Too Late (original)

[jin256]

Jesus that's an expensive guitar.

[olivecow]

omg i love it!

[reidwallace]

This is such a well written tune. I love originals. Nothing is more real and heartfelt.

[cRaZitrAcy]

u should do Cobir Caillat songs

[guskriok]

you should try taking the Dm off its not part of the harmonic field of A where your song is based and it just takes it to a different zone (losing my words here) but other than that i think its cool

[jedarama]

It's all personal taste, but I think the D-Dm transition sounds great. And, by thw way, the D-Dm-A progression appears in the Beatles' song In My Life. I think it's safe to say that In My Life was a successful song. If it sounds good, it is good--regardless of what music theory indicates is a proper chord progression.

[VictorLooser]

try to capo on F# :)

[ivalorlo]

great...

[ageofguitarz]

cool song ...originals rock

[danihobinsen]

Sweetie your build up to your chorus is way to long. at around 0:50 remove one of the couplet and add the chorus then add that part after the chorus and repeat the chorus afterwards. It gets tiring hearing you sing the low parts for more than one and a half minute. Great song =)

[deadmansucks2000]

hey u cud try goin a lil higher.

[rodidh]

maybe you should get a lil higher haha

[sndman40]

Good job, I love the chord progression. Nice lyrics.

[2012borniwill]

WAY nice!

[sunnyflower6006]

you rock

how many guitars do you own? lol

[arvargas8]

I love you

[elchabuko]

hey, i love you guitar

[jostrum50]

Excellent - you will be a star

[mikyhotmail]

She Is a Star

[Erulehtolsa]

ella es una estrella in spanish

[babisgeo3]

It's fantastic so far!!!Keep it up,keep on feeling-not thinking and the rest of the song will come up...I'm waiting...

[whiteniger]

it does get better every1 time, i wish i could play instrument ;/ good job :)

[estujava]

no you are good baby!

[Peppe93cv]

are you sleeping in this video??? I joke,good ;-)

[mugenbluewassy]

I was impressed to listen to your music.

Thank you.

[loureiuk]

long time that i'm whating you, it'd get better every time

[stackis]

nice

[derris]

you're definitely very pretty

[pashtettRB]

its nice

[varaxxx]

hey, you got yourself a new guitar! Pretty expensive, i might say. It sound pretty good, really warm. by the way, nice song.

[elpapisk8]

you look very well and your music is getting better, provided you follow the step, already have a fan

[ishart]

Love the chord progression. Keep em coming!

[gavb18]

im in love....

[Hooba1900]

really good girl

[saveuk]

like others have said just needs a brake in it... but i would say the tempo is fine as its your kind of natural tempo speed going of "most" of your other stuff :)

Keep it up...

I / We await the final cut :)

[shatomanya]

Great voice, as usual, and you got yourself an epiphone hummingbird!! :D

[theboiwonder]

That's a Gibson. 0_0

[mrlucusUTube]

really nice song it belongs in a movie ,a love story .

[RyuVersal]

I really enjoy hearing you sing. You are really good and you have a great style about you that I really like. I hope that you never change you have a beautiful voice and should be proud.

[vinnielasvegas]

cause you asked for ideas - and only because you did that - i would suggest to speed up the tempo of the song and to fit in some unique high notes. like alexi murdoch does it with his song "breathe"

[emceepiro]

nice, lots of emotion, liked the chord prog but felt that you needed a noticible change partway through

Good stuff tho

xx

[heoTheo]

what a great song! :D Would like to see a break.. in the middle with a ripp'n guitar solo! :D

[glaucobertolami]

it surtanly has a great base to start on, can't wait to hear it when it's completed ;)

*****

glauco

[jedkells]

i reckon its sweet, maybe wouldn't hurt for a chilled guitar solo to back up the chords in the part where you're not singing, as well as the chords.

[arctic666monkeys]

sounds really good.

since you asked for suggestions the only thing i could think of was maybe make the chorus a bit more impactful , hard to explain what i mean , just so it grabs people's attention more :)

right no it sounds great anyways , honestly you could just leave it theway it is right now , 5 stars *****

[saturno87]

i love you baby

5 stars¡!¡!

exelent voice

[saturno87]

i love baby

beatiful girl

[hotdogsurprise]

i'm really liking this song. you should post the lyrics on the video info.

[JeffreyC2]

Nice song - :)

[Shanex36]

OMG! i think i've found the next big thing

[chatohumilde]

Cool guitar aaaahhhh!!!

[marycoyote]

It's quite nice!! =)

Maybe adding a few backing vocals it would be cool, what do u say?

xxx

[ciaavash]

some of your covers are much better than their originals!

[strimmer73]

This is great so far, nice work. As for a suggestion to finish it off, if the rest doesn't come automatically, maybe there is no more? Perhaps a few times round the main riff with a few "oohs" and "aahs" etc, and a slow rake down to end? Top job.

[deach69]

Awesome!

[misseptember]

brilliant sofar, follow your heart seriously only you can know what to put or how to assemble it.

[GusGoneSolo]

Its good to see some ridiculous talent.. if I could ... 6 stars

[HugTrees793]

ur amazing

[SubversiveLibrarian]

5 stars