Hey that was great!!! Kind of sappy.... but, that's pretty much what the Federation is anyway. I half expected there to be a nod to the Prime Directive. Perhaps it's in another verse!
Valid observation about the anthem and then battles. However, keep in mind that though the federation wishes to maintain peaceful relations with all races as well as to avoid war through diplomacy you must still remember that the federation and especially starfleet is NOT a pacifist organization. They like to avoid war but will fight to the last man to defend the federation against any agressors. So far, they have had stellar success with this. Borg, Dominion, Etc defeated and humiliated.
@jkeelsnc I appreciate your comments, but my lyrics never imply pacifism. How else would space-faring sentient beings lend aid, to others who yearn for peace, except by helping them repel aggressors?
@spam1138 Actually, I planned on making a new recording with my wife singing it. Sort of an homage to the soprano that sang the opening theme song in the original.
I think the german national hymn (post war/45), the new one would be the best match for it. The melody is great, but not coming from the drinking song like the american hymn, not so pomp like many others and the lyrics could easiely match the principles of the federation, not so bongstoned like the stars and striples or country overloving like the french or others...in fact the lyrics kind of match already, but the german ones are more peaceful and wise, not the useless kind of patriotism.
@SvenStadt Why do you comment against him. I think it was a splendid job well done. it goes with the tone, and the meaning of the United Federation of Planets agenda.
Federation National Anthem lyrics in Chinese: (Translated by Chenyang Li aka MsJasnine - this one actually rhymes) 行星合众联邦国歌 让我们手牵起手在星际之间, 和谐的兄弟们,一起为信仰而战; 不同的世界,众多的语言,都在唱这同一首歌, 联合起来的和平,我们的祖国一定会强大! 助人为乐是我们星际文明的原则, 向一切向往和平的智慧生物敞开胸怀; 平等外交是我国的信念, 向着宇宙深处出发吧,伟大的星联!
I think that the lyrics are fine, as fan fiction goes. There is however, a significant dissonance between the visuals and what is being sung (i.e. Koombaya lyrics with boom-bye-yeah! visuals).
@ZedemMonk - Of course, considering that those ships are attacking the Borg, their mission in the footage shown is very much pro-freedom. Anything that tries to take away the individual's right to think freely and be a sovereign individual is a direct threat to true peace. In any case, good work & video!
The rhyme scheme he chose is "aabb," which means that the first and second lines rhyme with each other, and the third and fourth lines rhyme with each other. "Prevail" doesn't rhyme with "hands," "stand," or "song," so it doesn't work.
hey dumb fuck... most leaps in technology today were inspired by Star Trek... also why are you on a trek site, let me guess, because you have no life and go around other sites just bad mouthing them? you my friend are the equivalent to what people classify a retard to be...
think the Federation was ball-less before...but think about it...they kicked Dominion's ass,Borg's ass and who knows how many asses in Delta Quadrant when Voyager was there lol think there is hope for them yet
Hi, I really like this anthem and so tried to compose some words that would go with it for my uni in the UK for a bit of fun, comments welcome. Just 1 verse though
If one can sing it properly, it might actually be a good anthem... but I guess that poem of Schiller Ode an die Freude, the actual hymn of the European Union, fits better.
HUZZAAH! UFP FTW!! One question tho, is there gonna be another star trek series? I know they are working on the movie now and not working on anything new, but there is so much potential! Will star trek live on?
Although the premise seems sound, I don't think the UFP would put lyrics to their anthem. Being very liberal, they probably wouldn't want anything to hint "speciocentricity"
That's why the lyrics refer to any Sentient life form that has Warp Technology. That would even include protoplasmic space blobs and rock-beings. :-D Plus, with the universal translator, who's to say the lyrics were even originally in English? :-D
Does anyone else appreciate that while the lyrics are talking about diplomacy and peace, the video shows a battle going on... kinda opposite to diplomacy and peace, yes?
This is extremely amazing.Starfleet and The United Federation Of Planets would be proud.The United Nations should listen to this and catch a hint(if you know what I mean).Amazing extremely amazing I would try to remember this when I am serving in Starfleet on USS-NCC-1701-D-Enterprise.
hahahahaha
singing about peace and diplomacy but background video is about federation ships firing weapons
JetAge96 2 weeks ago
It was totally awesome
madlegominecrafter 3 weeks ago
Hey that was great!!! Kind of sappy.... but, that's pretty much what the Federation is anyway. I half expected there to be a nod to the Prime Directive. Perhaps it's in another verse!
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Valid observation about the anthem and then battles. However, keep in mind that though the federation wishes to maintain peaceful relations with all races as well as to avoid war through diplomacy you must still remember that the federation and especially starfleet is NOT a pacifist organization. They like to avoid war but will fight to the last man to defend the federation against any agressors. So far, they have had stellar success with this. Borg, Dominion, Etc defeated and humiliated.
jkeelsnc 7 months ago
@jkeelsnc I appreciate your comments, but my lyrics never imply pacifism. How else would space-faring sentient beings lend aid, to others who yearn for peace, except by helping them repel aggressors?
techraan 7 months ago
This is great. But if you somehow manage to make it more orchestra/choir kinda sounding it will be epic!
HoukaiBG 7 months ago
Best fucking song ever those 13 dislike can go fuck themselves!
PofC123 8 months ago 3
@PofC123 Thank you very much!
techraan 8 months ago
Wow! How cute is that!! I love all the trekkies, you always make my day, always! :D Hahahaha!
liketheuniverse11 8 months ago
Nice! :D
liketheuniverse11 1 year ago
do you have a MP3 of this?
spam1138 1 year ago
@spam1138 Actually, I planned on making a new recording with my wife singing it. Sort of an homage to the soprano that sang the opening theme song in the original.
techraan 1 year ago
@techraan Written during the siege of AR-558 Source records Federation Army
THE BLUE FLAG
Soaring above the blue flag fly’s
Uniting one and all, for you we strive!
Knowledge, Peace and law dust this, the blue flag fly for!
To those who do wish us ill
Look not our flag, its light shine still!
Thou we may give our all, know this
Scorched the blue flag still soars!!!
UKOGBN 1 year ago
@UKOGBN Perhaps Techraan's lyrics could be a different verse? Or the lyrics used in peace time? Even the Star-Spangled Banner has multiple verses. :)
rjpugh 9 months ago
Dude, I seriously LOVE that!! Awesome work!
don312000 1 year ago
I think the lyrics hit home. I think you're on to something. Just need to get Paramount and Star Trek on board with it. It goes great with the music.
hldjr73 1 year ago
beautiful, I think!
thank you :)
Eliman18 1 year ago
I think the german national hymn (post war/45), the new one would be the best match for it. The melody is great, but not coming from the drinking song like the american hymn, not so pomp like many others and the lyrics could easiely match the principles of the federation, not so bongstoned like the stars and striples or country overloving like the french or others...in fact the lyrics kind of match already, but the german ones are more peaceful and wise, not the useless kind of patriotism.
io1011001 1 year ago
Nice job!
veracastle9 1 year ago
You, sir, are awesome!
TouchdownPossum 1 year ago
Nice try dork! hahahahahaha neeeeerd!!!!
SvenStadt 1 year ago
@SvenStadt Why do you comment against him. I think it was a splendid job well done. it goes with the tone, and the meaning of the United Federation of Planets agenda.
hldjr73 1 year ago
The lyrics actually make sense. Well done man
AuburnAttack21 1 year ago
我是美國白種人,但我以前住在台灣。我會講普通話。非常感謝你翻譯我的星際旅行國歌歌詞!
techraan 1 year ago
MsJasnine 1 year ago 7
Teraya Kaunshuk t'Ek'tralar!
United Federation of Planets!
Teraya Kaunshuk t'Ek'tralar = [United Federation of Planets]
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MsJasnine 1 year ago
U'stukh sular, etek kal-tor mamut,
As space-faring sentients, we lend aid,
U' = [as, as a]
stukh = [space, outer space, stellar]
sular = [people, race, nation]
etek = [we]
kal-tor = [let, allow]
mamut = [aid]
MsJasnine 1 year ago
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Kr'trkkla karik-tor k'kaunsh'es, etek dungau-karik!
Peace bolstered by unity, we shall be strong!
Kr'trkkla = [peace]
karik-tor = [strengthen]
k' = [by]
kaunsh'es = [unity]
etek = [we]
dungau- = [shall]
nam-tor = [to be, exist]
karik = [strong]
MsJasnine 1 year ago
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Sa-kai svi' kril'es, etek nem-tor noshau;
Brothers in harmony, we take a stand;
Sa-kai = [Brother]
svi' = [amongst, in]
kril'es = [harmony]
etek = [we]
nem-tor = [take]
noshau = [stand]
MsJasnine 1 year ago
Svi'yel etek ek'terau el'ru,
Among the stars we all join hands,
Svi' = [Amongst, in]
yel = [star]
etek = [we]
ek' = [all, all of]
terau = [join together]
el'ru = [hand]
MsJasnine 1 year ago
Word by word break-down, English to Vulcan:
Ralash-tanaf t'shashol t'Teraya Kaunshuk t'Ek'tralar
National Anthem of the United Federation of Planets
Ralash-tanaf = [music, song, melody]
t'= [belonging to, of]
shashol = [nation, state]
t'= [belonging to, of]
Teraya Kaunshuk t'Ek'tralar = [United Federation of Planets]
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MsJasnine 1 year ago
Your a good singer
vistarox 1 year ago
At 0:15 it's "diverse" not "divers". Other than that this is pretty good.
Lizfan2 1 year ago
This needs to be sung by a choir someday LOL
TheCursedChosen1 1 year ago
I think the words you thought up are much too specific for an anthem.
Herbarius 1 year ago
yeah a battle brimming with quantum torps and phasers in a song for peace maybe think of some nice flybyes but other than that its good.
Nanopizza1701 1 year ago
@Nanopizza1701 I was going for more of a message about the duality of man.
techraan 1 year ago 2
Very good.
MasterSanders 1 year ago
That ain't bad!
leonel1982 2 years ago
*kumbiya.....kumbiya......* i love star trek...
Kodiax113 2 years ago
whats the word after the bit about "diff'rent worlds diverse" ? I can't quite hear it properly.
CommodoreBelgarion 2 years ago
The federation will endure.
arnout23 2 years ago
any Vulcan or Andorian lyrics?
eddielung31 2 years ago
Ofcourse, but the Universal Translator couldnt quite make it rhyme
techraan 2 years ago
ladies and gentlemen, please raise your hands, or your antennas, or your claws....(whatever...)
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MsJasnine 1 year ago
see my posts!
MsJasnine 1 year ago
I think that the lyrics are fine, as fan fiction goes. There is however, a significant dissonance between the visuals and what is being sung (i.e. Koombaya lyrics with boom-bye-yeah! visuals).
ZedemMonk 2 years ago
well you need to also question a ship of "Peace" that is brimming with Phaser and Quantum Torpedo bays.
techraan 2 years ago
@techraan I bet your single
ART1975CZ 1 year ago
@ZedemMonk - Of course, considering that those ships are attacking the Borg, their mission in the footage shown is very much pro-freedom. Anything that tries to take away the individual's right to think freely and be a sovereign individual is a direct threat to true peace. In any case, good work & video!
JoshuaH688 2 years ago
This guy gives geeks a bad name
thanks51 2 years ago 2
"Alter" is - in this context - a word used as "dude" or "mate" and - referring to our mails 2 years ago - I only can say: daal is just right.
Stand up and salute, your lyrics are great!
Saitentaenzer 2 years ago
thanks, dudes! Consider yourselves both 'friended'
techraan 2 years ago
danke ^^ naja mein english ist halt nur ne 3-(4+)
daal2006 2 years ago
alter ich liebe deinen song ;)
daal2006 2 years ago
Danka, Daal2006. I don't really speak German very well. what does 'alter' mean when you say it that way?
techraan 2 years ago
it a slang word ^^
Alter is hmmm *older*
but not the age from a person
daal2006 2 years ago
Diplomacy is our creed
Our course is set
forever united
we shall not forget
meowman9 2 years ago
I would change be strong to prevail
vilgax123 2 years ago
different worlds, diverse tongues, an Rom-u-lan Ale. Peace bolstered by unity, we shall prevail?
techraan 2 years ago
The rhyme scheme he chose is "aabb," which means that the first and second lines rhyme with each other, and the third and fourth lines rhyme with each other. "Prevail" doesn't rhyme with "hands," "stand," or "song," so it doesn't work.
PCCphoenix 2 years ago
thanks, man
techraan 2 years ago
Great job, from a trekker to another.
kevinericon 2 years ago
Why should there be division between Trekkies and Trekkers? Why can't we be one too? I mean we all like the same thing right?
RATLOVIN900 2 years ago 2
this song makes me like the romulans ¬_¬
SCARREDMIND 2 years ago
Romulans are the coolest villains in the Star Trek universe
techraan 2 years ago
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you god damn fucking trekkies
this is why you should all be killed and your putrid sci fi burned in a giant cleansing fire
boitle 2 years ago
yer right!!! you are totally right!! I'm gonna burn myself up cuz I am such a scourge on the World.
techraan 2 years ago
Love it....I am a Trekkie rather then Trekker lol
Dalbert342 2 years ago 2
techraan:
Play your version while spontaneously watching Bluestars78s, its really cool.
PlanetHombom 2 years ago
Hey! ahahah That WAS pretty cool! ahahahaha
techraan 2 years ago
hey dumb fuck... most leaps in technology today were inspired by Star Trek... also why are you on a trek site, let me guess, because you have no life and go around other sites just bad mouthing them? you my friend are the equivalent to what people classify a retard to be...
brendanaggs 2 years ago
Seems like he's already there
trekky74205 2 years ago
Exactly! The guy who invented cell phones was inspired by Star Trek. The flip design was someone else's idea.
JustPhilNY 2 years ago
exactley
vistarox 2 years ago
And who will protect you when the Romulans come to get you...fuck off,pat'ak
Dalbert342 2 years ago
theres nothing wrong with trekkies if we shall be killede you shall be killed
kallemick 2 years ago
Ugh. Why does the federation have to be so pansy-assed?
The UFP needs an anthem with balls.
cashcleaner 2 years ago 2
what they lack in balls, the make up for in mini-skirts and gogo boots
techraan 2 years ago
True, they did get some things right. XD
cashcleaner 2 years ago
think the Federation was ball-less before...but think about it...they kicked Dominion's ass,Borg's ass and who knows how many asses in Delta Quadrant when Voyager was there lol think there is hope for them yet
Dalbert342 2 years ago 2
Hi, I really like this anthem and so tried to compose some words that would go with it for my uni in the UK for a bit of fun, comments welcome. Just 1 verse though
From far and wide, we gather here
Standing in unity, Lancaster's pride
Knowledge and reason at heart of our creed
Forever a child of Lancaster Uni
Corrant101 2 years ago
I like it
techraan 2 years ago
If one can sing it properly, it might actually be a good anthem... but I guess that poem of Schiller Ode an die Freude, the actual hymn of the European Union, fits better.
alonelychild 2 years ago
They are working on an old style series in the TOS timeline.
Cipolloistdotcom 2 years ago
Not bad! This may just replace the Soviet Anthem as my favorite anthem.
JustPhilNY 2 years ago 2
excellent anthem, a true stand of pride for the UFP cause!
Simon23k 3 years ago
You made this alone? Wow! It sounds realy good, a little bit like the Filmsongs of goldentusk.
What I want to know is, could you make a subtitle, or write the text in an answer? My English isn´t good enough to understand an chanted text.
Oh, until I forget it. I my eyes you are now a honorary citizen of the United Federation of Planets. ;-)
Omega0850 3 years ago
Something about the diplomacy lyric being sung at the same time a volley of torpedoes is being fired... kinda gives a silly message.
TheWindClaw 3 years ago
Section 31 insisted on the duality of the imagery.
techraan 3 years ago
lol Don't you know the definition of a diplomat? it's someone who tells you to go to hell in such a way that you look forward to the trip.
Peace through power >:)
f38stingray 2 years ago
speack softly but cary a giant stick LOL
smitto21 2 years ago
Pax tyrannis?
larsedvartl 2 years ago
HUZZAAH! UFP FTW!! One question tho, is there gonna be another star trek series? I know they are working on the movie now and not working on anything new, but there is so much potential! Will star trek live on?
Aslapacrosstheface 3 years ago
Yep very touchy feely
What I expect for the Fed Anthem
Now if only some body could do a romulan anthem
Cavalier1645 3 years ago
now in klingon
ussenterprisecaptian 3 years ago
I remember the Voyager lyrics guy..."please come hooome!"
Once I saw the DS9 episode I had to see the lyrics to the UFP anthem.
Well done...bravo!
enson2k 3 years ago
Although the premise seems sound, I don't think the UFP would put lyrics to their anthem. Being very liberal, they probably wouldn't want anything to hint "speciocentricity"
ICXCNIKA84 3 years ago
That's why the lyrics refer to any Sentient life form that has Warp Technology. That would even include protoplasmic space blobs and rock-beings. :-D Plus, with the universal translator, who's to say the lyrics were even originally in English? :-D
techraan 3 years ago
Does anyone else appreciate that while the lyrics are talking about diplomacy and peace, the video shows a battle going on... kinda opposite to diplomacy and peace, yes?
kurochan101 3 years ago
A little too sickly sweet for my tastes but well done.
PrinceBishop3 3 years ago
Dude, it's 56 seconds long!
techraan 3 years ago
very well done. I think you've got a great talent for singing and a good voice!
SchandmaulFan1992 3 years ago
A serious case of nerdery, but you did a good job with those lyrics.
LowellMorgan 3 years ago
yeah.. if I'd never kissed a girl, my nerdism would probably have put me in the guiness book
techraan 3 years ago
when was there a ufp anthem???
robmillist 3 years ago
one episode of ds9 before a baseball game on the holosuite
harveyp 3 years ago
You Totally kick ass for singing this trekkie song man, seriously you the man.
Duantless 3 years ago
Thanks, man
techraan 3 years ago
This is extremely amazing.Starfleet and The United Federation Of Planets would be proud.The United Nations should listen to this and catch a hint(if you know what I mean).Amazing extremely amazing I would try to remember this when I am serving in Starfleet on USS-NCC-1701-D-Enterprise.
ShippoTheFoxKid1983 3 years ago 4
Sapience= the ability of an organism or entity to act with judgment
Sientient= experiencing sensation or feeling.
redstar170 3 years ago
A-month the stars, we all join hands
Brothers in harmony. We take a stand
Different worlds, divers tongues, we join in one song
Peace bolstered by unity, We shall be strong!
As Space-faring sentients, we lend aid
To all who yearn for Peace, where 'er they may...
Diplomacy is our creed our course is set.
United Federation of planets!
-Ron Morris
techraan 3 years ago
Ahahahaha! Classis! And great lyrics too! Ahahaha!
wrenis1 3 years ago