「home」 English Version(COMPLETE)

[l0r3st0]

thank you, thank you. the lyrics are sweet and moving. it makes me think of a father stricken with illness who would not see his child grow up. or maybe a father whose own dad has passed away.

[l0r3st0]

Is it possible to post the lyrics to this beautiful song?

[thaimai555]

Here is the lyrics of my translation.

On a sunny day, walking in the park with you

I just take your hand in return you hold my hand

The moment you do so with your sweet and tiny hand

Whole myself was lapped over head to toe

I wonder if I can

In the given time of mine

If I can give you back as much as you give to me

Happiness and straight love that fill my heart and over more

Let me just try, on the way to our home

[thaimai555]

Go home sweet home Going home for you and me Walking down to our sunset boulevard Go home sweet home Hand in hand o' you and me One and only in this world my sweet home Oh in these days You give me so much surprise With earliness of growth much more than I could expect I feel so much proud in the same time a little bit sad I don't know why Walk our way step by step...

[thaimai555]

Your innocent smile that can also make me smile The way you move that shows us Mischief you're trying to play Everything of you my pleasure and treasure One and only in this world, my sweet home I can't explain why The more I love you so It comes to me closer more Papa's Papa's love Papa's Mama's heart and everything given to me I cannot help saying 'Thank you all'

[thaimai555]

Back to my home

Back to my home sweet home

Walking down to our sunset boulevard

Go home sweet home

Hand in hand o' you and me

One and only in this world my sweet home

Every time and every day

'Thank you all'

[chiheisen862]

Your English is amazing. O_O

I love this song so much! And you did it really good~!

[thaimai555]

Thanks so much.

The original song is in Japanese.

The singer is Mr. Yusaku Kiyama.

His new album is coming out on 11th Feb, 2009.

Check this out!

[picoharmotimpo]

This is a very nice version and the singing is great! Well done. 私は日本人ではないけど、紅白で初めて見て、感動しました。３人­の母なので、この曲の気持ちがよく分かります。今、カラオケで練­習しているところ。

[thaimai555]

日本人ではない！？でもコメントもしっかり書いておられますし、­素晴らしいですね！

3人のお子さんと一緒にhomeを英語でも歌ってみてくださいね­♪

[hkgene]

Awesome !!

[thaimai555]

Thanks alot!!

[Dooodeshooow]

are you Japanese?

your translation is easy to understand to me, and also it won't change the original meaning!

I think your work's masterpiece!

[thaimai555]

Yes, I'm Japanese.

I tried hard not to change the meaning of original lyrics and make it natural english.

In Elliot Yamin's cover version, the lyrics is changed to fit his style, however I didn't because I love the original.

Anyway, thank you for comment.

It is so much encouraging!

[Dooodeshooow]

日本人の方でしたか！尊敬します

原曲の意味を変えないだけでなく、やさしい英語なので非常にわか­りやすいです。

[Dooodeshooow]

↑すみません、前の自分のコメントとかぶってますね（笑

とにかくthaimaiさんの翻訳すごすぎです。歌も上手いし。­

[taicoXXIVpoke]

日本人ですか〜

道理で原曲の意味が変わらないで

さらに非常に分かりやすいですね〜

これでアメリカ人の友人達にも教えられます！

どうもアリガトウゴザイマス！！！

[thaimai555]

Dooodeshoowさん　歌を褒められても何も出ませんよｗ　ともかく、自信になりました。ありがとうございます。

taicoXXIVpokeさん　遅くなりましたが感想ありがとうございます。　アメリカの方にもこの曲のもつ魅力を伝えてくださいね

[thaimai555]

Thanks alot.

It was really difficult, but I enjoyed.

It took me about a couple of weeks to translate and record.

[dsekizaki]

dang nice job translating.

its always hard to translate lyrics and poems.. and everything. haha

how long did it take you?

[jamesnaruke]

Great job translating the Japanese lyrics to English! You really retained the original lyrical expressions of the song which must have been hard to do.

[thaimai555]

Thank you for appreciating. It was hard but worth doing.

I would like everyone to know the meaning of this beautiful song.

Now I know I did it well.

[jamesnaruke]

You must be fluent in both English and Japanese to be able to do an excellent translation job you did. And who sang the song in English?

[thaimai555]

It's me, singing.

[jamesnaruke]

You are awesome!