Wow you've changed. I know this, because I can hear it in your poetry. Not so sweet and syrupy, eager to please and self deprecating... now you are writing for yourself, experimenting with word and form and finding your own voice.
I liked the second poem best, it had a rhythm to it, the words kind of tumbled out.
well done!
aspokenpoetsverse 1 month ago
Wow you've changed. I know this, because I can hear it in your poetry. Not so sweet and syrupy, eager to please and self deprecating... now you are writing for yourself, experimenting with word and form and finding your own voice.
I liked the second poem best, it had a rhythm to it, the words kind of tumbled out.
Take care
Life is good
Love, Peter
nordicsky 1 month ago
Big grin..
mcmal1bu 1 month ago