When You're Feeling Down - Byron

[mahalia999]

its really good just try to make it smoother and then it'll be amazing

[KuvaPefo]

Needs a little work to make it smoother but it is awesome! Never quit, you got it man! <3 Very nice! I think many people can relate to the lyrics.

[BiggGomezz]

glad u sent me this man shits madd! tight words only thing i'd suggest is what DXB231 said. peace and love

[DMZrapper]

sick bro you av tallent keep it up bro ;)

[LukeWhitaker]

rocknroll bro

[DXB321]

u need to follow up on yo beat alot of rappers come out with a beat that follow up with there voice work on that n hit me up peace

[DXB321]

You need 2 work on following up on the beat alot of rapper's come up with beat's that follow up on their voice that's what u need to work on find a beat that work's with yo voice n hit me back up peace.

[DXB321]

You need 2 work on following up on the beat alot of rapper's come up with beat's that follow up on their voice that's what u need to work on find a beat that work's with yo voice n hit me back up peace.

[2203442]

so sick bro...*Thumbs Up*

[sumppl]

Good one thanks for sending it. Ever think of getting a video made and you are near Kentucky or Tennessee hit me up.

[gamehead91]

Nice to see positive lyrics In a rap song. Great song Keep it up.

[nickman8559]

respect

[Traydox1]

Damn, I'm a Rock fan, but this is fuckin nice man.

[la2ma05]

hey man i love the rap and if u ever nead any help with righting raps just let me know ill right u some and if me and my homie go enyware in rap ill look u up

[8StringGuitar]

I like it, it reminds me of good 90's hip hop.

[Nike4now]

its

 dope

[hawaiianballa95]

dis rap is nice,keep rapping bruh

[ChoButterflys]

nice job *thumbs up*

[stephanieroxx101]

its awsome

[lovemusic548]

nice joint

[505mikey]

nice kinda like the old eminem

[LiitleStef]

nice

[BrokenAndTheBest]

yo, diz remindz me uv old skewl rap, ii lyke it alot, ur flow iz maaad sikk.

[kozymusic]

sick man. seriously...

[tanyathedivine]

Nice

[karl221221]

this is awesome ! keep it up

[MultiSkins4life]

not bad man, keep it up, i like it

[anthrocrane]

Awesomely done!

[MrWillierocks]

This Is Really Awesome.

[AlmightyBryan]

Hey, this is really good dude. Keep it going !

[Khanniewski]

man this is really good, keep it up. great lyrics + dope flow. you asked me for some constructive criticism but it's hard to come up with criticism for such a sick track. i guess my one piece of advice would be to try incorporating more multis into your lyrics. dont get me wrong the lyrics are great — unlike a lot of rap they actually have a message — i just think getting a bit more complex with your rhyme schemes would make it that much doper to listen to. hope that helps. great work keep it up

[loli2559]

bro nothing else to say just dope as hell great job man

[hotstylinkid]

damn nigga this shits good. i like the lyrics. they arnt just words they actually mean sumthin. so keep it up man

[FuseBaumProductionz]

Really good song man, You got a good voice, and good lyrics, keep it up ^_^

[lebronjamesgd23]

Great song. Keep up the good work.

[paramorehotel16]

I reeeaaaaaaaaalllly like the Lyricsss !!!!! xDDDDDDD GREAAAT JOB!!!!!!!

[wesaved101]

cool good voice nice lyrics

[uralumkinman]

cool cool

[UserSylvia]

wow, the lyrics and your message are just great. i think, i feel you.

[RJ225Falcons]

Man those lyrics are so real dude real talk great song dude

[DumbMoneyRecords]

really great lyrics and decent flow. But mad nice story.

[TheWannabeRANGER]

Great lyrics, you just need to work on your flow.

[FinalFreakFantasyXX]

It's gotta nice feel to it. Sincerely, I like this one the best so far.

[spynation10]

nice cool

[pinoyaa]

ur flows okay but i like it

lyrics are true and i like the beat

favortied and thumbs up :D

[tUiDo4]

its good it speaks bou the truth in most people lives and it speaks to u so its a good song bt the flow just need a lil work cuz in da begining it sounded kinda weird bt bsides dat its gud..keep on making songs!! :)))

[Asgangsta12]

i like the message and lyrics..good job..flow needs a little work though..dont stop makin music keep doing it..peace

[PufflepwnTV]

Good job, BUT u need to work on ur flow

[GanjaClaus]

nice flow, cool beats and nice message.

thumbs up!

[MrRockets84]

Thats nice man, need to work on ya flow a bit tho

[Ryan2142]

That's pretty fun. Keep on going with it. =]

[yxrcbszg]

Kick ass song mate

[BalboaFlowa2010]

your timing sounds right the flow aint bad its good homey just keep practicing and youll naturally get better

[sexipimpin96]

hey byron umm, imma juss keep it real with u itz gud itz juss that like tha beat goes with tha song but, i think itz plan juss like step out the box a little more because u are almost their, and juss be ui no a little more like umm rowdy like umm drake but not to rowdy...lol but otha then that i like it u did a gud job

[MegaMano69]

wow really its a nice song

[vanessa2270]

:) good job liked it like the lyrics

[laxxman101]

hey byron. i thought this was pretty good! the only thing i could give u advise one, is maybe changing the tempo up here and there just because it gets a little boring and it just sounds like ur talking. know what i mean? hope this helps and good luck with ur work to come!

[flame444444]

he doesnt suck you douchebag!!! sure hes not the best rapper but hes a hell of alot better then other people.listen to the damn lyrics

[letsshoot]

it is alright, keep on going :)

[openmindcritic]

the first part of the songs is JUST,SIMPLY,ME..........Byron.­..ur amazin ....

[DeceptiveSTAR]

Byron sucks. Sorry, but he really does.

[TheBigEyedBunny]

@DeceptiveSTAR shut up biatch