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chr325is 3 years ago
Good-looking men, and I like the use of the title over on "Special Plans!" Pacing has to be quicker for the comedy--no longer than one minute, probably. And the dialogue is too quiet--can't hear what they're saying. :-)
felicity4711 3 years ago
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chr325is 3 years ago
Good-looking men, and I like the use of the title over on "Special Plans!" Pacing has to be quicker for the comedy--no longer than one minute, probably. And the dialogue is too quiet--can't hear what they're saying. :-)
felicity4711 3 years ago