@chadmurphi Yes, the whole project was done over a period of a few days during 11th grade. Looking back I wish I had improved upon it after the due date.
@colincsl for 11th grade that's not bad at all :) If there's one thing I've learned in my own creative endeavors, it's that a little bit of harsh criticism will help you improve far more than the basic 'looks good' you might get from someone passing through. Good luck, sir
Even though it has technical difficulties, with a tiny bit of tweaking, this could be a fantastic video. I already really like it a lot. The camera angles in the beginning are especially cool.
yes the volume is inconsistent, but the animation casts a really cool mood. i actually really like this video a lot. the art value is awesome even with some of the technical stuff not being quite right
Yeah I'm gonna have to agree with casemasterflex on this one...the animation is terrible...the lighting (if there even is any) makes it look like a playblast with wireframe on shaded turned on. And the articulation of the models is piss poor with visible verts on EVERYTHING...I was gonna accredit it a little to style in the beginning but the animation really gave it away...sorry. Better luck next time.
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this was awful.
Audio is all over the place, interpenetration, and the pacing is weird.
Walk cycle is all slidey, dead screen at 1:16 just before the cut.
It just occurred to me you might be younger, but if this isn't your first foray into animation you might want to look into another field. If this is a novice attempt, then good job, but keep working at it.
@cameroooon89 you are the worst kind of person in existence. Do not suffocate critique. By telling him what was bad he knows what to look out for in the future. By blindly agreeing with what is good, you further the notion that someone can relax and take it easy. Without 'assholes' to point out the weak spots there's no way to tell how to make it better. That said. Yes. I am. Fuck off.
@CASEMASTERFLEX first of all, that's a bit extreme don't ya think? second of all, do you believe in an objective model for what is good taste and bad taste? do you believe that art only exists for its audience? if so, then your above statement is completely justified. but I don't think you do. his judgement to make it better should be based on HIS/HER standards (if you'd like to chime in with your gender so I stop sounding like an idiot that'd be cool), not yours. also, relax. outta space.
@cameroooon89 You are the problem. If you read what i wrote in critique, none of it had anything to do with his idea. It looks like beginner work, which he admitted it was. My comments involved the fluidity of motion, the quality of the sound clip used, and general technical issues with this.
Regardless of gender you sound like an idiot. You're expressing the desire to allow art to exist if it's bad and if we're talking about the objective model i advise you to check out the Fountainhead.
there are plenty of examples of people releasing poor quality work, with others eating it up simply because they didn't think of it first. While I believe the author can do better, I was pointing out, technically, what could improve this piece. You clearly know little about objectivism.
@CASEMASTERFLEX i know the basics of objectivism, probably not all of its finer points. and as I clearly stated, if you believe "in an objective model for what is good taste and bad taste, then your above statement is completely justified." I fail to see why blindly agreeing with any rand is acceptable but my philosophies and anyone else's aren't. I was just saying that telling someone that their work is awful was kind of an asshole thing.
@CASEMASTERFLEX upon rereading, i realize i may have misjudged the tone. it was constructive. your opening line was just so dick-ish (which you conceded to be ok as long as it's constructive) it colored my conception of your intentions. i'm sorry. i do disagree with objectivism and most forms of critique but that's not what any of this is about; youtube's not really a constructive forum for philosophy but it is an appropriate place for tech help.
@CASEMASTERFLEX haha, are you talking about the videos i made in imovie for me and my friends to watch, remember, and laugh about? hahahaha, i'm so offended that you think my home movies are bad.
don't worry, if you drop your sourness you might be able to have some friends to share memories with some day.
Great job man! I love how you put the Paper Tiger in a cage. It's demonstrative in implying that there is nothing to be afraid of, hence, the Paper Tiger.
Thanks. I have a fixed version on my computer, but it's not on Youtube. When I originally exported it the segments I ran through After Effects had two sources of audio, which is where the change in volume comes from. If you want a fixed copy I can make it available.
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Neal432 4 months ago
CASEMASTERFLEX is a D!CK. You suck @ life.
WTFBRAHA 1 year ago
not v good
powderpig001 1 year ago
you may think it sucked, there were a few mistakes. but i really liked it
rcon1012 1 year ago
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sugartits918 1 year ago
hmm i thought this was going to be a beck cover, oh well its still good
solitudeisbliss 1 year ago
this is pretty cool
ryanking1994 1 year ago
Wow, man, some great animation for a Spoon fan clip.
koalek 1 year ago
cool video i like it. dig the song also -
theroadsmusicvideos 1 year ago
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The animation of the people was absolutely dreadful. Is this a grade school project or something?
chadmurphi 2 years ago
@chadmurphi Yes, the whole project was done over a period of a few days during 11th grade. Looking back I wish I had improved upon it after the due date.
colincsl 2 years ago
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CASEMASTERFLEX 1 year ago
@colincsl for 11th grade that's not bad at all :) If there's one thing I've learned in my own creative endeavors, it's that a little bit of harsh criticism will help you improve far more than the basic 'looks good' you might get from someone passing through. Good luck, sir
CASEMASTERFLEX 1 year ago
ya dont have to be an ahole, if you dont like it keep to yourself
wadeismyname00 2 years ago 2
great song. tx for uploading it
thenameisbond 2 years ago
i want me one of them there paper tigers.
:D
gengerlane 2 years ago 6
spoon seem to be one of those bands that have a lot of creative fans. interesting. i am a pompous fuck.
blatspanner 2 years ago 11
weird
but in the good way
jjjoe77 2 years ago 2
When I see this video for some reason my first thought "We got to move these color TV's..."
SolomonJonesIsBack 2 years ago 15
@SolomonJonesIsBack Funniest comment I have ever read in my life hahahaha
Sanaale2813 10 months ago
what is this song about? *tilts head* its coooool!
aphrediety96 2 years ago
i want a tiny paper tiger as a pet...cute vid :)
suhayla11 2 years ago
i like it pretty damn funky man holy ballz. would be cool if you made them 2d like paper thin:)
ipxzor 2 years ago
i like spoon but this video is just weird lol ok song though
fuckmenow848484 2 years ago
honestly..its not that bad. you got skills you just need time
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lvdhyes 2 years ago
yo geoemrick don't criticise it its class.
Abbie1540 2 years ago
Even though it has technical difficulties, with a tiny bit of tweaking, this could be a fantastic video. I already really like it a lot. The camera angles in the beginning are especially cool.
geoemrick 2 years ago
the video is pretty weird but the song fits with it. the animations are smooth. You got some skill
HeirOfJezuz 2 years ago
yes the volume is inconsistent, but the animation casts a really cool mood. i actually really like this video a lot. the art value is awesome even with some of the technical stuff not being quite right
emmmizzle 2 years ago
i had to turn it off, the volume was so inconsistant
CoonBabble 2 years ago
Yeah I'm gonna have to agree with casemasterflex on this one...the animation is terrible...the lighting (if there even is any) makes it look like a playblast with wireframe on shaded turned on. And the articulation of the models is piss poor with visible verts on EVERYTHING...I was gonna accredit it a little to style in the beginning but the animation really gave it away...sorry. Better luck next time.
Daemonecles 2 years ago
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this was awful.
Audio is all over the place, interpenetration, and the pacing is weird.
Walk cycle is all slidey, dead screen at 1:16 just before the cut.
It just occurred to me you might be younger, but if this isn't your first foray into animation you might want to look into another field. If this is a novice attempt, then good job, but keep working at it.
You should def. reupload sound.
CASEMASTERFLEX 2 years ago
I made this a few years ago as a junior in high school over a period of a few days with really tight time restraints.
Looking back at a lot of the videos I made then, most of them suck. I rarely had more than a week to complete any of them.
colincsl 2 years ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX regardless of when he/she made this, you're a pretty big asshole.
cameroooon89 1 year ago
@cameroooon89 you are the worst kind of person in existence. Do not suffocate critique. By telling him what was bad he knows what to look out for in the future. By blindly agreeing with what is good, you further the notion that someone can relax and take it easy. Without 'assholes' to point out the weak spots there's no way to tell how to make it better. That said. Yes. I am. Fuck off.
CASEMASTERFLEX 1 year ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX first of all, that's a bit extreme don't ya think? second of all, do you believe in an objective model for what is good taste and bad taste? do you believe that art only exists for its audience? if so, then your above statement is completely justified. but I don't think you do. his judgement to make it better should be based on HIS/HER standards (if you'd like to chime in with your gender so I stop sounding like an idiot that'd be cool), not yours. also, relax. outta space.
cameroooon89 1 year ago
@cameroooon89 You are the problem. If you read what i wrote in critique, none of it had anything to do with his idea. It looks like beginner work, which he admitted it was. My comments involved the fluidity of motion, the quality of the sound clip used, and general technical issues with this.
Regardless of gender you sound like an idiot. You're expressing the desire to allow art to exist if it's bad and if we're talking about the objective model i advise you to check out the Fountainhead.
CASEMASTERFLEX 1 year ago
@cameroooon89
there are plenty of examples of people releasing poor quality work, with others eating it up simply because they didn't think of it first. While I believe the author can do better, I was pointing out, technically, what could improve this piece. You clearly know little about objectivism.
CASEMASTERFLEX 1 year ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX i know the basics of objectivism, probably not all of its finer points. and as I clearly stated, if you believe "in an objective model for what is good taste and bad taste, then your above statement is completely justified." I fail to see why blindly agreeing with any rand is acceptable but my philosophies and anyone else's aren't. I was just saying that telling someone that their work is awful was kind of an asshole thing.
cameroooon89 1 year ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX upon rereading, i realize i may have misjudged the tone. it was constructive. your opening line was just so dick-ish (which you conceded to be ok as long as it's constructive) it colored my conception of your intentions. i'm sorry. i do disagree with objectivism and most forms of critique but that's not what any of this is about; youtube's not really a constructive forum for philosophy but it is an appropriate place for tech help.
cameroooon89 1 year ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX - don't be such a hater. your videos suck too.
zaqshore 1 year ago
@zaqshore at least they aren't slideshows ass-hat.
CASEMASTERFLEX 1 year ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX haha, are you talking about the videos i made in imovie for me and my friends to watch, remember, and laugh about? hahahaha, i'm so offended that you think my home movies are bad.
don't worry, if you drop your sourness you might be able to have some friends to share memories with some day.
zaqshore 1 year ago
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FooMeow 1 year ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX twat
luke200202 1 year ago
@CASEMASTERFLEX umad?
MRzenky42 1 year ago
I have actually always thought that this was the real video :P
FCule 3 years ago
...............okay.....this is wired......
rayandthekids 3 years ago
jumping audio. not coooool
VelvetRazz 3 years ago
Love these guys. If you dig them check out The Glass Plastiks.
roxysmith2 3 years ago
swift 3d?
loIipz 3 years ago
Nope, 3ds Max.
colincsl 3 years ago
This is freaking awesome!
tamale27 3 years ago
great vid!
muahahaha101 3 years ago
Great Job!
coons7 3 years ago
wow, what a great song, and a great vid to go with it. thanks. =]
RADI0xxactive 3 years ago
awesome!!!!!!!!!!
07kje07 4 years ago
WOW YOUR A GENIUS
xkhangod108 4 years ago
Great job man! I love how you put the Paper Tiger in a cage. It's demonstrative in implying that there is nothing to be afraid of, hence, the Paper Tiger.
ArcaneKarma 4 years ago
i dont really undertstand the video
sootsmoker 4 years ago 2
I like it alot, great animation style. 4/5.
AnEpicComedy 4 years ago
hey i like your video but sometimes the sound goes way up and sometimes it goes lower.
kirmokin 4 years ago
Thanks. I have a fixed version on my computer, but it's not on Youtube. When I originally exported it the segments I ran through After Effects had two sources of audio, which is where the change in volume comes from. If you want a fixed copy I can make it available.
colincsl 4 years ago
one of my fave. spoon songs
marqass 4 years ago
wat program did u use i would really like to know pplz mssg me back ty and SPOON is awesome
billsasquach 4 years ago
I made it in 3ds Max. I'm glad you liked it.
colincsl 4 years ago
you did not make this, this is there video spoon rules and i know you did not make this!!!
danilovesmark 5 years ago
Actually I did make it. I'm glad you like it and think it's of high enough quality to be their professional video.
Note it's only 2 minutes long whereas the whole song is about 3 minutes. I had to restrict it due to time constraints; I only had a few days.
colincsl 5 years ago
wow its really gud though ,mad codos
kickflipking06 4 years ago
nice video, good song choice too.
kazaamgirl 5 years ago
fantastic, very well made
filmproductionboy 5 years ago
you actually made this?! If u did, damn good job!!
gabonage 5 years ago
spoon=dope
Gynecologist 5 years ago
spoon= one of the greatest bands ever... and now there getting recognised for it. which is even better
PlayWaterPolo 5 years ago