Planet Chaos Episode 2 (Halo 3 Machinima)

[901blades]

i am legend

cloverfield

and 28 days later

[Gameomg]

This looks like a mix of Resident Evil 2 and 28 Days later

[putuinafreezer]

is there a third on yet????

[clinmaan]

when ur screaming then scream and dont make that sound u do

[cowboybeepbop1]

you guys dont make another i will kill you alll ;)

[aidinmoh97]

ans I'll help you :)

[echo834]

ha paint job changes from 1 -2

[randomgalore]

Much better then the last one!

[sage2343]

stop pretnding to yell and just do it

[beep1234567891011]

The problem is, when you yell sometimes mics have sound caps. If it's too loud, they either make it really quiet, or just don't pick it up.

[Zombienator1010]

cant wait till episode three it has resident evil style to it but AWESOME!

[handspiker1994]

I am legend much??

[plsdontsue631]

i am legend has like 1 serviver

[veetfeet0]

whispering much...

[InfinityDEX]

They keep whispering into the microphone

[Jecar0830]

not bad

[MrAdan961]

are u blind ,its not red its white

[DivinityBadger]

You fail.

[Sto0pidPenguinPro]

the red spartan's shoulder pad color changed from episode 1. now its yellow

[ZackNeville]

its good...but everyone is mono tone

[7351287]

make episode 3

[paro1973]

episode 3!

[Advandnaruto]

voice acting needs more voice try and use ur original voice, it might sound better

[Fallout3Master1000]

good story, bad voice acting

[DijDoj]

its kinda random that the force field keeping the zombie prisoner just shut off without seeing the zombie do shit to any wiring or anything...

and yes there was bad voice acting

[Dalton36Ben11Brady10]

make episode 3

[Boomstik1123]

a bit of advice for voice acting guys if you have to yell in the script yell in real life. ex when u guys are in the warthog it doesnt seem believeable when you half yell...

[jetplayer77]

seems its like the movie 28 days later

[OverFuryAndTheFire]

lol get better voices the voices is crap but the rest is awsome

[Dachera]

DAMN CLIFF HANGERS!!!

[MrFunnies45]

ya more emotion

[01lduff]

do more plz

[d4rkfe4r]

lol i'm intrieged... hurry up cuz i wonna know wah happens lol

[Peter4101]

Its based on a movie, i've seen, (dont rembmer the name though) but only the end, at least this kinda fills in some of the blanks.

[d4rkfe4r]

mmmhmmmm ^^

[fofogogo23]

maybe cloverfeild? or i am legend?

[Peter4101]

No, i think it was called mars but i'm not sure sence there were alot of movies that had to do with something like this. Its sorta a zombie movie on mars. But the name still dosen't come to mind.

[d4rkfe4r]

its gd buh like the other guy sed, u cud puh more emotion in the vioces. Aslo when u shout, actua;;y shout, dnt whisper shout... makes it sound gay lol

[111Dallar111]

try to put more emotion into the voices

[ih8no3bz]

NICE

[gunner210]

You can't really do much good voice acting on a computer mic, so give 'em a break. The movies are good, splendid even.

[RogueAssassin18]

charging up my pounce damage

[captainSnapper2052]

voices sound the same. work on them ALOT!!sorry if i mispelled that last word.Otherwise good plot and story line. Keep it up.

[DetoxFmL]

Not even judging the rest.Just the trying-not-to-be-loud screaming just makes this video retarded

[F0RTYS1X]

It seems kind of rushed and it not as good as the first

[MELONHEAD13B]

Best acting ever.

[kittyfallout]

Seems Machinima is not filtering it's videos, shits floating through all the time now.

[chulo113]

seems machinima is not filtering it's videos, shit get through all the time now.

[oDANGANYTHANGELSEo]

voices...

like yelling with your mic turned all the way down

[winkoman3]

very unconvincing voices

[FrozenKFire12]

swich the side wepons to pistols or plasma pistols cuz needlers are bullshit

talk LOUDER

[SeanGamerNerd]

Boo, sux0rs.

[baia333]

corn..........................­.i think mars should have been africa cause mars has no water and it looks more like africa

[shnozt]

brown aliens?

needler as a side weapon?

retarded forges?

very impressive

[daveyboy8933]

aw man ders a rud block upahead!!!! lol sounded retarded? why were you whisper/yelling?

[karismusicws]

wow, this is great, sick voice acting and storyline. can't wait for episode 3

[xMETALHEADx124]

hahahaha lol great voice acting! ...not...

[romansrule3]

try shouting not whispering XD "you better start now! GAHH!" lol need better voice acting

[PhreakieVideos]

...err...

dude you really need too work on your voice acting, plus the logic behind the scenery. why the hell get in a hog when you can get a full blown tank O.O"

[rokin75]

go watch digital pheers guide (the part about YELLING AND NOT whisper yelling)

[gamerjoe22]

the voice acting sucks

[ImmortalHDFilms]

Yea, I'll be honest. Most of you already were in 90% of the comments lol. I didn't try as hard as I could've/should've and thats my fault. I'll attempt to improve on my mistakes and thanks to everybody who was willing to post up a somewhat decent advice.

-Immortal HD

[ImmortalHDFilms]

P.S. Yes, spelling mistakes suck. And the remove button doesn't make the situation any better.

[Rixo2256]

When is Episode 3 coming out? I enjoyed this.

[DoubleMoonz]

Pretty sweet... but it sounds like you're whispering... I had the same problem with my machinima :P

[RiffzoneHalo1]

needs more music

[malicestories]

bad acting

[teamsypgear7]

good plot but get better voice acting...

[hournet562]

shit voice acting, fail at being dramatic.

[coolcory20]

i agree... needs definate improvement!

but on the other hand, i LOVE the storyline and i cant wait for more 4/5

[notintodowithourtime]

nice road block

[runescaperoks123]

sweet cant wait for more!

[1Bond30]

bored me to death lol

[nickjoannides]

i never knew when you're scared you don't raise your voice

[XxGuuGuuBunnyxX]

uh was the acting SUPPOSED to be horrible? cuz thats how bad it was

[foobloo101]

three words. I AM GAY!

[0pacella0]

a little part of me just died inside, i didnt know this level of boredom existed =[

[Ag3ntW1nd3x]

lol bad acting

[Deetz2008]

vocies acting bad the only thing tho that i liked was the directing

[Dark94Flame]

Awful. Just awful.

Music: Bad

Voice Acting: Painful

Needs a lot of improvement.

[HappyHurpesPro]

The machinima was ok, but if you guys are wanting to do scenes where you're yelling or need to raise your voice, then fucking do so or dont do the scene because that was like the worst part of the machinima and its your most important role. 2/5

[emopinata]

Halofield!

[goatesque]

I think you should certainly take on board what people are saying about the Voice acting - you need to be able to raise your voice if thats what the part demands! Really promising Machinima though :)

[club00]

Stop pretend shouting just go tell ur mom u are filming!!!<---real shouting

[DeathTh]

This is a decent Machinima, it's only huge flaw is the voice quality and the voice actors. When you say a line, you really need to get into it, and not just talk in a calm voice, you need to actually scream. If someone's around you like a friend or a parent just explain to them that you're voicing in a movie and you need to make it sound excellent, and if they still don't understand then fuck 'em, scream anyway.

[obrocolli94]

could have been good if people didnt sound high

[BigAlzo]

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz the voice are really putting me asleep

[vanquish500]

that was shit way to ruin the action affect with your pretend shouting if you want to do it right u need to actully YELL IN THE MIKE

[smartguy301]

good but bad voice acting

[gaarakillsbarney]

ok in the beggining it sounded fucked up but after that it was good but the machinama is great :D

[36Onba]

that was good but the voice acting needs help

[BodyX93]

man its just sound gay with the smooth voice ???? aint machinima rule if you wanna shout just shot ??? should improvice this man.... XD

[Bl1ndcut]

i actually thought this was pretty good

[Zammys0nly]

LOL.

[PisTolDuDe]

im sry but this wasent that good

[CannibalDucklingPro]

Note to the Producer: If your characters suposed to shout, SHOUT! Dont' shout softly because it sounds gay. I mean that's one of the main rules of making a machinima with talking in it.

[elpato1009]

lol, you need to get a studio, because its obvious that this has been done in some place you don't feel comfortable shouting, or showing real emotion in your voice, get alone, and don't be embarrassed to get yourself in the moment and really feel it, it will greatly improve your voice acting.

[Blazz147]

good music,good acting but the voice acting was terrible

and thats all it takes to ruin a machinima

[Exiledstriker]

This was really good! I was waiting for the next ep to come along. Anyway, the voice acting a bit better than before. Needs some more work. Other than that, awesome jobz!

[gn1t3]

it was alright, but the voice acting needs some improvement.

[69jackyboy69]

this was pretty good havnt seen a good machinima in ages

[DevilBringer08]

bad dialog

[randompieproductions]

why needlers? need better cooler weapons like ummmmmmmmm br

[corpral]

Dialog could have been a-LOT better

[jubjub250]

if your going to yell actully yell... you sound really gay lol

[TheGirlsAtTheShack]

sounded like they're 12 and lowered the pitch or something...

[AreaEightySix]

Lol unintentional high comedy.

[lostMachinima]

Voice acting was terrible, and the plot sucks. 2

[Ro0sterProductions]

You really need to fix the voice acting, but I kinda like it.

[Mrdickens2]

I agree

[chetownboy]

pretty sweet

[tbrbraindawgs]

gay

[Tovvok]

omgz floodz

[Tovvok]

yea i thought it was ok just work on the voice over whisper screaming is a bad idea and guys! fucking cool down lets see u do better!

[kittyfallout]

I make machinima and since im young and my voice is very high pitched and annoying I use comedy to get through this problem but since you have a voice of a 14 year old regular XBL payer voice, serious machinima will not be your special, stick with comedy if not then you can fail.

[flyingninjamonkeys]

this machinima would be a LOT better if you improved on the voice acting, they just sound like they have no emotion.

[sparton1199]

you better leanr how to use starting now? fucking terrible, your shit is terrible who ever made this, your stands for are to low to apeal to anythink forseable, dont make any more shit. constructive critism done.

[DetoxFmL]

DO NOT whisper scream and improve the voice acting.Its bad enough that you should stop everything your working on and REMAKE these and your machinima will be given a serious chance.

[5dsigner]

i luv that hayabusa armor soo much

[Chaotic641]

NOT GOOD ENOUGH

[xXxXAneurysmXxXx]

Ok series, but maybe want to ante up on the voice acting, maybe like yelling or shouting that could contribute to the series.

[LordCorinth]

i ran into a similar problem with sound quality back when i started; i use sony vegas and found a decible meter on the controls and cranked it up. also, more enthusiasm with the voicework, and maybe another engine besides halo if you can hack it.... i think my stuff is proof that watchable machinima can be made from just about any engine....

[ITriple3HelixI]

Don't be pussy about screming...

GAH[Whispering]

Actually yell...

[zander11893]

i dont understand why the zombie had an evil laugh. i mean, if they're supposed to be mindless, then how can they find something funny?

[thebigcheese1122]

ahit voice acting and the roadblock was soooo weak. oh shit road block! ah well we'll drive streight through, no big deal.

[skateit7]

hahaha i loved it 5*

[Rocketman845]

Sorry, I can't just keep up with this series. Its good and all, but your missing key elements like sound. I'll watch it when I hear it gets better.

[Chocolate6mac8]

The Voice Acting was fukn HIlarious itself ! sounded like my lil brother playn with his action figures using his inside voice ! Should check out DigitalPh33rs machinima making tips ! Get some pointers !

[ABNormalVisuals]

MORE ENTHUSIASM, the voices sound like my mom when she's sick, also, screw the needlers, make them plasma pistols

[Exotic47]

you fanboys are making me give up on gaming

[Noobzor110]

ahahahahahahaha there whispering so it it just sounds so fackin fake this shits hilarious

[TheSickness055]

Lying my way from you, I wanna be pushed aside so let me go, let me take back my life, I'd rather be all alone anywhere on my own cause i can say that the the very worst part of you is me.

[haru010203]

i like this story and just talk a little louder and what were they thinking you never capture one of the zombies for study you kill them

[smillyxD]

speak up louder ur being to quiet

[XDarknessX2]

i know evry one likes videos whit better voice acting

But these are his 1 and 2 videos..

i think.

but It not his fault he will learn how to be a great machinima video maker and his voice acting WILL change he will get better and his videos will too :D

[ZabeSilverman]

needs better voice acting and why does everybody have needlers?

[Trukillaog]

ok story line is good seems like 28 days later but anyways, fix the vioce ur actors really need to so more emotion and actually act instead of just saying their lines ok

[xXdrunkensumoXx]

Alright, I was being generous on your first one but seriously you need to learn how to scream for real when your acting

[FraserAidan]

they don't want to because they will sound like girls XD

[MELONHEAD13B]

How can that be on Mars? There's plant life everywhere and has atmosphere!

[JoseGarcai]

voice was bad but good idea i couldnt do any better so i cant really say anything bad =P

[Rebornpp]

wow.... This video sucks ass! if you're gonna yell, actually yell, don't fake yell, it sounds soooooooooo retarded. Do you actually fake yell in real life!

[buttersownsuall]

it's ok but needs A LOT better voice acting. watch digitalph33rs guide on machinima making. In one he mentioned to "not be a pussy and scream softly into the mic. just yell into it" that's the only problem you guys have. your yelling and acting need work

[DreamsForNightmares]

its not bad, i liked it but you REALLY need to do better voice acting

[xXChikenNoodleSoopXx]

beside all that is a room with no privacy and it takes 1 guy with a bunch of annoying friends to ruin it im reffering to the scorpions warthogs and everything else

[TuzoidCT]

the voice acting ruined it

[Landonzzz]

damn that was bad voice acting, i stopped watching at 1:10 it sucked so bad!

[alecjohnson16]

hence the name, bad idea productions. this is a bad idea, stop attempting machinima

[TaoProductions]

YOU SUCK AT VOICE ACTING.

[GuiltyForVandalism]

ahh kill me u guys where whispering into the mic for god sakes

[fuzysocer044]

it's not that bad i mean it is made by a person thats new to making machinima it even says that on the first episode T.T

[GEEKinLyfe]

horrible voice acting

[maniacboyz7]

umm...

the voice is relly bad..

and idk..

but its better then anything i wuld ever do...

[goguu]

Bad Idea Productions I think so making machinima is a bad idea for you guys.

[miguelito051]

ah ha nice one

[crystalotk]

gayest shit ever... waste of my life... someone plz shoot me.

[cryptomatic7]

how the fuck did this get on machinima?

[kirdook]

sorry couldn't believe it. 4/5

[Sla2k8]

guys honestly that was bad.BUT why not watch DigitalPh33rs guide to making Halo 3 Machinima it will be a great help for you,besides the filming wasnt too bad.3 outa 5!

[officerpoopnard]

worst....thing......i've ever seen

[Will301]

Wow. The voice acting sucks. xD

[ExiaGundam19]

Did anybody notice that the voice acting was better in the first one

[residentsk8ter78]

That was so shitty...it was funny.

[Chickenbranches]

complete..............utter...­.............SHIT!

[indianacheckers]

boring....

[Pincussion98]

crap voice acting

[TheOriginalimKill]

hooray for whisper yelling and plots with more holes than swiss cheese! *cough cough* not.

[D636A6D]

voice acting could use some work. Other then that great job!

[Ninjaezer]

next time SCREEEEEAAAAMMMM!!!!! remember its ALIANS. What would u do if you was a real alian? Dont say "OMG nooo -_-". Say "OMGGGG NOOOOOOO xO!!!"

[Davidz555]

are they whisper screaming thats just horrible voice acting

[CirqueDuCloud]

LOL Who caught the Predator reference?

lol i like it