ur definately an alto. dnt criticize her for her voice being flat. normally sopranos have melody. i thought the video was great and ur voice is amazing!
this chicks voice is horrible, and i love that she credits someone else with edgar allan poe's poem. YES the John Debney helped write the song for hocus pocus and changed "garden of shadows" to "garden of magic" but there are couple of VERY rare books of poems by EAP with this poem in it. do your research, and get a voice coach.
it would be better if you kept the volume of your voice a little more even and more together and somewhat suttle but i love your version it is still very whimsicle and yes the poem is by the late, great edgar allan poe
@mirandamartha44 I really need to redo this. it was my first recording so its full of all sorts of faults... and ive just given up on who wrote it... ive been caught up in too many wars about it. [cant get on my old account, so i cant change the artists comments]
@Silvertail11 XD oh man, its been a while. i was noahs voice for an online group called Summer House... unfortunately, it disbanded due to all of us having lives that take up too much of our free time.
It was by the film's original composer, James Horner. He wrote the song with lyrics by Brock Walsh, before leaving the film due to scheduling conflicts (Horner scored 10 movies the year this came out, in 1993)
@pillowiswako okay, but it was adapted by Brock Walsh for James Horner's song. It's a shame the video's author refuses to accept that Debney had nothing to do with this song, though. Horner didn't have time to score the film and recommended Debney take his place.
The recorders werent that good and I didnt like when you tried the harmony because your voice was a higher pitch than they could go and that threw it off a little.
{[dies laughing] i have done a fandub of Musician, an english and latin version dub of Lala's Lulaby, and a dub of Road's Melody. check them out if you get the chance~
I like your voice but it sounded like you hiccuped in the middle of the song. If it was intentional I'm sorry but it just kinda stuck out at me. I'm not trying to be mean I sincerely like your style.
XD thats not a hiccup! try singing something and try to put ephasis on how sad or painful it is, and you get that kind of choked up noise. really its for effect, i had no idea it gave the wrong impression!
Beautiful voice! But unfortunately I can not enjoy it, because sitting next to me in a crappy internet cafe Turk who constantly screams into his cell phone. This Dirty kanaka can not be polite for a minute and keep their stupid face.
3/5. Not that I could do any better, especially since I've been sick. I think if you did a straight up a cappella version without any reverb, you would easily get a 5 out of me.
If this is your first tme recording and making this video than I will have to give you 2 thumbs up. Incredible beginning. After 2:00 its........not as amazing as the beginning lol. And like SamFortuna said, it's not written by Edgar Allen Poe!!!
Your voice kinda reminds me of Amy Lee's or the lead singer of Within Temptation. It is soooo pretty but a bit haunting which sets a good mood for the poem. Awesome!! (=
I love you. And I'll tell you why. Because you have not succumbed to this mysterious force that's been going around claiming this poem was written by my favorite poet. Bless you!
I LOVE the beginning. I think it's quite creative! :)
cardinalrefuge 3 weeks ago
U did Aite but ur voice is to modern and heavy
actress23datsme 2 months ago
It is good....I like it ^_^
Sasuke19970409 3 months ago
It sounds so creepy and so ghostly but so nice i love ur vioce :D
1197Darkangel 3 months ago
Your voice sounds so sweet and beautiful. Keep sing, those 25 people who dislike this are just haters.
Youtube needs a "awesome" button. :D
Fennce4dragon 3 months ago 3
i'm a Noah^^
Shaolan12 3 months ago
ur definately an alto. dnt criticize her for her voice being flat. normally sopranos have melody. i thought the video was great and ur voice is amazing!
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It's cute ^_^
ForegottenLover 4 months ago
I love the song!!!!!
Notclose2perfect 5 months ago
The poem is by Edgar Allan Poe and I'm sorry but your voice is really flat - does not sound good...
BenAllen180180 5 months ago
@BenAllen180180 Actually, this version is not. There's two different versions of this poem. This version is by John Debney.
13NekoGirl13 5 months ago
otherwise!
iluvzu21 5 months ago
this chicks voice is horrible, and i love that she credits someone else with edgar allan poe's poem. YES the John Debney helped write the song for hocus pocus and changed "garden of shadows" to "garden of magic" but there are couple of VERY rare books of poems by EAP with this poem in it. do your research, and get a voice coach.
eternianpizazz 6 months ago 4
The flute part sounds like a little kid practicing the flute he/she just got! I like it, I think it fits. Good job, I think it's awsome!
Morningstar1717 6 months ago
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awwww! I love this. :) ur version is greatt babe :))
celticwayz34 7 months ago
awwww! I love this. :) ur version is greatt babe :))
celticwayz34 7 months ago
awwww! I love this. :) ur version is greatt babe :))
celticwayz34 7 months ago
I don't care what people say u got a great voice I loved your Musican and LaLa's lullaby
GhostMoonWolf13 7 months ago
pretty cool!
Can you do the My jolly sailor bold song too?
MaximeLoonatic2 7 months ago
I love your voice in this song!!!!!!!! I always hear it!!!! Thanks for your input!!!!! :D :D :D :D
kalwws 7 months ago
it would be better if you kept the volume of your voice a little more even and more together and somewhat suttle but i love your version it is still very whimsicle and yes the poem is by the late, great edgar allan poe
mirandamartha44 10 months ago
@mirandamartha44 I really need to redo this. it was my first recording so its full of all sorts of faults... and ive just given up on who wrote it... ive been caught up in too many wars about it. [cant get on my old account, so i cant change the artists comments]
RyuuseiRosuto 9 months ago
i love this version :)
you sang it very well!!!!
monekah92 10 months ago
It was so beautiful. It would have been better if there were lyrics. Still it was ENCHANTING!
231Kittycatgirl 11 months ago
I really love your version of this song, it's very pretty. :3 Lol, I can see why you ARE Noah's voice. D gray man, right? xD I love your voice~
Silvertail11 11 months ago
@Silvertail11 XD oh man, its been a while. i was noahs voice for an online group called Summer House... unfortunately, it disbanded due to all of us having lives that take up too much of our free time.
RyuuseiRosuto 9 months ago
lol
Silvertail11 9 months ago
i dont like the flute part >.< i love just the voce though! its eeary and beautiful
tquri 11 months ago
....Needs work.
msanime1234567890 11 months ago
@msanime1234567890 i know...
RyuuseiRosuto 9 months ago
This would sound better with a musical accompianiment, like a piano or violin or orchestra or something.
Lizfan2 11 months ago
@Lizfan2 I wish i knew how to play an instrument so i could... an orchestra?! I dont think i could get one of those...
RyuuseiRosuto 9 months ago
it sounds like this music was made 40 yers ago
iiDeathKitty 1 year ago
@iiDeathKitty If i lied and said thats what i was going for, would you believe me?
RyuuseiRosuto 9 months ago
i loved it it cave me chills
xxevaxxblackxx 1 year ago 3
Yeah the poem was written by poe, give credit where credit is due
lander77477 1 year ago
John Debney. ? um no the poem is by egar allan poe orginally.
dannyboy666999 1 year ago 17
bloody brilliant, u voice it touched me rite here *points at <3*
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RyuuseiRosuto 1 year ago
I don't like the flute part...and I play flute. Lol. It sounds too staccato, I think. Or like someone who JUST learned flute is playing it.
machihuahua 1 year ago 6
@machihuahua
its just a little indian flute i own... i really cant play it... but i figured it sounded like a little kid playing a tune so i kept it.
SamFortuna 1 year ago 5
@SamFortuna You should really look into the poem, it is not written by john debney, just the composition was
tokersrule 4 months ago
@machihuahua I think it sounds more like a recorder than a flut, I play the flut as well...
ShadowLuver36 10 months ago
i LUV ur voice. its AMAZING
peaceluvdarkness 1 year ago 2
your amazing ^.^
AdmiraMinatski 1 year ago
your singing is amazing >.<
memberpadfootluvsyeh 1 year ago
Wow! well done 5/5
Catna17 1 year ago
The intro gave me goose bumbs.. very nice voice.
KageWerewolf 1 year ago
John Debney had nothing to do with this song.
It was by the film's original composer, James Horner. He wrote the song with lyrics by Brock Walsh, before leaving the film due to scheduling conflicts (Horner scored 10 movies the year this came out, in 1993)
NL197 1 year ago
@NL197 The lyrics were written by Edgar Allen Poe which was originally a poem.
pillowiswako 1 year ago
@pillowiswako okay, but it was adapted by Brock Walsh for James Horner's song. It's a shame the video's author refuses to accept that Debney had nothing to do with this song, though. Horner didn't have time to score the film and recommended Debney take his place.
NL197 1 year ago
this is amazing
nikkid1237 1 year ago
you should consider singing evanescence :D tell me when you do!
wakalalalalalala 1 year ago
this is beautiful! i think its amazing the flute added an enchantmet to it i think =)
renesmeefan12 1 year ago
Abysmal. Especially towards the end.
DeathByFannyfart 1 year ago 4
Beautiful.
Adamguy2003 1 year ago
this is cool!!! ^-^
MyRememberDreams042 1 year ago
i think it sounds good >o
i dun think its flat...
its done well ^^
XxDyingMoonxX 1 year ago
The recorders werent that good and I didnt like when you tried the harmony because your voice was a higher pitch than they could go and that threw it off a little.
silentstalker83 1 year ago 3
You're pretty good!
krourou2 1 year ago
Edgar Allen Poe´s Poem "Come Little Children"
nice but I'd lose the flute
by the way-Poe died long before hocus pocus so this version is more like the orignal
zombielove87 1 year ago 3
Unfortunately there is no evidence to back up this claim, complete works of Poe do not contain this poem
TheBlood190 1 year ago
Very impressive i like this better than the original.....
XxLavixLovexX 1 year ago
You know where's the original? O_O
Tell me u.u
And this version is amazing by itself by the way :D
5/5
Puppenspielsmeister 1 year ago
the original, i believe, is the one from the movie, Hocus Pocus. which is a lot shorter.
unless XxLavixLovexX is suffering to a version i am unaware of.
SamFortuna 1 year ago
i love your song
jubjub11k 1 year ago
you sound very good. are you as beautiful as you sing? i give you a 100%
mrross515 1 year ago
you sing really good. would you know where i could get the poem to read?
mross2004us 1 year ago 7
i just found it online.
SamFortuna 1 year ago
why dose your voice remind me of some one??? have you heard of d gray man
ghostsarereal111 2 years ago
{[dies laughing] i have done a fandub of Musician, an english and latin version dub of Lala's Lulaby, and a dub of Road's Melody. check them out if you get the chance~
SamFortuna 2 years ago
@SamFortuna that would explain a lot I've watched most of them... wait a dub of roads melody got to go check that out (lol for real got to hear this)
ghostsarereal111 1 year ago
lol
SamFortuna 1 year ago
Is it okay if i use this song in a video? I will give you credit for the song in my vid.
DISTURBED702 2 years ago
I like your voice but it sounded like you hiccuped in the middle of the song. If it was intentional I'm sorry but it just kinda stuck out at me. I'm not trying to be mean I sincerely like your style.
NekoSarine 2 years ago 4
@NekoSarine sounds more like a cough to me...
worldfamousinHB 2 years ago 2
@NekoSarine...yeah.... the hiccup was the highlight for me actually, the rest made my ears bleed
LittIecunt 2 years ago
ouch, that hurt. jk jk, to each his own, right?
SamFortuna 2 years ago
can you tell me at what point? [ at what time]
i hope i can clear up what everyone is talking about.
SamFortuna 1 year ago
at about 1:34 ish
NekoSarine 1 year ago
OOOH!
XD thats not a hiccup! try singing something and try to put ephasis on how sad or painful it is, and you get that kind of choked up noise. really its for effect, i had no idea it gave the wrong impression!
SamFortuna 1 year ago
oh ok looking back I get it more it just hit me as that at first lol
NekoSarine 1 year ago 2
I thought it was a chuckle myself XD
sepheriku 1 year ago
beautiful voice
joshyboo43 2 years ago
wow this is nice. are you using a condenser?
TheBioBizket 2 years ago
this was my first song ive ever recorded, all i did to it was add echo.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Beautiful voice! But unfortunately I can not enjoy it, because sitting next to me in a crappy internet cafe Turk who constantly screams into his cell phone. This Dirty kanaka can not be polite for a minute and keep their stupid face.
Knabbermann 2 years ago
@knabbermann
ahh the wonders of noise canceling and noise reduction headphones lol i love my headphones :D
antononly 2 years ago
i hope you can listen to my song when its alittle more quiet...
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Yes! I finally have an internet connection back home. Your song is really good. you have a really great voice :-)
Knabbermann 1 year ago 2
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great voice but this isnt the originan version im looking for. im looking for the full song from hocus pocus that was sung by sara the witch
1tonyota 2 years ago
Nice singing :))
5 Stars*****
WMG1channel 2 years ago
sorry...which is this anime girl?
marieta110887 2 years ago
its just a random picture i found.
SamFortuna 1 year ago
edgar allen poe = peom
sources: history book, english book, famous poems, edgar's book.
kabutali 2 years ago
I can't stop listening to this song
AnnetteHayes 2 years ago
OMG ! you're so good
AnnetteHayes 2 years ago
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i think she sound's great but i can't tell if anyone is flat or not. i can only tell if people r bad singers. samfortuna is a womderful singer
vampireThea 2 years ago
"Wooden Indian flute"? LOL
Sounds like a recorder to me.
SWlTCHBLADE 2 years ago 6
i love the way u sing the somg ihope you dont mind but im us the song in one of my story for my english class u r my insperation thank you
l1lfr3sa 2 years ago
bland voice.
planeboi 2 years ago 5
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i lovethis song sooo much
EstoyDODO95 2 years ago
it was written by edgar allen poe!!!
the music was written by john debney!
goddess get it straight!!!
and your soooo flat
ScarXLilly 2 years ago 18
i actually sing this song but i think it is a little flat
JennaferR0123 2 years ago 5
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ok yeah she's a bit flat but the song is pretty and she sings it well.
if it wasn't for sound studioes and shit like that a lot of singers would sound flat too
wiccanbrat 2 years ago
ok ur good but yea your pretty flat
alithesinger12 2 years ago 15
u voice is ok but ur sooooooo flat.
smexysisters 2 years ago 31
@smexysisters She's not flat at all actually.... She just goes off key slightly in parts.
taeliah01 1 year ago
blaaah
skyscape 2 years ago 9
this is really good, great voice =D.
OukaHimura123 2 years ago
aw thats good
urgurlsara 2 years ago
i can see amy lee from evenscence singing this....
JB0523 2 years ago 5
i wish she would. lol. that would be amazing
outsidaz6 2 years ago 3
@JB0523 amy lee is one of my faves...it does kind of sound like her now that i think about it o.o
XxDyingMoonxX 1 year ago
are you singing this?? if so it rocks
free2speak94 2 years ago
Youve a very good voice!!!
ladyreemz86 2 years ago
i love this song yr voice is sweet i love it ^.^
iloveu7377 2 years ago
1:33 LOL did you have the hiccups?
SWlTCHBLADE 2 years ago 13
loll
alithesinger12 2 years ago 5
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SWlTCHBLADE 2 years ago
Your voice is nice but the pitch keeps changing which spoils it a bit
AidanDavis1 2 years ago 33
Lovley voice.
animefreakhacker897 2 years ago
i love this song. i use to hum it back in elametry school all the time. man i scared my classmates.
you sang it peficly.
LESTATxLOUISE 2 years ago
you are very good!! but the link is now dead =( i love the background picture to =)
lovesarummor 2 years ago
i know, its rather sad. i liked her version alot...
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Your voice is pretty!!
tht4hj 2 years ago
I like your voice. It's very pretty.
AquilaCat 2 years ago
Very good! :p that song is my lullaby... since a few years ;) Really great version
MaryannDarkandCie 2 years ago
3/5. Not that I could do any better, especially since I've been sick. I think if you did a straight up a cappella version without any reverb, you would easily get a 5 out of me.
LevitasDementia 2 years ago
thank you, seeing as this was the first song ive ever recorded in my life.
once i finish moving i plan to record it, but i do rather like the music i did in the background.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
If this is your first tme recording and making this video than I will have to give you 2 thumbs up. Incredible beginning. After 2:00 its........not as amazing as the beginning lol. And like SamFortuna said, it's not written by Edgar Allen Poe!!!
Outfld22 2 years ago 3
Very Good.
isabellajulieanna 2 years ago
Omg this is perfect! this song is just AWESOMEEEEEE!!!!!!!
TheGhostlyTrio 2 years ago 2
wow that was very good i sound like katy perry that was perfect 5/5
Inuyashafan101Meghan 2 years ago
I likeit <3
Ur a good singer
WTFWedThrusFri 2 years ago
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you suck =/
geasumi 2 years ago
care to explain?
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Umm that's completely rude.
wafflezrnumber1 2 years ago
im not trying to be rude, i just want to know why. if theres a reason that person believes im not very good, then i would like to improve on it.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Not you the person that said you sucked.
wafflezrnumber1 2 years ago
wow
nice and u do sound a bit like amy lee
lovefireheart 2 years ago 3
u sound like the lead singer of evanescence Amy Lee.
venomCX7 2 years ago 2
Your name "SamFortuna" really fits with this song!
wafflezrnumber1 2 years ago
Pfffft. i stole 'Fortuna' from Ion Fortuna of Trinity Blood.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
I love your voice! I favorited this video so I could always listen to it! In my point of view it was PERFECT!
wafflezrnumber1 2 years ago
You have a gorgeous voice ♥ There's a few note slips but it's simply beautiful~
Songo711 2 years ago
Thank you. I did this so long ago, and ive improved since then, but i just cant bring myself to remake it...
probably because i dont want to record myself playing the indian flute for every background part over and over again... XD
SamFortuna 2 years ago
beautiful voice
phyco90100 2 years ago
so far the best version i have heard, the rest i have listen 2 by others sounded horrible!!! but yours is great i love it u have a great voice :)
XxNannerzxX 2 years ago
thank you so much!
SamFortuna 2 years ago
its lovely. really hypnotic!!
xxezxx 2 years ago
You have an absolutely amazing voice. Your vocals are astounding. I love how you did a full version of this song. So haunting.
This will be favorited :)
AnimeLoverKO 2 years ago
Do you have an mp3 version of this song? This is amazing! (= Definitely the best version I have ever heard yet.
FantasyKingdomGurl9 2 years ago
not yet, but someone has offered to make it for me [since i dont know how]
and when i have it ill put a link in the description.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
i love this poem but it was not John Debney who wrote it it was edgar allan poe. just to let you know
thefeyvampnate 2 years ago
plenty of people have looked into it, and Poe didnt do it. its not even his style...
SamFortuna 2 years ago
your vocals were amazing, but when playing the flute, try to get the sounds to blend and flow into each other.
LadyLuria 2 years ago
0_0''''
yeah sorry, i dont know much about music composition... but thanks for the advice!
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Amazing, wish i could download it XD
queenbrooklyn67 2 years ago
if you can find a way to put the song as an mp3 go right ahead, as long as you put it under my name.
i would do it, but my stupid computer doesn't have the right program to do it.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Thanks but idk how to do it XD
queenbrooklyn67 2 years ago
well if you find out how let me know.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
I know how to do it, I could email you the mp3 if you would like so you can upload it to mega upload and give the link to people who want it.
chatsalot 2 years ago
could you?!
[glomps]
SamFortuna 2 years ago
yeah sure, I just need your email adress so I can do that :D
chatsalot 2 years ago
T^T i dont use my email!! [hides from the 3000 inbox items]
do you have anything else you could send it by?
SamFortuna 2 years ago
haha my inbox is like that too, do you have msn...or I could attempt to load it to mega upload then give you the link, but that never works for me xD
chatsalot 2 years ago
i love your singing
lenapano 2 years ago
thx!
SamFortuna 2 years ago
welcome
lenapano 2 years ago
The recorders are out of tune.
studentoflife01 2 years ago
um, they're hand-made Indian flutes... have not idea how to tune those...
XD
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Oh, my bad. I forgot to come up with a way to ask about the instruments first.
studentoflife01 2 years ago
es okays. i cant tell the difference, i cant tune by ear. i can get the right tune with my voice, but not on another instrument...
SamFortuna 2 years ago
that was grea you have a very huanting voice that makes peple want to listen its very beautiful i loved it
ShadowIchigofox666 2 years ago
Your voice kinda reminds me of Amy Lee's or the lead singer of Within Temptation. It is soooo pretty but a bit haunting which sets a good mood for the poem. Awesome!! (=
FantasyKingdomGurl9 2 years ago
thank you so much, i love both those singers very much so i am glad to hear you say that.
SamFortuna 2 years ago
Hi, Samantha. (This is Akiadoya's new account). Youtube banned my Akiadoya account -.-;
this is my new one.
Once again, you have a beautiful voice =)
WolfBloodRei 2 years ago
thats awesome........
PropertyOfAxel 2 years ago
I love you. And I'll tell you why. Because you have not succumbed to this mysterious force that's been going around claiming this poem was written by my favorite poet. Bless you!
Also your voice is nice :)
juliebogen 2 years ago
Poe fan? XD
SamFortuna 2 years ago