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From: nycvincent
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  • so he was dead? its a little bit confusing. but its a good short film. keep up the good work!

  • not bad acting...buttt....you should have got better audio

  • Very Confused but if this is a starter film, then good job. If not, then more practice is needed on getting better angles. Overall though, good job.

  • Good job guys....very interesting shots and I'm getting my Canon HV20 out for this weekend. Keep it up....

  • over all it was pretty good... could work on the lighting, steadycam, more shots/ different angels but I like it. :)

  • @zlcraz6 I missed proper filters

  • that was sweet :) the sound could be a bit cleaner, but great job

  • that's some pretty decent footage, but you need to chill out with those transitions. way too much fades for my taste, but overall, this is some good stuff.

  • did you use external microphones?

  • A feature length film made for under $5000

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  • sooo....he's a ghost!

  • Sure. Would welcome a critique.

  • don't use that transitions in movie if u have the same scene....it's the best if u don't use any transitions....just scene by scene by scene..... :D

  • Transitions are good but, you should use it at right time... And a shot can be more then 4-5 secs, even the whole movie can begins and ends with only one angle, but again you need to use it correctly.

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