this is wonderful!! it doesn't feel like you are just reading the lines. it's reallly good. i have a channel where i do all monologues (it's actually this channel, lol) and i am planning on doing this one soon. this was really helpful. good job :D
i like it!but as my tutor suggested, you need to be really specific as to where your mother is,your eyes seem to be wondering about alot!i kept doing that to!and be frustrated,you are wondering around dead and your mother cant see you and theres nothing you can do about it!but i like it,i got goosbumps:)
@thekoules thankyou, and i totally get what your saying about the eyes , sorry haha, im going to try to upload me doing the entire monologue soon, i appreciate your critics :]
@JMB545 hehehe,dont worry about it,i felt the same when my tutor said that about my eyes!i will also upload me doing the entire monologue once ive mastered the art of it!haha!
this is wonderful!! it doesn't feel like you are just reading the lines. it's reallly good. i have a channel where i do all monologues (it's actually this channel, lol) and i am planning on doing this one soon. this was really helpful. good job :D
dreamdaily94 1 year ago
This is actuallly really good, however I do agree with thekoules.
But still, you have talent!
I would love if you could look at my video of the sme monologue i need tips :/
lipshead 1 year ago
i like it!but as my tutor suggested, you need to be really specific as to where your mother is,your eyes seem to be wondering about alot!i kept doing that to!and be frustrated,you are wondering around dead and your mother cant see you and theres nothing you can do about it!but i like it,i got goosbumps:)
thekoules 1 year ago
@thekoules thankyou, and i totally get what your saying about the eyes , sorry haha, im going to try to upload me doing the entire monologue soon, i appreciate your critics :]
JMB545 1 year ago
@JMB545 hehehe,dont worry about it,i felt the same when my tutor said that about my eyes!i will also upload me doing the entire monologue once ive mastered the art of it!haha!
thekoules 1 year ago