this borrowed style of pointless rises/drops in his voice &same manufactured passion & store-bought flow. I can't even listen to his message. I Can't get past the unoriginal style. I traveled here & a poet said he's a really great poet. When she said that & gave his name I was hoping "I hope he doesn't sound just like all the other 'great' poets that people have referred me to around the nation. They all sound like the exact same person." I'm so disappointed to hear this yet again...
damn ..............deep shyt
triggahhappy137 3 months ago
powerful, amazing. made a new fan today
ukejohnsteel 6 months ago
this is awkward
Sirkill9alot 7 months ago
man wow
danyguz25 8 months ago
chills forreal..
((gives it up))
757coop 8 months ago
this is my life
melikeschickenbakes 10 months ago
notice the one dislike obviously the ex
Richinbk44 10 months ago 12
this guy is my hero, all of his poems just have so much emotion and heart it is really inspiring.
packerfan9229 11 months ago
This man is a romantic genius.
veeteeee 11 months ago
I Want The Lyrics So I Can Say This To My Cheating Ex. Lls
drdre7191 11 months ago
who disliked this ? are you crazy ?? oh wait ... you must be the person he's writing about
ladybugglove 1 year ago 18
One word.
WOW.
shakesmhe14 1 year ago
God.
iThink I'm in LOVE WITH HIM. lol. He's so amazing. It just breaks my heart.
As a writer, he is a total inspiration to me.
QueenBee2314 1 year ago
i love his poem
he is one of my favorite poets
Agee2Kayute4U 1 year ago
i love his peoms. he is my favorite poet.
Agee2Kayute4U 1 year ago
when he says "i was good to you",especially in the way he did it in,gets me everytime!
mrfreddylaw 1 year ago 4
TEN TEN TEN TEN
angelk002 1 year ago 5
and this is why you should never treat a dude wrong
FilipinoyC 1 year ago 2
WHOA!! @00:34
baudbwoy 1 year ago
he bared all i love it ill make it better rudy lol
eloracsregor123 1 year ago
Absolutely beautiful!
onyi48 1 year ago
"An orchid smile, you gorgeous earthquake" <3
islandpunchhh 1 year ago 5
gives me goddamn shivers...
oliviaoliviaoliviaaa 1 year ago
I was here in person for this and I still can't get over how much this poem blows me away
dorzimm 1 year ago
this borrowed style of pointless rises/drops in his voice &same manufactured passion & store-bought flow. I can't even listen to his message. I Can't get past the unoriginal style. I traveled here & a poet said he's a really great poet. When she said that & gave his name I was hoping "I hope he doesn't sound just like all the other 'great' poets that people have referred me to around the nation. They all sound like the exact same person." I'm so disappointed to hear this yet again...
checkersrapcat 1 year ago
@checkersrapcat His lyricism is really dope though. A good poet that I like is Shihan.
ExpressToPhresh 1 year ago
@ExpressToPhresh agreed on Shihan. Poetri is a good example of a great poet too.
checkersrapcat 1 year ago
RUDY MAN! I HAVE TO WATCH THIS EVERY MONTH OR SO JUST TO REUP ON GREATNESS!!! RUDY YOU ARE TRULY A POWERFUL WORDSMITH.
iceberginbmore 1 year ago
that's passion.
asianbitchh 1 year ago
WOW...
drewdachoklit1 1 year ago
omg sooo deep
TheRound2 1 year ago
This shit gets me everytime i listen to it!!!! Beautiful
Indypooh20 1 year ago
he always does the same poem but it is still good lol
Robby818 1 year ago
one of the best poems i've heard ever!
candacefornia 1 year ago
most amazing poet i have seen in my life. the end.
MissMaronita 1 year ago
wow... this man made my heart hurt. so beautiful!
lbow05 1 year ago 39
Damn, this is. Amazing.
NateDaawgy 1 year ago
I've listened to this poem....More than 50 Xtimes.... I love it
MrDeeXnuts 1 year ago 76
@MrDeeXnuts same i put it on my mp3
poet1111 1 year ago
@MrDeeXnuts i do too!!! this piece is crazy!!!!
iceberginbmore 1 year ago
fantastic!!!
charlottepoet 2 years ago
This was a stellar performance right here....I can write my butt off but for the life of my I can't get the performance right...in due time.
MrDeeXnuts 2 years ago
@MrDeeXnuts Keep workin' homie! I can get the performance but the writing isn't the strongest.
manof34holds 1 year ago
ah, my god, this was my favorite poem at inkslam. it kills me.
ZombieCity 2 years ago