that poem was great...tell me how mines seem (its pretty short) Forgiveness My eyes, full of tears and lies. I have let you down. I sit there and cry. I deserve to die. Lonely and coldly. You pull me up. Up to my feet. You tell me you love me. And kiss me gently. You embrace me with your love. Your touch so warm and nice. My heart turns into a thousand butter flies. (PS its supposed to rime)
this poem is incredible. i wish i could write poems like this. i only write amature poems. if you wanna read them my blog is on thoughts.com and my username is BrokenHearted4427.
I'm a guy and I never told that girl I loved her but now I regret it because now she have a boyfriend and I would rather go over it then feel all that pain again.
Wow. The ending of it, is exactly what I feel. I fell for this boy and never told him, and now I'm in pain everyday of my life. I regret not telling him. It was the worst mistake of my life.
i never in my life ever herd such beautiful poetry. i love it so, the words are so deep and meaningful even know i have never saw your face you are a beautiful person and i just don't know wat to say. amazing job,
this is a poem i wrote i was wondering wat you think of it(its still a work in progress)
That voice scared me a bit.
Emilay41 1 month ago
very good poem you should make more
jj101505 3 months ago
hellla good but the talking made it worse and it was predictable but helllllla good!!!
coldblud101 5 months ago
beautiful voice for a beautiful poem
pvtroebuck2 8 months ago
27GangstaGurl 1 year ago
this poem is incredible. i wish i could write poems like this. i only write amature poems. if you wanna read them my blog is on thoughts.com and my username is BrokenHearted4427.
retrogirl4427 1 year ago
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pinkskull0674 1 year ago
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foortiz619 1 year ago
I'm a guy and I never told that girl I loved her but now I regret it because now she have a boyfriend and I would rather go over it then feel all that pain again.
chillay10 1 year ago
This Poem is Great......I wish i was this good mine is very short!
Tell me what yew think bout it.....
--Sad.....crying....Dying
-I'm cryin & Dying
-Getting swept away lyke dust
-Feeling like theirs noone to trust
-I dont wanna be here
-i dont wanna die
-i dont wanna feel lyke an hour passing by!
Ilm0110 1 year ago 2
@Ilm0110 Short but itts guud (:
I Know thatt feelinqq i gett yuu
i likke itt (:
Nice jobb
janessa281 1 year ago
@Ilm0110 It was okay........ I guess. XP
zGIRL6351 7 months ago
This is amazing. I wish I could express myself in words like u are able to do. Every word is articulated very well :)
hotlips52 1 year ago
beautiful
Theyarethecure12 2 years ago
You have a way with words Keep expressing yourself with them, your fellow writer -K-dren-
CrazyKdren 2 years ago
From 1:43 till 2:02.
BrokenAndFaded1 2 years ago
Wow. The ending of it, is exactly what I feel. I fell for this boy and never told him, and now I'm in pain everyday of my life. I regret not telling him. It was the worst mistake of my life.
BrokenAndFaded1 2 years ago
this is so good :)
Tanialikesyou 2 years ago
is this AMAZING..
quetejordan0 2 years ago
that's how i feel.and every word fit perfect.i'm very sorry you felt that way im sorry for any one who has to feel that way.
DestinyAkaHAZEL1992 2 years ago
i never in my life ever herd such beautiful poetry. i love it so, the words are so deep and meaningful even know i have never saw your face you are a beautiful person and i just don't know wat to say. amazing job,
this is a poem i wrote i was wondering wat you think of it(its still a work in progress)
As the whole room stairs.....
Not a word to be spoken.....
With this final kiss.....
Our bond is broken.....
We both know this love won't stay.....
As i promise my heart.....
He replies ok.....
XxGayEmoKidxX 2 years ago
very very nice words i liked it too much really good job .....
feelu90 3 years ago
this poem is really good...GREAT JOB...if this is a real feeling, then i am really sorry!! :-)
torenbob3 3 years ago
I like ur poem!! :D
CloudKitty18 3 years ago 5