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From: TheRAN244
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  • you have talent... nice lyrics bro. give my beats a listen if you get a chance

  • @mitch5191 ok. koool thanks :)

  • hmmmm its good but your flow starts up but then goes down I use to do that to when I started off rapping but as time goes by i got better just next time try to keep your flow up

  • @TheJazz20 yyeee i know and thats my biggest mistake, but its my first song so i think it went kinda good :) btw: urs is freaking awesome :X dope

  • @TheRAN244 oh thanks man but yeah the song good but keep working on it you got lots of potentials

  • @TheJazz20 thanks :) and yes i'll definitely work on my lyrics to improve :) thanks again ....

  • Sounding good, tey to get a staccato/ repetitive flow that builds presence line by line. The flow falls off, which is a shame because the lyrics you come with are quite dope!

    Check out my entry as well and subscribe,

    Vudu Kat

    Check out my entry and feel free to comment, nice job overall!

  • @vudukatacomb thanks :)

  • Alex, I can't believe you would be so talanted, can't believe you would be capable on using these kind of metaphores and include them in a single song.

    Keep up the good work, I believe that one day you will be a great rapper!

  • @TheKTFB thanks man :) much love <333 :)

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