okay first of all your you have a really good voice and good eye contact, but thats all. Your binder is a distracting color, your binder is too big, very little hand action, you can't move in a prose reading. In a national competition not only your intro/teaser should be memorized, but the whole piece should be memorized; imagine your binder as just a prop. But for a novice speaker you are good enough to break
You need to stop beating people up and build them up. Your comments are not constructive to me or to the uploader in my opinion. If I'm wrong, correct me.
Okay, her binder was not getting in the way of the MESSAGE; if the message is conveyed, then she did her job. Her voice is good, I can't think of one better. Speech is not supposed to be memorized, communication is key, not memorization. If you can't communicate, your speech is stupid. Hand motions?? Excuse me, if they don't communicate, they are distracting. You say you competed in "prose and poetry" "and have placed high": my response, prove it. Talk is trash. Show us!.
Personally, I believe she makes a Great Public Speaker. How she (1) Talks (2) her mannerisms (3) not making distracting gestures (4) good clear voice, all these reasons are for her being a good public speaker. No, I am not delusional in thinking this.
You did point out that for "prose and poetry" she didn't do well. Well, I have never competed for prose and poetry, so I wouldn't know. I originally meant she made a Very Good Speech and would make an excellent public speaker.
I really don't consider this first place material. Your binder is too big (instant deduction points in the competition I compete in), your voice is forced, the intro wasn't memorized and there were way too many parts when you could have been using hand motions to create a scene and yet you stayed motionless (and before you ask, I have competed in prose and poetry for two years and have placed high)
This is so good and you are the best public speaker! This is exactly the piece I will use as a rolemodel for excellence!! Thank You!! This is soooooo excellent I think I'll have this recorded if that's okay =) =)
okay first of all your you have a really good voice and good eye contact, but thats all. Your binder is a distracting color, your binder is too big, very little hand action, you can't move in a prose reading. In a national competition not only your intro/teaser should be memorized, but the whole piece should be memorized; imagine your binder as just a prop. But for a novice speaker you are good enough to break
deemon678deevon 11 months ago
i watched this in school it was weird
Bellablu6679 1 year ago
@hatorikunlver
You need to stop beating people up and build them up. Your comments are not constructive to me or to the uploader in my opinion. If I'm wrong, correct me.
darkbluepieces 1 year ago
@hatorikunlver
Okay, her binder was not getting in the way of the MESSAGE; if the message is conveyed, then she did her job. Her voice is good, I can't think of one better. Speech is not supposed to be memorized, communication is key, not memorization. If you can't communicate, your speech is stupid. Hand motions?? Excuse me, if they don't communicate, they are distracting. You say you competed in "prose and poetry" "and have placed high": my response, prove it. Talk is trash. Show us!.
darkbluepieces 1 year ago
@hatorikunlver
Personally, I believe she makes a Great Public Speaker. How she (1) Talks (2) her mannerisms (3) not making distracting gestures (4) good clear voice, all these reasons are for her being a good public speaker. No, I am not delusional in thinking this.
You did point out that for "prose and poetry" she didn't do well. Well, I have never competed for prose and poetry, so I wouldn't know. I originally meant she made a Very Good Speech and would make an excellent public speaker.
darkbluepieces 1 year ago
I really don't consider this first place material. Your binder is too big (instant deduction points in the competition I compete in), your voice is forced, the intro wasn't memorized and there were way too many parts when you could have been using hand motions to create a scene and yet you stayed motionless (and before you ask, I have competed in prose and poetry for two years and have placed high)
hatorikunlver 1 year ago
Your book is really big, with a distracting color. You didn't have your intro memorized, and you had no teaser..
your pauses are awkward.
maybe a 3or4 in a round material
but not good enough to break
erinandwhitney 2 years ago
Did you get first at a novice tournament? This isn't really first place material at all. Your voice is too forced.
Stoompy312 2 years ago
This is so good and you are the best public speaker! This is exactly the piece I will use as a rolemodel for excellence!! Thank You!! This is soooooo excellent I think I'll have this recorded if that's okay =) =)
darkbluepieces 2 years ago
@darkbluepieces
You are delusional if you think this is an excellent piece
hatorikunlver 1 year ago
you read it like you didn't know the parts but very good voice!
Jlewis1123 2 years ago
i dont get it we never use books that big 4 4n6 why is hers so big
topher19kid 2 years ago
Same here. Mine was so small!
FilmWithTea 2 years ago
@topher19kid
because it's not the right type of binder?
duh!
hatorikunlver 1 year ago
I hate when people read like that lol I really do, but thats the point of it I guess and you did it really really well.
ThePhobiaViewed 3 years ago 2
oooo!! Awesome Job...Perl! You are such an awesome public speaker!!! You rock!!
relaxandrewind 3 years ago
THANKS!
perlandchap 3 years ago
Please Comment! I love to hear what people think!
perlandchap 3 years ago