Only your third original I've heard but I like this the most . After one listen .. lyrically - I'm very impressed. "don't think twice if you do alright don't text me tonight not looking to fight" - fine stuff. I wrote it down quick/ really does click/ more than alright/ concise with good bite. Fine melody. Hey your voice is real GOOD! . What does the song need? I don't even know some basic terminology. But dude please forgive / maybe a stronger bridge? doesn't need much.
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11xzxzxz 9 months ago
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11xzxzxz 10 months ago
Only your third original I've heard but I like this the most . After one listen .. lyrically - I'm very impressed. "don't think twice if you do alright don't text me tonight not looking to fight" - fine stuff. I wrote it down quick/ really does click/ more than alright/ concise with good bite. Fine melody. Hey your voice is real GOOD! . What does the song need? I don't even know some basic terminology. But dude please forgive / maybe a stronger bridge? doesn't need much.
11xzxzxz 1 year ago
bitches aint shit brother. nice work.
dmckinney3 1 year ago
@dmckinney3 You, sir, have identified the theme of this song.
bradymusic27 1 year ago