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[OblivionVamp]

the idea is good but the video wasnt too great and didnt the elites have covennant weapons

[x50U7H3RN161112]

sucked.

his helmet changed halfway into the video, come on.

[XxVerconxX]

The supressive fire lasted half the video... come on = / that was kinda lame, but it still had a cool concept.

[imnotdillon]

I loved this one, but what about the voice in the middle with the Microsoft person talking was eh, kind lame

[itsotastie]

good editing and camera work but you need to make a better series

[G4m3rW1z4rd]

the only good part of this video i thought was the sound effects they were awesome!

[irishfatty66]

...that looked like a gay ass star wars..

[mansmadt]

If ur referring to the guys voice then i agree with you

[irishfatty66]

lol yeah

[ISUKTURDS]

I don't get it, is it supposed to be funny? --I love the editing though, fantastic!...

[18091993]

Just because it's not dick and fart jokes doesn't mean it's not good.

5 stars!

[Pogra01]

this is what happens when you give a 10 year old unlimited editing software

[LordSwordbreak]

This is fucking awesome! Would love to see more!!

[sadfacehateyou]

wtf ninja??? and captain shit head

[Shintaka9009]

It's called Lux Aeterna, composed by Clint Mansell, from the film Requiem For A Dream.

[witchinghour666]

this is very cleverly made i like it

[kikingvidtv]

this looks bloody arse sick love the camera angles and how you made sandtrap look like snow

[azzafrrr]

I think it was pretty good... i liked it

yes it wasnt absolutely perfect.. but its the first ep... after a bit of practice ull b way better...

i enjoyed it

And guys.. if ur guna bag him (excuse him for not being perfect) but please... constructive critisisme... dont BAG

[mommostudios]

Requiem of a dream... Did I spelled that right? Hmm....

[falcore91]

Awesome first episode. I like that you made the weapons loud, though I think you could have cut a little time from the first big shootout. Nice way to introduce the other humans.

[Isinthas6744]

he used the same sound effects every 5 seconds, and who the hell would be named ninja?

[mommostudios]

Isinthas6744 - I know who is Ninja. The character of L.I.E.

Next time, come up with a better flame.

[Isinthas6744]

i wasn't flaming i was being realistic and giving CRITICISM. hm maybe youve never heard of the word. oh! i know why! because you're in fucking third grade! now, yes, now im flaming but im not flaming the guy who made the movie, which is actually decent. im flaming you, because you're an idiot. kthxbye

[mommostudios]

That's a flame?

*sigh*

[Isinthas6744]

to a degree, yes. lol, really though, you can't make a machinima and not expect some comments you don't like

[mommostudios]

I like them all. That's was make us learn of our mistakes.

But...

I rather see their videos if they have bad/flame comments. HeH HaH

So I can sit back and watch. :p

[Isinthas6744]

and wow...you're the guy that made the movie. hm, yea it's decent but next time, don't try to defend yourself when there's really nothing to be defended from. please.

[SccDefender]

Damn... I have nothing else to say, except epic.

I really enjoyed watching that, and I look forward to the next one :)

[mommostudios]

Um no thank you. I'm keeping the AI voice unless you have a female to voice act. I'll use my wife but she sounds like a freakin' lil girl.

[mommostudios]

First of all... anyone with bad comments give me your links to your machinima so I can judge them.

Second- There were no Microsoft voices.

Third- I know I made the machine guns loud.

Fourth- It was a rush edit.

Fifth- I'm just cool.

-SON RAIHBOY

[Fashri]

Sorry guys, but super mario has highest sale records of all time.

[mikethalo637254]

Fashri, GTA 4 has the highest sales record (if you include both the consoles that it came out on), super mario is the best selling game on the nintendo consoles not the best selling game of all time.

[frosheet]

A. Halo 3 has theater mode

B. Halo 3 has theater mode

C. Halo 3 has theater mode

any questions?

[kinger3346]

D. Halo 3 has Gun Lowering Cheat

[raiden48]

the bullet shooting sounds got really anoying really quick. but everything else was great

[mikethalo637254]

Star3Wars3, Halo isn't the best selling game anymore, GTA 4 beat Halo's sales record

[cardsandcolts]

thats only if you include both PS3 and 360 sales

On the 360 Halo is still dominant

[Shotgunner56]

because halo 3 allows many options and accesories that can make awesome machinimas

this one isn't as great as big producers, like DigitalPh33r, but still good

[FireStick16]

For a first episode its not to bad, the audio just needs to be tuned better, but ither then that, seems like it will be an interesting series.

[checkme2345]

omfg it got annoying the same shit over and over dude remake this with better stuff and shit

[ninjaboy128]

it was good, but you continuously replayed like 3 clips with THE SAME DAMN SOUND

over and over and over. it was fuckin annoying. 2/5

[vilches93]

it was cool but you need different sound effects

[nejirulez1]

Nice, but did you have to make cortana sound so annoying? 5/5

[Own1169]

wow that was orsom

[str8pr0duct]

cool concept but poorly executed

[Lyberoskylo]

One of the best machinima I 've ever seen. Don't know what you guys think, but I believe that it is very nicely filmed... I admire this job.

Anyways, way to go SON...

[eragon2121]

Make variety in your sound affects. I like the music, but try not to just play one or two tracks over the whole video. When something happens suddenly don't have requiem for a dream playing really softly in the background. It was great for the part were hes waiting with the shotgun but when he jumps out it was just really abrupt.

yeahh.....

[weesna8000]

that was awesome but that voice acting sucked.

[Dethenger]

This was fantastic. With some better voice acting, it'd earn a total 5/5, but I think that, at the very least, a 4/5 is in order.

[dac314]

dude.... how goddamned long was that stupid fight? more importantly, why the fuck was that Elite just chillin' on the ridge, shooting with the turret? you'd think he had something better to do. and he never ran out of ammo, and he never got bored, and it took the other dude fuckin' forever to do anything. he just sat there like an idiot while the Elite kept shooting at the rocks. it's pretty lame, imo. the graphics and sounds were good, though. I like the story. just hurry up the action, plez?

[phynixblack]

L.I.E souunds cool untily ou find out the jobb means you need to walk around being refered to as 'Limited Intelligence Escort' I would be angry at anyone who thought my intellignece is limited. This could go somewhere, but the name is a bit...goofy.

[LordSwordbreak]

AWESOMENESS IS IN THIS MACHINIMA!!! 5/5!! What else is there to say? I'm so looking forward to next episode!

[ADudeCalledDave]

Great visuals and storyline. Just work on the computers voice. Bit irratating

[YaBoyDReg]

A Honest Opinion

The visuals were by far original and the action sequence was great. The story seems pretty solid but te only thing that made this just and O.K. machinima was te voice. You need a better voice over because it makes a viewer say "I would watch this but the voices sound terrible". That's the only thing that needs work. The rest is; in my opion, great. 3/5(5/5 is voice-over was better)

[2dumb2care]

this video has potential

[MadSnowmen]

never.... ever... make another video again please

[Oshowah]

pretty awesome too

[Oshowah]

were there 300 humans on earth or the alien planet? i didnt get it

[goguu]

terrible

[bob8410012]

cool visual effects, but annoying sound and whats even going on??

[bob8410012]

did the main character change helmets? that was confusing

[SquamusMaximus]

hey is it me or does the machine gun sound loud as hell?!

[ShadowsofDark1]

who ever made this video got great cam shots

but is video is fucking boring

[jacksparowv]

this is fucking boring

[jjdaman16]

why the hell wont it let me play past 2:37? >:(

[TheMagicTard]

How come nobody ever uses campaign mode for machinima?

[spartannoah]

he didn´t. he used forge.

[Da1Great1D1Assasin]

cuz the AI wouldnt cooperate u cant have as many people and it would suck

[shadowcivs]

becuse u can't use forge to get the right wepons and to change the area.

[poinkie2000]

pro: very good machinima lots of good stuff going on.

con: same annoying sound effect over and over and over and over and over.

[Austinatorpwnznoobs]

well...at times it was rather repetative..ie the freakin' annoying turret sound that just looped and looped over and over again. But, I think it was a good attempt.

[vbhatt08]

omg same sound effects!!!!

[Halo3WillRock]

no its in one of machinimas movies :P im not actually pissed off about it

[Nitellama]

frieking turret sound!

[demongabe]

i no it kinda gay

[BrandontehGr3at111]

bad video is bad

[petree50]

I would agree, repetitive, but other than that, I thouroughly enjoyed it, my least fav part was when the robotic voice says "this story begins in an alien world" Kinda ruins the first secene.

[petree50]

5:11, best music of all time.

[DanyIchamp]

awsome vid for novice, the only thing I have to say is that the voice acting could be a litle better, but I expect a lot from you.

[SuckItNoobs]

Daddy go bot!

[church947]

poor elites try to protect the humans but humies open fire first poor elites just trying to be friendly

[Ish55]

some good things, some bad things. works for a start

[JustCallMeSoupLad]

Bad story and the video was repetitive and some shots were too long, but this is well edited and you should maintain this level of quality

[MrPatriotic]

Wow awesome!

[Random1765]

got kinda repetative

[zakanater]

5:00-5:30 is almost exactly the BOOMER scene from Gears of War. Also why is N1NjA to Dumb to use the Sniper on his Back

[FireWarrior38]

well I like this vid, the only thing thats wrong is the voice acting

[Breakdancingguru]

not the worst i've ever seen...but

there was no storyline explanation in the video itself, and using the same shots over and over again, not so good.

[ne0huang]

probally one of the worst machinimas i have seen lol

[nyles855]

I know 2 things. Idon't understand the storyline at all. And the turret was annoying, too loud, and too long. Why not just use the Halo turret noise its much better then the little annoying repetitave noise. Also seriously half that video was the elites shooting rockets and the turret at him. They were almost all the same shots too.

[beanershot2007]

i think they were the same shots but used different angles

[SPORE07]

GAY

[GIzzy7]

very good the turret part with the red elite was too long and annoying but overall original and interesting. 5/5 for sure.

[StickX13]

well, to tell the truth, itsw was kinda boring, i mean, the guy was standing there for like 2 mins while they just kep shooting and shooting,

and then, in like one minute, he finished all of them off,

[blackoracle16]

very good, but like everyone else said, cut down the part where he was being hammered by fire and everything is all set. 5/5

[tyrant1123]

i liked that very well done love the song you played when nija was against the two elites with the 50 cals whats it called again

[knux25]

Yeah the shooting scene lasted for too long and I really dont like the fact that screens just appear in thin air. Its kinda ridiculous in my opinion. Other then that this has great potential to be a good series.

[SmixProductions]

good except the turret thing was way too long and got annoying

[whatuwant732]

ok, it was a good story yeah but that machine gun was way over used in sound effects, i was gonna flip out after the third minute

[Shinamahividad]

LOL

nice Limewire download of the Saving Private Ryan D-Day landing sounds

[Delta38Ninja]

lol... the bullet fire had a nice rhythm

[ninjadudes]

fucking awesome it felt like a real movie nice job keep it up

[FatesChains]

Requiem for a dream By Clint Mansell.

[johnawsome18]

hey it looks great but the last guy in the hall way was very bad how he just walked up to him and shot him the voices were good but not cortanans voice and make sure you put smalls in a high spot in the (diologe) i think i spelled it wrong anyway keep it up i like it please reply

[RKO155]

that turret is is so anoying

[Shintaka9009]

"Can you track the union soldiers?"

"The union soldiers are about to attack you."

*PWN*

Actually a pretty cool scene. I'm impressed!

[thastuffyo]

Anyone know what the name of the song is when he enters the tunnel? Or where it came from?

[EXAir113]

Requiem For a Tower from Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers. Send my a private message and I can give you a download link.

[thastuffyo]

thanks a lot, I found one on limewire

[comrade501]

It's called Requiem for a Dream, from the movie of the same name. A better version is the "Two Towers" Requiem for a Dream, it's more intense and powerful.

[thastuffyo]

thanks for the response

[StantonioTheFehr]

yeah, it was overall pretty good (and thats saying a lot from me, since im sick and tired of all the cliche Halo 3 videos Machinimas coming out with) except the turret part was a little too long..

[Phillipnoogen]

One problem is the bullet effects. It the same thing gotta change a bit buts thats all

[Different660]

it's pretty good but that time you had ninja pounded with fire just went on a little too long. cut it down a couple seconds. other then that no complaints

[GruntWhacker]

theres 265 ratings and 251 views.....

[StickX13]

ya, google really f*cked youtube up,

now its like hella random,

every time i watch machinima vids,

its always like 210 views,

[Doodie2112]

That was pretty good in my mind. Nice job. Kinda had that Saving Private Ryan feel, right?

[ballinoballin]

awesome

[frondew]

the voices are HORRIBLE!!!

[SmixProductions]

to frondew: the voices are the microsoft voices....on like Word or something...

[SmixProductions]

to frondew: nevermind...i just read the credits

[davefan12]

Halo 3 is old now.Its all about MGS4.

[StantonioTheFehr]

shut the fuck up. theyre both awesome games, but no way is Halo 3 old just because some other game came out

[Sht4nky]

well, very nice visual effects, but the sounds were way over the top. And "Ninja's" helmet changed from time to time. Also the use of voice transformers really didn't do anything to help a story that seems to be following a predictable cliche plot.

[idontcare9966]

great sound effects back round music voice over camrea angels you are good at watyou do keep making more

[pure9933]

awsome camera man he is a freaken BEAST I LOVE THE CAMARA ANGLES 5/5

[Pgymy]

its awesome but imo the turret sounds kinda ruined the moment near the end

[LostSanity602]

the beginning was very good, his voice and cortonas voice were really bad, also the machine gun turrent made me want to turn the sound off, same for when the banshee and the rocket was shot and hitting the walls and ground, ESPECIALLY when the turrent hit the ground, sounds like pots and pans... but the banshee flying sounded great and it has a great story and great background music, overall i would giv a 3/5 mostly because u kept using some images OVER AND OVER AND OVER again but it was good

[Phenom3n0n]

wow this was horrible.

[angeldestroy1]

the sfx were amazing nice job

[UnknownCreator]

Umm... Nice i really like it! Infact the best fight scene i have seen yet!

Only thing i reckon was fucked was the chaingun or minigun wateva you call it needs a different effect... I was searhing demonoid the other day... try theier ussually they have some!

[Monkeyninja33]

2:39 episode ends looks good but broken

[mommostudios]

It's broken because it continues to episode 2.

[GeneralKIB]

Fairly well made. It was good enough to keep me watching, although i would recommend using more gun sounds during action sequences. The repeated clanking sound becomes extremely annoying. Keep working for while it's not perfect, you and this machinima have much potential.

[knight2417]

excellent camara, but the voices and names sucked

[mommostudios]

What about yours?

ciao

[sfdmSyndicate]

terrible SFX ick stry good tho

[jastag]

awesome visual effects but theres not much to say about the storyline other than that it got borring 2 minutes into the machinima.

[wesnile12]

come on, give him some credit, this probobly took him a long time to make and your comments arent helping at all. Personally I loved it! I thought I was pretty damn good!

[tekinetik]

i didnt really like it, sorry. but it does have some nice cameras and effects. good job on that

[Honorzeal]

Good idea, but still needs some work =/

3/5. Keep it up =)

[tehcheeseitman]

P.S. i hear the same gun sound about every 2 seconds, jeez the story is good but the editing, ect. is horrible

[shadowo10]

true, the turret noises were annoying. good sound but too much.

[mommostudios]

I know... it was a rush edit. Don't worry I'll take my time on episode 2 this time. No loud machine guns.

[shadowo10]

srry, it could be rough when you make a movie, like finding people, setting up the film, sound effects, and most importantly those dumb remarks from people acting like they could do better. pointing out EVERY flaw. you dont seem like a bad person, maybe you could help me with my movie or give a few pointers. Shadow 918, give me a few days to get my xbox back from my brother.

[mommostudios]

OKaY

[t1mmysrevenge]

the turret sound makes my ears want to just implode..

[kylejames11]

i liked it alot

[Roflemonade]

lame~

[milesdaliger]

i do preffer comedies, but this wasn't bad. does anyone realize how hard it is to make machinimas? and the images are blurry because people don't want to spend $400 buying a high quality video capturing device. and that machine gun sound was annoying though.

[HJU4]

Yeah go see Dr. Strangeman

[troggdor4]

does anyone know how to make a good non halo 3 machinima anymore?

[markbart7]

well, there are the HL2 videos, there are ones for WoW, there are some for most games

[tributeforlife]

yes, machinima =P

[vhsdevil]

this is awesome. very few machinimas accomplish this level drama. good job SON__RAIHBOY

[kyledrums7]

why were they shooting in just one spot the wohle time?

[halofreak0130]

wow, the attack was like a bad STOMP music video

[xShAdoWD]

Very nice story but you need to work on voice acting...

[tehcheeseitman]

all of the voice acting is fake... use real actors!

[DarthRevan5641]

halo 3 halo 3, nothing wrong with it, i just want something new.

[jastag]

people choose halo 3 because the "theatrical" mode in halo 3 allows you to get camera angles that you wouldn't expect from other games. you couldn't make a machinima with GTA4 or assassins creed.

[Sean951082]

im sorry but is any1 else getting tired of theses "dramatic" vids i love ur stuff machinama but all it is is talking,little fighting(that seems intense becuz theres so little of it),blurry images, and long quite pauses

[BAKERmxSTUDIOS]

the sound was taken from the saving private ryan movie??

[blowitallaway]

honestly that sucked

[Stunte6230]

Great effects and camera angles.

[dantheman23312]

god that turret sounds so annoying!

[wareagle372]

Great angles and visual effects, but you need to focus alittle more on the story

[Vulcan687]

That sound effect for the machine gun was ANNOYING!

[spideysbiggestfan]

get some vocie acyors and it would be perfect

[redcardsoccer]

the gunfire got really annoying

[braindeadtvmaniac]

wtf? what was that? what just happened? why are they killing eachother? who are they? wtf was this whole thing?!!!!!!!

[HaloFilmsCompany]

Great vid man, I added this to my favs, come out with more man, great stuff.

[tanx20]

yes the stupid microsft people suck for this type of vid

[lalalalolnubed]

good, but the voices are slightly annoying