Dangerous Game - duet by dragonflower092 and PTOphantom

[DarkJedi202]

The soul of the song is absent. The part where Lucy is supposed to moan No through Hyde's part was lacking, the begining is too young and polished, she's supposed to be shamed and feel locked into an abusive yet entrancing relationship.

And the Hyde doesn't sound overpowering at all, he's nearly inaudible for his first few lines and the shared part isn't supposed to be a duet, it's a dueling part where Hyde dominates her cause that's the relationship.Singing was okay,but the feeling is lost.

[dragonflower092]

@DarkJedi202 I really appreciate the comment...I will take your advice and see if I can make it better! It's hard for me to "rough up" my voice, although I am trying. Thank you for the honest critique - can't get better if I don't know what I'm doing wrong :oP

[Tulip424]

P.S. Mom likes it.

[Tulip424]

The guy in this is really good too.

[Tulip424]

Amazing video Allie! Your best one yet.

[dragonflower092]

@Tulip424

Thanks Sarah :o) Tell mom thanks too!! Love you guys <3

[MusicinMe21]

wow allison that was great your have such a pretty voice and you two sound great together

[dragonflower092]

Thanks!! I appreciate the comment!!

[misscreations]

GREAT job! You inspired me to learn/cover this song! lol it's just lovely and you do a fantastic job!

*I meant to hit the five stars, but it accidentally went to 4 :S .... I MEANT 5 tho!!! haha

***** five stars!

[dragonflower092]

Thanks :oP I'm peeved that YouTube kind of ruined the audio quality, but I really put my heart into this one :o) I know yours will be GREAT! I can't wait to hear it!