How Many More Days - Byron (Rap Song)(Jan-01-2010)

[xskitilesx]

Get the fuck up and go after your dreams try and hit up a few radio stations and freestyle for them or make an ep and release it for free to get noticed

[bxcutie39]

i like ur voice its seductive mixed with pain .....

[RosserProductions]

Nice song, I like the music, and really good lyrics; not too aggressive nor too gentle. Works really well together.

[paulymac]

Nice flo bro! Thumbs up.

Peace!

[Chasity973]

very good . dont give up! (^_^)

[SuperAustin2323]

Byron, your great dude. I've listened to all of your songs so far and its never gotten old. Im going to tell people to watch ur vids man. I hope you make it.. I'd love to listen to your CD's.

[uralumkinman]

keep doing what ur doing cuz its good and i see progressing further everytime u make a song

[SuperAustin2323]

hey bro, your great. i think you should try somethin that changes pace of the song though. like eminem.

[TheRealJasminMcf]

its a good song and it could really get somewhere the only thing missing is it doesnt change its the same all the way through and some people may get bored soo if yuu add in at the chorus a bigger and different beat from the verse it will be more catchy butt it is good well done :D:D

[DylanCtv]

u suck i can do much better! no jk jk nice i like it

[sarahconner11]

Nice flow, cool music, too many cuss words, good topic o_o

[Chasity973]

really nice. and nice voice too! keep it up

[lindts143]

oh very good!! i just think someone should mix the beat differently. other than that sounds great

[CaligirlSofia]

the rap is good but you need a different beat

[yoyoyo481]

I liked this

[RossiSinger]

Absolutely wonderful video! Thanks so much for sending this my way and all the luck with YouTube! :0)

Love, Tamara xx

[sambitch321]

ur garbage



[conejitaandrade]

diZ a GOod soNQq =]

[missjessi09]

Ayee This Good

[OfficialGirl091]

Nice Voice. Nice Song

[RedChekRecordz]

@OfficialGirl091 thanks

[MrSundiefy]

ARE YOU WHITE..... :D

[RedChekRecordz]

no lol

[Xigabar]

This is complete constructive criticism. Your not horrible but you need to work on your flow , delivery, and your lyrical content. Your flow can be smoother there are some bumpy iffy parts. The lyrics are pretty basic but I don't know how long/often you do this so i dont know weather this is the beginning or something you do all the time but there is alot of improvement that you need. compare yourself to different .other rappers and see what differences you have and see if you can close the gap.

[RedChekRecordz]

yeah bro... i get wat u mean im working on new shit and trying to address all those stuff,,

[BxSQUIRREL]

its good.. i like ur voice bro

[RedChekRecordz]

@BxSQUIRREL thanks bro

[AndrewMacedonia]

sick song

brah

-Samba

[ubergirliz1]

Pretty good, but maybe it could flow together a little smoother. :)

[mimineachille90]

reminds me of eminem a lil your good

[flycreoleangel]

i feel u on this one. u gotta wait for ya dreams and try to get it but wen u got it its like how much longer do i have this?

[RedChekRecordz]

more like how long can u keep chasing ure dreams cuz its not like ure a kid forever

[Whammybarr]

i really relate to this song

[quruxx9]

yep u said it, wher da fuck did tym go...i like it uknw..coz its sayin wat am finkin rite about now..

[HBD925]

I got your message, I'm not a rap music fan so I'm not the person to ask, but I've heard a lot of up and comers (I live in the Bay Area right next to Oakland) I'd say you need a good bit of work, but you aren't that bad. With some polish and time you could be on to something.

Keep it up and please keep me posted.

[ChrisPatterson1986]

Got your message. My honest opinion is to make sure you're not trying to be someone you're not. I get a slight "wannabe" feeling when listening to it. A good rapsong has a story to it. Try that.

[RedChekRecordz]

nah bro,, im not copying anybody or tryna be somebody im not,, i dunno wat part of the song cud have made u feel that... im just being myself ,, and trying to make my music as real as possible

[BeatsNRhyms]

niceeeeeeeee

[grabme69]

your verses / rap parts are okay ,, but the chorus doesn't sound good... try to touch up on it a bit to a better catchy tune.

[RedChekRecordz]

thanks guys... im coming out wid a new song soon

[alextryal]

wow this is very cool ... but... (there is a but) for me is sad... maid me cry... you are so good not you soundz like eminem , eminem sounds like you...peace

[CompleteNutter177]

another 5 stars mate

you could be the next eminem no joke

if u find time send me some of ur songs 4 download

gna hav to show evry1 ur tunes

u never know maybe if i get enuff ppl listenin to it nd u get well known u can make it

[BloodLord312]

awesome dude

[Tensolin01]

Thats sick dude good job :D 5/5

[littlegal95]

cool!!=D I like it!=D

[MrSuperSketchy]

nice song man

[albertj5678]

good good has a message in there not like those bull shit songs of today in the hip pop world its all bout the money and the music dose not have no real message but bitch ass showing off how much money they got and shit hip pop died the old school is still in our hearts real musci

[longykid]

yhyh live dis fam u gd!

[MegzWassup1215]

this is soo awesome :)

[Gjmitb23]

Hey I was just reading the comments and I wanted to know is that noodles guy for real cause if he is congrats man you made it I know you will because I am and your the one who inspired me to work at my dream for real so just tell me the out come I'm dyin to know if he's real or not anyway once again congrats

[Gjmitb23]

I noticed that some people are giving you advise to improve which is right fully said you could improve but not much I seriously was hit by this hard I to have a dream so to speak but I've been a little girl about it and haven't really thought how long I could stay dreaming but when I hear this i realize it ain't eva gonna happen unless I work hard at it thanx man keep on makin music

[RedChekRecordz]

omg bro,, u acually get wat im saying.. like that is my whole goal ,, to give my music a message and a meaing and if ure getting something out of this.. that really makes this worthile for me and actually makes me want to make more music

[lilmissIsis]

alright track, i love the passion and emotion in it.

but im a big fan of mutlis and rhyme patterns... one thing you can improve on.

keep it up man.

[RedChekRecordz]

yeah bro,, im a really big fan of that too.,.. i incorporated it a little in this song and also some of my other songs but in the future ill use it more... glad u liked it bro

[gypsywolf2000]

Really good lyrics and tone. Keep listening to music and writing and you'll be ridiculously good.

[RedChekRecordz]

thanks bro

[noodles2910]

man hit me up with lyrics ill show my dad he's a record dealer got justin beiber a record mabe u

[bxcutie39]

really nice im loving it but your tone is kinda weak with the beat but your lyrics are bad

[dannymayfield2k9]

niiiiice track! 5 star from me

[SlimShady853]

Wow, that's really good

[StuffyOlen]

shit, thats good : o

[uhmkasza]

that's pretty good really

[SickAsItGets]

ok for a start

[jeremy0156]

nice this songs sick

[madchild0709]

you got potential. keep pushing forward, i can see much of your influences in the music you write.

keep going :)

[Trriiggaa]

fuckin whack

[982JOE]

nice you got talent

[lpsgirl111]

Awesome! :) Nice job!

[AndyG123456789123456]

nice job dog

awsome

[kingrockkid]

Did pretty good man Sounded like kanye ftl but its still pretty good. Good luck on your path.

[reno1616]

pretty kool

[Chriscornell0019]

haha nice :)

i like it.

[jabbasfan]

i like it

[xPirus26]

nice voice...a lot 2 improve your style...its okay...but u got much potential...u can push a lot more man!! good luck

[w0rmaster]

is this a joke

[MrBLOKESMUNTS]

not my style, sorry!

[ModBeatnikGirl]

you're really freaking good!!!!!!!

[mpizle10]

Damn your Good :-)

[obamaslilbro]

pretty good

[Britcar24hr]

pretty good man

[bigtrippy]

lets just say bass start at the botem reberb in the midel and trebel at the end

[bigtrippy]

hay man have u ever thout of propetral sownd cus that what this kida sownds like

[YoungJuJu3636]

U went hard on dis. I jst had 2 add dis 2 my Favorite

[nOsCoPeR13]

OMFG

[Granada529]

one word AWESOME!!! i LOVE it u did a awesome an awesome job making this

[RedChekRecordz]

thanks bro

[run3sc4p31sk00l]

yea nice man thats pretty good i like it 5 star

[SWEwrestling]

the lyrics are good and make scince but need a little more flow

[francismusic]

nice

[jazperify]

not bad  man

[iiM0RTALY]

ok ok :)

[realmci]

very nice song man.....respect

[theindustryexposed]

Not bad man, you have a good flow and substance

[TeNofQuad]

its aight , some underground raw , good story, post more

[RnBKing64]

it´s Good song!

[hiimrawntoo]

Hot man I love it!!! You have SO many more years i love it!!! love the lyrics

[LegendaryRap]

Woahh. chilled. Love it. One of your best mate keep it up 5/5

[bwmow4]

It's a good song.

[thedjtime]

ITS HOT

[flame444444]

WTF my comment didn't post.anyways good job byron.this one is one of my favs

[thebestcoop14]

wow, i like this one.. this, red chek recordz and sinister are my favorite ones

keep up d good work star

[mcshoebox]

wow i havent heard "star" in ages lol - respect byron sick tune !!

[thebestcoop14]

lol i know right xD