display my new prop that i made for halloween... This video contains disturbing imagery and is based off of tthe throbbing gristles song called hamburger lady

    please check it out and let me know what you think <3

  • Awesome job guys!

  • @bloodfire86 Thanks!

  • Im scared..??

  • Not too shabby. Dude was a horrible actor though and the car squealed off on a dirt road?

  • @SleepingPeace The movie has its weak points. I'm aware of them. I was wondering if anyone would mention the car squeal...LOL. Anyway, thanks for the feedback!

  • @DeadFi But other than that it was good. I like how it started and how it was filmed. It also kind of reminds me of me and my girlfriend...

  • driving away and leaving him there...Sounds like something I would do (Only My laugh would be a lot more hysterical and evil.

  • good video

    look this and tell me how do you tink about it

    thanks

    bye

  • Loved it... this is my kinda film...

  • it could have been a bit longer and the acting wasn't all that great..but i still like the idea, nice work

  • this isn't a comedy? I thought the bad acting was intentional...

  • it was pretty entertaining. I personally feel like something is missing though. Like this is actually part of a longer film. Like the opening or closing sequence or maybe a trailer.

  • @DesMuttYS I generally feel the same way that something is missing but I don't feel this could be a longer film. I was not exactly completely satisfied with this film but it was my second and that's how you learn. I do have a feature idea for Midnight Roadkill but it is a completely different story and has no relation to this one. Anyway, thanks for watching and giving feedback. ;)

  • lol "why don't you just shut up for a while?"

  • This is amazing for a horror short! great job whoever did this

  • it was ok but i was hoping both of them died.

    it would make more a karma to it.

  • nice

  • Jerry is a major dick wad!!!

  • He sure is.

  • Well, basicly one of the best i've seen so far. Really looks like the films in the cinemas. I I have always dreamed of making films like this and hopefully in March i am going to be able. The cinematography and lighting was absolutely perfect. Not that good plot tho. Did you use 24p ?

  • @evertlund Thanks, yes, used 24p.

  • 5/5 awesome very cool. Loved the fangs closeup too. the initial lingering shot of the creature was very creepy also. well done!

  • for a 4 minute horror film this was really good! I liked the scene of them stopping to look at the thing in front of them.

  • Welcome!!!!! i am also planning to make a movie!!!!!

  • Awesome! Send the link when it's ready. ;)

  • I liked it.

  • Great. The girl's acting needs some work, but overall the story and how it was shot was pretty tight. Nice work.

  • That was kool but u know there were several things which makes this movie amatuer!!! First of all why would he want to kill that???? He didnt knew if it was a ghost or some alien!!! It was just like Human Beings....and then why He got off???? Its midnight and no one is here, No one will get off like this....anyways it was a nice one!!! Hope u can improve and make better.....Good Luck

  • LOL. never trust a women.

  • It was good, I would have used an suv for more practical reasons, but other than acting it was good. Nicely done!

  • Thanks....The Honda was the only car available to us and the only one available that suited the shots. Acting is tough but this is an area that will get much more focus in the future. I need to free my hands up more as the directer so I can give more time to the actors. ;)

  • Photography and editing is correct, no argument at all and acting is really poor.

  • Thanks for the feedback. This will help us improve our short films.

  • I like that thing... Nice work!

  • Good to hear! Thanks!

  • Ok, I'll be honest I was going into this thinking "Oh, another crappy horror short on youtube" , but that was AWESOME!

    Very well done! Hope to see more from Deadfi!

  • Thank you! Night of the Killer Smog is in pre-production. Very different from Midnight Roadkill but I'm very excited about it.

  • Well if it's as good as Midnight Roadkill sign me up!

  • Very Well Done!!!! I also own the HV30

  • Thank you. I appreciate that! :)

  • That was entertaining. Nice work!

  • Thank you Charity!

  • Fantastic work!

  • Thank you!

  • Wow, it's on the Internet for all to see! Great!

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