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  • I LOVE the beginning. I think it's quite creative! :)

  • U did Aite but ur voice is to modern and heavy

  • It is good....I like it ^_^

  • It sounds so creepy and so ghostly but so nice i love ur vioce :D

  • Your voice sounds so sweet and beautiful. Keep sing, those 25 people who dislike this are just haters.

    Youtube needs a "awesome" button. :D

  • i'm a Noah^^

  • ur definately an alto. dnt criticize her for her voice being flat. normally sopranos have melody. i thought the video was great and ur voice is amazing!

  • I love the song!!!!!

  • The poem is by Edgar Allan Poe and I'm sorry but your voice is really flat - does not sound good...

  • @BenAllen180180 Actually, this version is not. There's two different versions of this poem. This version is by John Debney.

  • otherwise!

  • this chicks voice is horrible, and i love that she credits someone else with edgar allan poe's poem. YES the John Debney helped write the song for hocus pocus and changed "garden of shadows" to "garden of magic" but there are couple of VERY rare books of poems by EAP with this poem in it. do your research, and get a voice coach.

  • The flute part sounds like a little kid practicing the flute he/she just got! I like it, I think it fits. Good job, I think it's awsome!

  • awwww! I love this. :) ur version is greatt babe :))

  • awwww! I love this. :) ur version is greatt babe :))

  • I don't care what people say u got a great voice I loved your Musican and LaLa's lullaby

  • pretty cool!

    Can you do the My jolly sailor bold song too?

  • I love your voice in this song!!!!!!!! I always hear it!!!! Thanks for your input!!!!! :D :D :D :D

  • it would be better if you kept the volume of your voice a little more even and more together and somewhat suttle but i love your version it is still very whimsicle and yes the poem is by the late, great edgar allan poe

  • @mirandamartha44 I really need to redo this. it was my first recording so its full of all sorts of faults... and ive just given up on who wrote it... ive been caught up in too many wars about it. [cant get on my old account, so i cant change the artists comments]

  • i love this version :)

    you sang it very well!!!!

  • It was so beautiful. It would have been better if there were lyrics. Still it was ENCHANTING!

  • I really love your version of this song, it's very pretty. :3 Lol, I can see why you ARE Noah's voice. D gray man, right? xD I love your voice~

  • @Silvertail11 XD oh man, its been a while. i was noahs voice for an online group called Summer House... unfortunately, it disbanded due to all of us having lives that take up too much of our free time.

  • lol

  • i dont like the flute part >.< i love just the voce though! its eeary and beautiful

  • ....Needs work.

  • @msanime1234567890 i know...

  • This would sound better with a musical accompianiment, like a piano or violin or orchestra or something.

  • @Lizfan2 I wish i knew how to play an instrument so i could... an orchestra?! I dont think i could get one of those...

  • it sounds like this music was made 40 yers ago

  • @iiDeathKitty If i lied and said thats what i was going for, would you believe me?

  • i loved it it cave me chills

  • Yeah the poem was written by poe, give credit where credit is due

  • John Debney. ? um no the poem is by egar allan poe orginally.

  • bloody brilliant, u voice it touched me rite here *points at <3*

  • I don't like the flute part...and I play flute. Lol. It sounds too staccato, I think. Or like someone who JUST learned flute is playing it.

  • @machihuahua

    its just a little indian flute i own... i really cant play it... but i figured it sounded like a little kid playing a tune so i kept it.

  • @SamFortuna You should really look into the poem, it is not written by john debney, just the composition was

  • @machihuahua I think it sounds more like a recorder than a flut, I play the flut as well...

  • i LUV ur voice. its AMAZING

  • your amazing ^.^ 

  • your singing is amazing >.<

  • Wow! well done 5/5

  • The intro gave me goose bumbs.. very nice voice.

  • John Debney had nothing to do with this song.

    It was by the film's original composer, James Horner. He wrote the song with lyrics by Brock Walsh, before leaving the film due to scheduling conflicts (Horner scored 10 movies the year this came out, in 1993)

  • @NL197 The lyrics were written by Edgar Allen Poe which was originally a poem.

  • @pillowiswako okay, but it was adapted by Brock Walsh for James Horner's song. It's a shame the video's author refuses to accept that Debney had nothing to do with this song, though. Horner didn't have time to score the film and recommended Debney take his place.

  • this is amazing

  • you should consider singing evanescence :D tell me when you do!

  • this is beautiful! i think its amazing the flute added an enchantmet to it i think =)

  • Abysmal. Especially towards the end.

  • Beautiful.

  • this is cool!!! ^-^

  • i think it sounds good >o

    i dun think its flat...

    its done well ^^

  • The recorders werent that good and I didnt like when you tried the harmony because your voice was a higher pitch than they could go and that threw it off a little.

  • You're pretty good!

  • Edgar Allen Poe´s Poem "Come Little Children"

    nice but I'd lose the flute

    by the way-Poe died long before hocus pocus so this version is more like the orignal

  • Unfortunately there is no evidence to back up this claim, complete works of Poe do not contain this poem

  • Very impressive i like this better than the original.....

  • You know where's the original? O_O

    Tell me u.u

    And this version is amazing by itself by the way :D

    5/5

  • the original, i believe, is the one from the movie, Hocus Pocus. which is a lot shorter.

    unless XxLavixLovexX is suffering to a version i am unaware of.

  • i love your song

  • you sound very good. are you as beautiful as you sing? i give you a 100%

  • you sing really good.  would you know where i could get the poem to read?

  • i just found it online.

  • why dose your voice remind me of some one??? have you heard of d gray man

  • {[dies laughing] i have done a fandub of Musician, an english and latin version dub of Lala's Lulaby, and a dub of Road's Melody. check them out if you get the chance~

  • @SamFortuna that would explain a lot I've watched most of them... wait a dub of roads melody got to go check that out (lol for real got to hear this)

  • lol

  • Is it okay if i use this song in a video? I will give you credit for the song in my vid.

  • I like your voice but it sounded like you hiccuped in the middle of the song. If it was intentional I'm sorry but it just kinda stuck out at me. I'm not trying to be mean I sincerely like your style.

  • @NekoSarine sounds more like a cough to me...

  • @NekoSarine...yeah.... the hiccup was the highlight for me actually, the rest made my ears bleed

  • ouch, that hurt. jk jk, to each his own, right?

  • can you tell me at what point? [ at what time]

    i hope i can clear up what everyone is talking about.

  • at about 1:34 ish

  • OOOH!

    XD thats not a hiccup! try singing something and try to put ephasis on how sad or painful it is, and you get that kind of choked up noise. really its for effect, i had no idea it gave the wrong impression!

  • oh ok looking back I get it more it just hit me as that at first lol

  • I thought it was a chuckle myself XD

  • beautiful voice

  • wow this is nice. are you using a condenser?

  • this was my first song ive ever recorded, all i did to it was add echo.

  • Beautiful voice! But unfortunately I can not enjoy it, because sitting next to me in a crappy internet cafe Turk who constantly screams into his cell phone. This Dirty kanaka can not be polite for a minute and keep their stupid face.

  • @knabbermann

    ahh the wonders of noise canceling and noise reduction headphones lol i love my headphones :D

  • i hope you can listen to my song when its alittle more quiet...

  • Yes! I finally have an internet connection back home. Your song is really good. you have a really great voice :-)

  • Nice singing :))

    5 Stars*****

  • sorry...which is this anime girl?

  • its just a random picture i found.

  • edgar allen poe = peom

    sources: history book, english book, famous poems, edgar's book.

  • I can't stop listening to this song

  • OMG ! you're so good

  • "Wooden Indian flute"? LOL

    Sounds like a recorder to me.

  • i love the way u sing the somg ihope you dont mind but im us the song in one of my story for my english class u r my insperation thank you

  • bland voice.

  • it was written by edgar allen poe!!!

    the music was written by john debney!

    goddess get it straight!!!

    and your soooo flat

  • i actually sing this song but i think it is a little flat

  • ok ur good but yea your pretty flat

  • u voice is ok but ur sooooooo flat.

  • @smexysisters She's not flat at all actually.... She just goes off key slightly in parts.

  • blaaah

  • this is really good, great voice =D.

  • aw thats good

  • i can see amy lee from evenscence singing this....

  • i wish she would. lol. that would be amazing

  • @JB0523 amy lee is one of my faves...it does kind of sound like her now that i think about it o.o

  • are you singing this?? if so it rocks

  • Youve a very good voice!!!

  • i love this song yr voice is sweet i love it ^.^

  • 1:33 LOL did you have the hiccups?

  • loll

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  • Your voice is nice but the pitch keeps changing which spoils it a bit

  • Lovley voice.

  • i love this song. i use to hum it back in elametry school all the time. man i scared my classmates.

    you sang it peficly.

  • you are very good!! but the link is now dead =( i love the background picture to =)

  • i know, its rather sad. i liked her version alot...

  • Your voice is pretty!!

  • I like your voice. It's very pretty.

  • Very good! :p that song is my lullaby... since a few years ;) Really great version

  • 3/5. Not that I could do any better, especially since I've been sick. I think if you did a straight up a cappella version without any reverb, you would easily get a 5 out of me.

  • thank you, seeing as this was the first song ive ever recorded in my life.

    once i finish moving i plan to record it, but i do rather like the music i did in the background.

  • If this is your first tme recording and making this video than I will have to give you 2 thumbs up. Incredible beginning. After 2:00 its........not as amazing as the beginning lol. And like SamFortuna said, it's not written by Edgar Allen Poe!!!

  • Very Good.

  • Omg this is perfect! this song is just AWESOMEEEEEE!!!!!!!

  • wow that was very good i sound like katy perry that was perfect 5/5

  • I likeit <3

    Ur a good singer

  • care to explain?

  • Umm that's completely rude.

  • im not trying to be rude, i just want to know why. if theres a reason that person believes im not very good, then i would like to improve on it.

  • Not you the person that said you sucked.

  • wow

    nice and u do sound a bit like amy lee

  • u sound like the lead singer of evanescence Amy Lee.

  • Your name "SamFortuna" really fits with this song!

  • Pfffft. i stole 'Fortuna' from Ion Fortuna of Trinity Blood.

  • I love your voice! I favorited this video so I could always listen to it! In my point of view it was PERFECT!

  • You have a gorgeous voice ♥ There's a few note slips but it's simply beautiful~

  • Thank you. I did this so long ago, and ive improved since then, but i just cant bring myself to remake it...

    probably because i dont want to record myself playing the indian flute for every background part over and over again... XD

  • beautiful voice

  • so far the best version i have heard, the rest i have listen 2 by others sounded horrible!!! but yours is great i love it u have a great voice :)

  • thank you so much!

  • its lovely. really hypnotic!!

  • You have an absolutely amazing voice. Your vocals are astounding. I love how you did a full version of this song. So haunting.

    This will be favorited :)

  • Do you have an mp3 version of this song? This is amazing! (= Definitely the best version I have ever heard yet.

  • not yet, but someone has offered to make it for me [since i dont know how]

    and when i have it ill put a link in the description.

  • i love this poem but it was not John Debney who wrote it it was edgar allan poe. just to let you know

  • plenty of people have looked into it, and Poe didnt do it. its not even his style...

  • your vocals were amazing, but when playing the flute, try to get the sounds to blend and flow into each other.

  • 0_0''''

    yeah sorry, i dont know much about music composition... but thanks for the advice!

  • Amazing, wish i could download it XD

  • if you can find a way to put the song as an mp3 go right ahead, as long as you put it under my name.

    i would do it, but my stupid computer doesn't have the right program to do it.

  • Thanks but idk how to do it XD

  • well if you find out how let me know.

  • I know how to do it, I could email you the mp3 if you would like so you can upload it to mega upload and give the link to people who want it.

  • could you?!

    [glomps]

  • yeah sure, I just need your email adress so I can do that :D

  • T^T i dont use my email!! [hides from the 3000 inbox items]

    do you have anything else you could send it by?

  • haha my inbox is like that too, do you have msn...or I could attempt to load it to mega upload then give you the link, but that never works for me xD

  • i love your singing

  • thx!

  • welcome

  • The recorders are out of tune.

  • um, they're hand-made Indian flutes... have not idea how to tune those...

    XD

  • Oh, my bad. I forgot to come up with a way to ask about the instruments first.

  • es okays. i cant tell the difference, i cant tune by ear. i can get the right tune with my voice, but not on another instrument...

  • that was grea you have a very huanting voice that makes peple want to listen its very beautiful i loved it

  • Your voice kinda reminds me of Amy Lee's or the lead singer of Within Temptation. It is soooo pretty but a bit haunting which sets a good mood for the poem. Awesome!! (=

  • thank you so much, i love both those singers very much so i am glad to hear you say that.

  • Hi, Samantha. (This is Akiadoya's new account). Youtube banned my Akiadoya account -.-;

    this is my new one.

    Once again, you have a beautiful voice =)

  • thats awesome........

  • I love you. And I'll tell you why. Because you have not succumbed to this mysterious force that's been going around claiming this poem was written by my favorite poet. Bless you!

    Also your voice is nice :)

  • Poe fan? XD