-- When Michael was younger, he thought everything was hard. He found it difficult to read, excercise or do homework. In the morning he would get up feeling sad and worthless. He thought his life was very boring and there was no point in it. He wanted to be successful and do well in school, but it was just so hard for him. He had very poor communication skills and he was unnatractive. He didn't have alot of respect and his reputation was low. -- Is this a good introduction?
@dervish2173 it's a good start! Just remember to show not tell, and flesh it out, because with what you have right now every sentence could easily be a chapter.
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lol laugh out bloody loud. His first piece of advice is to go off and get some advice with a book on a subject, if thats all u need to do for expertvillage, then i could do that for every single subject u can yearn 4
ol cold santy clause. theres a certain love, and positivity you get on the street just for having the white beard and mustache. I wonder if youve written published novels and whatnot. where are you sitting anyway? looks like your in a cubicle.
I was once told about the bear at the door. You are in a cabin somewhere in the Rockies. There is a great thumping knock. You open the door and there is a huge grissly. What do you do? Apparently this is an important question for the reader. What do you do about the immediate threat or what does your character do. The reader wants to know. Anyway this is what I came across ages ago when I first started writing...
well since the bear knocked i would ask him or her in for some tea since it is obvious that the bear had intelligence to know that some one was there and be polite enough to knock so the least i could do was offer some tea then they start talking about what.. i dont know how does he like being hunted why dont he kill more humans he is a gigantic animal with awesome power and im rambling on............ . .. . .
Well if you want a polite bear to have tea with you then you have got a polite bear to have tea with. He may not have been knocking as way of polite entry but that is up to you the writer. He may simply have been trying to break in to get to the honey or whatever. Yes, he could always kill more humans...Why not? He could start with you or your character.
well he COULD try to kill the character, fail. or just kill that character if its not my main one but its a short story so that would not be fun to have it that short unless the main character is the bear who is tired of being hunted so he became the hunter or his or her cub was killed by this particular person and he was to knock polite so the person would not think its the bear. then again the person to answer the door could be a giant bee. and the bear was only going to ask for some honey
Ah! The endless possibilities from a bear knocking on a door...No wonder some writing guides think its a good starting point. Keep going with it and you might find yourself with a short story...Good luck to you if this turns out to be the case...To me it sounds like you have only got your little toe wet so far in this rather deep lake of what can be done with a simple opening gambit.
yup. never wrote a short story.. well in high school i did :) and the teacher if he is still there wanted to use it in his class for future reference o_O don't know if he does tho.
how about your self? have you written any stories lately and if so may i read them or some.
Who with and How, or is this just a venture into the spiritual side of life... um, I mean death?
I have many ideas, or I can generate ideas for a story, but I know my writing sucks. For example, some of my favorite shows have fallen flat, and have not gone where I expected: Heroes, Fringe (cringe), CSI, Medium, Babylon 5, and Buffy TVS. The last 2 were the greatest disappointment, as I had a much better ending in mind, but I could never write them.
The trick to learning to write is to just start writing.
JamesBStudios 1 month ago
Thank you!
from1978 1 month ago
Distracting clock
J0LLYG00DProductions 1 month ago
I really enjoy all of these videos :) they're concise and to the point, but they manage to convey quite a bit of information in just a few minutes.
catwomyn77 3 months ago
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mlucero09 4 months ago
i fucking hate writing short stories! no offence to anyone who enjoys writing stories.
YouCanSeeYourFace 5 months ago
Michaels story
-- When Michael was younger, he thought everything was hard. He found it difficult to read, excercise or do homework. In the morning he would get up feeling sad and worthless. He thought his life was very boring and there was no point in it. He wanted to be successful and do well in school, but it was just so hard for him. He had very poor communication skills and he was unnatractive. He didn't have alot of respect and his reputation was low. -- Is this a good introduction?
dervish2173 5 months ago
@dervish2173 it's a good start! Just remember to show not tell, and flesh it out, because with what you have right now every sentence could easily be a chapter.
purplesheepify 5 months ago
@purplesheepify That advice was really helpful, after thinking about it, it does seem more effective if you show rather than tell. Thank you
dervish2173 5 months ago
That clock is ticking me off!
xSonsofNerox 5 months ago
Monopoly Man Can Talk!
mp3holder94 7 months ago
@mp3holder94 monopoly man doesnt have a beard...just a moustache
ThaDudesAvlogger 6 months ago
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Pongo0625 7 months ago
Character, plus a Goal, plus an Obstacle = Conflict , which generates story.
But which comes first! Plot (Story) or Character? The chicken or the egg.
Damon Knight's book is good, but a little literary rather than popular.
MiCompre 8 months ago
Why is writing poetry included in this title?
liam13coins 8 months ago
Great tutorials, but how can you write where that clock is ticking! it would drive me insane!. But then again, most good writers are insane :D
DKC1011 9 months ago
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BMCliveinside1 10 months ago
Once you have written a poem to be proud of why not enter it into our competition for the chance to win a large cash prize? competition-uk.co.uk
BMCliveinside1 10 months ago
for once, expert village was not useless
thedeathskittle 10 months ago 6
he dont tell us how to do it
dance101slam 1 year ago
This guy is not afraid.
ToonCrafter 1 year ago
wow. His voice made me tired.. Something about it..
zombielover27 1 year ago 2
@zombielover27 yeah man he has a really soft voice, quite comforting in all honesty
andrew19vato 1 year ago
@zombielover27 yeah me too
nsunshine10 10 months ago
This inspired me
adrianhardy123 1 year ago
Pink-purple shirt FTW!
HelloHiGoodday 1 year ago
lol laugh out bloody loud. His first piece of advice is to go off and get some advice with a book on a subject, if thats all u need to do for expertvillage, then i could do that for every single subject u can yearn 4
bryngOneOn 1 year ago
And now, conquering my other question: finding ideas for short stories, because they have to be SHORT, they are like, a whole different ball game xD
trmptdreams 1 year ago
Person+Problem >>->> How things happen along the way >>->> Solution/Lesson
Alchrat 1 year ago
ol cold santy clause. theres a certain love, and positivity you get on the street just for having the white beard and mustache. I wonder if youve written published novels and whatnot. where are you sitting anyway? looks like your in a cubicle.
maxishere4 1 year ago
@maxishere4
Haha, he makes these videos while at work xD
HelloThar9 1 year ago
Thank you so much. This has cleared up my foggy mind just a bit. :)
wouldntyoulike2know 2 years ago
lol @ the clock in the top left corner xD
nyvion 2 years ago 25
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Merry... writing!
gabriel1118x 2 years ago
I have a book of short stories out Undead reb Down Under and a novel, Disco Evil...they are on filament as well as amazon...
VAMPIREBIRDIE 2 years ago
his shirt is made of epic win
but srsly thx, this vid helped
VioletsAreViolent 2 years ago
Thanks Santa :)
RandomBadgerRyan 2 years ago 82
@RandomBadgerRyan lol
TPleezy1 3 months ago
I am working on a book similar to the satanic verses, but more interesting...
MrWordlover 2 years ago
I was once told about the bear at the door. You are in a cabin somewhere in the Rockies. There is a great thumping knock. You open the door and there is a huge grissly. What do you do? Apparently this is an important question for the reader. What do you do about the immediate threat or what does your character do. The reader wants to know. Anyway this is what I came across ages ago when I first started writing...
VAMPIREBIRDIE 2 years ago
well since the bear knocked i would ask him or her in for some tea since it is obvious that the bear had intelligence to know that some one was there and be polite enough to knock so the least i could do was offer some tea then they start talking about what.. i dont know how does he like being hunted why dont he kill more humans he is a gigantic animal with awesome power and im rambling on............ . .. . .
viledischarge666 2 years ago
Well if you want a polite bear to have tea with you then you have got a polite bear to have tea with. He may not have been knocking as way of polite entry but that is up to you the writer. He may simply have been trying to break in to get to the honey or whatever. Yes, he could always kill more humans...Why not? He could start with you or your character.
VAMPIREBIRDIE 2 years ago
well he COULD try to kill the character, fail. or just kill that character if its not my main one but its a short story so that would not be fun to have it that short unless the main character is the bear who is tired of being hunted so he became the hunter or his or her cub was killed by this particular person and he was to knock polite so the person would not think its the bear. then again the person to answer the door could be a giant bee. and the bear was only going to ask for some honey
viledischarge666 2 years ago
Ah! The endless possibilities from a bear knocking on a door...No wonder some writing guides think its a good starting point. Keep going with it and you might find yourself with a short story...Good luck to you if this turns out to be the case...To me it sounds like you have only got your little toe wet so far in this rather deep lake of what can be done with a simple opening gambit.
VAMPIREBIRDIE 2 years ago
yup. never wrote a short story.. well in high school i did :) and the teacher if he is still there wanted to use it in his class for future reference o_O don't know if he does tho.
how about your self? have you written any stories lately and if so may i read them or some.
viledischarge666 2 years ago
I have a vampire collection of short stories out there- Undead Reb Down Under and a novel Disco Evil. They are available on filament and Amazon.
VAMPIREBIRDIE 2 years ago
very helpful thanks
NimraAhmed 2 years ago
I'm writing a novel based upon love and the afterlife. Its more than the generics I've given in the description.
BookCollector100 2 years ago
Is the title going to be 'Sex After Death'?
Who with and How, or is this just a venture into the spiritual side of life... um, I mean death?
I have many ideas, or I can generate ideas for a story, but I know my writing sucks. For example, some of my favorite shows have fallen flat, and have not gone where I expected: Heroes, Fringe (cringe), CSI, Medium, Babylon 5, and Buffy TVS. The last 2 were the greatest disappointment, as I had a much better ending in mind, but I could never write them.
EvolBob1 2 years ago
I am writing a novel and looking to see if people want to read sample chapters and give me feedback..
MrWordlover 2 years ago
I'll read it..
kaimonington 2 years ago
sure
SuperShadow74 2 years ago
send me it i'll give an honest report
ScalbionTerror 2 years ago
That would be great,
thoughtchallenge 2 years ago
he has really great advice and tips i am goin to ace english language this year
thank you
0003050 2 years ago
Nice :)
I'm currently writing a time travel based story.
Physics400 2 years ago
Thank you for the great advice.
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thepeacecat 2 years ago 2
THis is really cool and helpful.
Quick and easy :)
ilovetimeslikethis 2 years ago
David M. Harris
disneyprincess1994 2 years ago
Short stories, have an interesting character and situation. Start at a point, build to a climax quickly, then end the story fast.
ghostmanlostsoul 2 years ago
Thanks
alaninkarachi 2 years ago
Great tips I will really think about the intersections happening in the story Im writing. Thanks.
Bluntkingman 3 years ago
Short and sweet. Very helpful tips. Thanks!
wmada 3 years ago
3 days and im the virst comment and 30th view? this is very odd since your popular on youtube.
But this helped me out a little in my english class in highschool and i recommended it to my friends =)
Twoteka 3 years ago