Interesting! Actor.. I dont know man, cant say much (bad or good). The "hit" scene is not working. Its too easy for him to trapped in the railway. Maybe u need to elaborate on that --like showing CU of the sandal or fell to the ground a bit. If we walk and our feet got stucked, we wont be just walk than stop and standing while screaming. But yeah.. not bad for a first timer. Much much better than my first film :p (seriously)
Good attempt. Keep working at it. :)
MrChandypandy 3 weeks ago
nice film! hahahaha
i saw singapore structures inside! u from singapore too!
i am from singapore too and i had done some films too!! do visit my profile too!
nelsontyc 3 years ago
Interesting! Actor.. I dont know man, cant say much (bad or good). The "hit" scene is not working. Its too easy for him to trapped in the railway. Maybe u need to elaborate on that --like showing CU of the sandal or fell to the ground a bit. If we walk and our feet got stucked, we wont be just walk than stop and standing while screaming. But yeah.. not bad for a first timer. Much much better than my first film :p (seriously)
cheers man!
stormizer 6 years ago