You have great information here, however I feel that you might consider re-editing this film.
I had a hard time throughout each of the clips in this series. I completely skipped the intro with the music, I had difficulties with the opening monologue just because of the random walking and angst portrayed.
throughout I found that the segue between scenes/topics was a bit long and in some cases overly dramatic with music. You could easily condence the material down to a more watchable presentation
Having watched large protions of the first 45 minutes, and skimming through the remainder of clips, I reiterate, I found your material of great value.
Perhaps reorganizing each segment to be more fluid with previous sections, removing alot of the extraneous music, you could have a finished product with over an hour of detailed information.
Maybe someday I'll sit and force myself to watch your film from beginning to end, but as it is, I find myself looking beyond your series for other sources
You have great information here, however I feel that you might consider re-editing this film.
I had a hard time throughout each of the clips in this series. I completely skipped the intro with the music, I had difficulties with the opening monologue just because of the random walking and angst portrayed.
throughout I found that the segue between scenes/topics was a bit long and in some cases overly dramatic with music. You could easily condence the material down to a more watchable presentation
sxemo06 3 weeks ago
Having watched large protions of the first 45 minutes, and skimming through the remainder of clips, I reiterate, I found your material of great value.
Perhaps reorganizing each segment to be more fluid with previous sections, removing alot of the extraneous music, you could have a finished product with over an hour of detailed information.
Maybe someday I'll sit and force myself to watch your film from beginning to end, but as it is, I find myself looking beyond your series for other sources
sxemo06 3 weeks ago
Beautiful artistic expression. Can't wait to consume the other 8 parts...
LuminosityEntangled 2 months ago in playlist Ancient Code