Not much criticism to give, just small things. When he's running after the woman, his expression seems a bit angry to me. Also the black outline of the woman isn't as thick as the mans...
Also thought it would be good if you could actually hear the beeps of the heart monitor.
i liked the overall tone of the piece....i think onr of the best backgrounds was the bathroom scene with the shower curtain and water coming from the tap.
but in relation to the music i feel the timing of the drum beat when he lands was slightly off...the beat is a second late after he lands and although its obviously just part of the music it sounded like him landing but was bit late.
great scene when he sees himself in the bed and when music fades out to the heart monitor
Very good short =)
Not much criticism to give, just small things. When he's running after the woman, his expression seems a bit angry to me. Also the black outline of the woman isn't as thick as the mans...
Also thought it would be good if you could actually hear the beeps of the heart monitor.
Awsome work though and I love your backgrounds!
Well done =D
ninjaduck86 1 year ago
i liked the overall tone of the piece....i think onr of the best backgrounds was the bathroom scene with the shower curtain and water coming from the tap.
but in relation to the music i feel the timing of the drum beat when he lands was slightly off...the beat is a second late after he lands and although its obviously just part of the music it sounded like him landing but was bit late.
great scene when he sees himself in the bed and when music fades out to the heart monitor
nice work man..: )
petai00 1 year ago