BY LOVE BEGUILED, In Mood Subjunctive, rewrite

[JoeLovesDo]

in the time of day there is a time of mind find the right time and your subjunctive poetry shall come the time for that can be soon or far but for now you must rewrite

[StanleyPacion]

Yes, indeed, rewrite, the motivating force behind my lyric . That has been the fantasy here. I attempt to show how I have developed these poems, some from forty years back. This poem, no easy task to develop the subjunctive in English narrative , since the mood's use in American English becomes increasing small. However, I have that poem now in the hands of a super editor, and it has been redone and I should upload it one more time early, January 2010. Thanks, Yours, Stanley

[KitchenTableWisdom]

5***** by the way

[StanleyPacion]

That is a very kind estimation, but I appreciate your time and effort on my behalf. Love, Stanley

[KitchenTableWisdom]

"The carriage held but just us-and immortality"

Ah,there was the beguiling!

[StanleyPacion]

What more is there than immortality, hey? Well there is that covenant, also. Thanks my dear woman, Shhh, your good cheer always welcomed, but guess what, my editor gave me a grade of "A" for the poetry, but an "F" grade for the use of the Subjunctive, alas. So soon there will be another version.

[Poemsapennyeach]

Sweet.

[StanleyPacion]

Thanks you for your kind word.

[Nicatroubadour]

the sort of thing id prefer to read in my armchair or listen to on radio 4 whilst driving, but even in this really sterile thing that youtube is i really did enjoy it.

[StanleyPacion]

Thanks for your continuing high estimation of my labor. You are a great pal. And I have the list of British drama, but of course, I have seen them all, and some more than once. But thank you, and make sure you get at least one of the black and white Bergman's I recommended. I am sure they will turn your head around.

[udiealot81]

Great poem Stanley! It was nice to listen to this, and listen to the past of the poem, and I can visualize being there due to your exquisite descriptions.

[StanleyPacion]

Well as I told one of my other readers I failed to get the Subjunctive right in between some of those lines of verse, alas. But you know me by now, I keep doing them over and over, again and again, tusting that eventually I might get the enterprise right.