You Are Mine (A Jacob and Renesmee Story) Ch.11

[Funbunny64]

JACOB GET UR BUTT OUT OF UT STINKIN BED AND FIGHT FOR UR IMPRINT I MEAN SERIOUSLY YOU'ILL GET LAZY IF U SIT AROUND OR SLEEP AND DO NOTHING AT ALL!?!?! BESIDES MOPING AROUND AND GIVING UP ON HOPE!?! GEZZ LOUISE DUDE! SOMEONE SLAP SOME SENSE IN HIM!?! (takes deep breath) ok i'm on team jacob so i can't be mad at him forever but still get up and find ur love! ........ :) :D ;) ;D =D 8) <3

[Kcleveland24]

Jacob Whatever your midle name is BLACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If u don't get off your furry but and go find nessie i promise i will hunt u down and yell at u until u go and find her!!!!!!!!!! I probaly sounded like a complete freakazoid at that part but who could balme me i am freaking MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~

[XXPunkXXPrincessXX4]

qrrrrrr! arqh! i hope they frikin rip Kyle to shreds nd burn hem!.. heh heh. a bit to harsh. but if they do. PLZZZ DO NOT i mean DO NOT brinq hem back! lmao. jk jk. but seriously dnt...

[GIRLZROC219]

1 the pack will go over there see nessie in kyle's arms leah will growl and idk what else 2 he is not going to get her because he knows she loves the other dude and it's just dumb trying

[rose15079]

1. They will go talk to her and explain whats going on with jake and mabey she will love him again and go back to him.

2. He hasn't gone back because his heart is broken and Renesmee is his everything and without her he has nothing. He thinks she dosen't love him but deep down she dose love him but kyle is just brain washing her.

IF YOU LOVE HER THEN GET UP AND FIGHT FOR HER !!!!!!!!!

[400yellowjello]

1. oh crap. the wolf pack is about to become PIRATES!!!

2. because hes stupid. GO GET HER YOU IDIOT!

[awsomerosegirl]

its been like 5 mounths NEXT

[16forthecar]

Very good...I think its a little far-fetched that jacob would just let her go like that without a fight though.

[MrsNickJonas123100]

post soon please!!! you are an amazing writer!!!

[MrsCoolbeans24]

renesmee2 i feel the same way when my crush is out of school i feel like my heart is bieng twisted and stabbed with a knife

[Ranesmeevamp]

1) they gonna attack Kyle and steal Ness back cus dey love Jake 2) beacuse he thnks she doesnt love him anymore and if you dont have your imprint anymore you die i feel dead and like i was a wolf i imprinted and he moved to arizona when i needed him the most yes thts right the 1st day of school! now im without my "imprint or watever it feels like" wich every day my heart breaks and i get stabbed with a million knives when i wake up knowing ill never see him again true story

[MrsNickJonas123100]

sad..

[supernaturalover1]

when r u going to put the next one????????

[kookoo4koko1]

wheres the next one?!

[shellz94]

please post more

[LocNessXO]

Next One plz!!!!

[BellaLeyva]

WHERE IS THE NEXT ONE!?!?!?!

[calbtt]

ugh i know im in 8th too i almost failed 4 of my classes but i pulled them up last minute and boys are part of the reason i was failing! haha anyways not to pressure u but please hurry this story is amazing and im really looking forward to the next one :)

[endraka]

I HAVE BEEN WAITING 4 THIS 4EVER!!!!!

[dollarglamorous]

love it

[aaBLUE23]

pft. i'd want jacob. hahahahahahaahhaha tee hee :)

[twilightminime8]

finally!!! that was very good, nore PLEASE!!!

[surgarbabe96]

she doesn't really love kyle its just his power, why is jacob giving up, can't wait for the next one

[LUVTOTALKLOL]

becuase jake thinks that renesmee is happy with kyle anddosent want to interuped( i guess you can say)her happyness

[clublokez]

Omgosh Meghan it's about time....and you know you just told about a thousand people what grade your in right:)

[treehugger400]

aw....KYLE'S A BITCH!!!

[endraka]

I agree!!!!!!!!!

[sqrll15]

awsome more please

[KliaMagista]

yay Ch.11! Cool one!