room tone can match the reality and visual aesthetic you possess already in your own style of filmmaking. Perhaps a little noise of the fridge, or the subtle hum of the laptop, or the street noise, or cold wind could deepen the overall sound. Overall, VERY impressive film, man. You've definitely established a style in your filmmaking.
Aaron--you have definitely have an incredible ability in setting-up the camera--meaning that your continuity editing is seamless and logical--very pleasing thus to watch--also, your mise-en-scene with your tracking shots looks a lot like Welles--that is, you make a stage out of the mise-en-scene and heighten the realistic effect--a very cool effect-- Your 'background' sound, however, is lacking a little depth--although your audio recording is crystal--
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room tone can match the reality and visual aesthetic you possess already in your own style of filmmaking. Perhaps a little noise of the fridge, or the subtle hum of the laptop, or the street noise, or cold wind could deepen the overall sound. Overall, VERY impressive film, man. You've definitely established a style in your filmmaking.
davazad 4 years ago
Aaron--you have definitely have an incredible ability in setting-up the camera--meaning that your continuity editing is seamless and logical--very pleasing thus to watch--also, your mise-en-scene with your tracking shots looks a lot like Welles--that is, you make a stage out of the mise-en-scene and heighten the realistic effect--a very cool effect-- Your 'background' sound, however, is lacking a little depth--although your audio recording is crystal--
davazad 4 years ago