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  • You are actually a pretty good songwriter, storyteller mostly. This was cute. May I humblypass along a few hints I was given by a grammy winner from whom I happened to take a class? Your words are great but jumbled. Kill all extra words. Eg, "I just don't understand this new vampire obsession" - 13 syllables. Try (just a suggestion) "I don't understand vampire obsessions" - 10 syls. It says the same thing, but is easier to sing. Cleaned up with a cool/funny video & this could be great.

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  • This is hilarious!!!!! ! LOVE it! XD I love the things you said between verses,

    "Honestly, you have no idea how hard it is to find a Serta mattress that fits in a coffin"

    LOL

    "Losing you was like a stake through my heart."

    "As I told him to bite me.....and he did." :D

  • This was great! Very catchy. If you love the ukulele, you might want to check out The Rugg Brothers here on youtube if you get a chance. Keep the funny songs coming!

  • Nice Book Collection!!!!

  • Great video! Love your talent and sense of humor!

  • Terrific! I forwarded it to everyone on my list

  • that was too funny

  • Great song and performance!

  • Great !!!

  • Yes - loved it, great words and tune. You are on a roll!

  • Awesome! Thanks so much! :)

  • I "Died" laughing!

  • I see what you did there! ;)

  • oh my gosh!! haha. i love this. i normally turn away from ANYTHING vampire because of how overhyped it is. this is AWESOME lol. you are so freaking talented.

  • Haha! Glad you liked it! :)

  • Super cute and awesome. Just like you :)

  • Oh TYYYYY! :D

  • Bahahahahaha!

  • Sam laughed - mission: accomplished :)

  • S'wonderful, my teenage daughters are gonna love this one!!

  • I do it for the children! ;)

  • LOL! I LOVE IT!!!!

  • YAY! THANK YOU!!!!

  • you are too amazing.

    always. too amazing.

  • Says ALY!!! :D

  • That was perfect! I love it.

  • Awesome - it is now Grumpy APPROVED! :D

  • Awesome!

  • Thanks Ramon!

  • That is excellent! Funny, timely, relevant. Great arrangement and splendid performance.

  • Wow - thanks!!!

  • This made me laugh aloud! You are so great.

  • My job here is DONE! :D

  • Really excellent songwriting! (and playing and singing)

    Well done.

  • Thanks so much!

  • awesome!!!

  • thank you!!!

  • clever song Lisa! vampires are "hot" but not hot at the same time.

  • LOL - best sentence ever.

  • Wow Lisa! You're a natural songwriter. Two in one week, and they were both awesome! You're a great storyteller in song. I don't understand this vampire obsession either!

  • It's traveled to Australia too!? We have an EPIDEMIC on our hands! :)

  • fix dem shelves , i cant concentrate on the uke'in

    sooooperb

  • HAHAHA - yessssss :)

  • Cute song, you should try and record the music track and the vocal track seprately and then mix them at the same level. The uke was alittle loud it wad hard to hear you. Otherwise it was nice.

  • I see what you mean! Thanks for the advice! :)

  • ohhhh lisa, hahaha

    this made me giggle

    arent they like, demons or something?

  • Oh Shani, I'm so glad you embrace my nerdiness :)

  • We need the album, you are very talented! Thanx Thanx Thanx GreatLisa! rain of stars as usual! :°)

  • I'll get my umbrella! :D

  • Love it. More originals!

  • Your wish is my command! :D

  • That was sooooo creative!! I absolutely LOVED it!! Great!! T:)

  • Yay! Thank you so much!!

  • This is another excellent song and a great bit of observational humour. The undead were not considered sexually attractive in my day either which is why my friends couldn't understand my crushes on Freda Jackson, Yvonne Monlaur, Martita Hunt, Carolyn Jones, Yvonne De Carlo, Fenella Fielding or Margaret Thatcher!

  • Never a dull moment with you Tony! :D

  • I agree with Leroy - when's the album out?? Excellent job as usual :)

  • I'll have my people call your people :D

  • Another one for the album Lisa, whens it out?

  • I'll have to ask my agent ;)

  • Vampires suck but not you, you're awesome!

  • Haha - thanks! :D

  • LISA! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! EVERYTHING YOU DO IS AMAZING! You are perfect! :D

  • RICKY! STOP YELLING AT ME! :D Thanks love!

  • Excellent Lisa, great song, great lyrics and beautifully played and sung.

  • Thanks so much John! :)

  • Hahaha oh my gosh this is so perfect. It made me puke sunshine. I like how you talked between the verses, I liked the chord progression, and I loved the ending!

  • Puke sunshine eh? I suddenly feel another song coming on... :D

  • Cool!

  • Woot!

  • this is pretty damn terrific

  • Thanks Lisaaaaa! :)

  • Excellent song, Lisa! How does it feel to be a vamp? And where did he bite you??? Ah, yes, at the front door, you said that in the song... ;-)

  • Cheeky!

  • I second that! :D

  • Oooohhh Yesssss! J Coulter is an apt comparison. Amazing!

    But, a steak thru the heart is okay, if it's angus.

  • mmmm - prime dracula rib.

  • Nice one- you are on a roll! I always figured girls liked vampires because of all the bruised necks I saw in High School.....

  • OW OW! (I wasn't one of those girls by the way...really...no, really) :D

  • Great song!!!! I really like horror stuff and all sorts of monsters but the vampire thing has gotten way out of hand. Ever since Twilight came out the entire young adult section of the bookstore is vampire related.

  • RIGHT!? Ridiculous...glad you could join in the hate with me! :D

  • Just make sure you practice safe sucks --- ahahah ... sorry ... couldn't resist!

  • Now THAT is clever!!! :D

  • Ha Ha! Excellent!! U R a great writer!

  • Thank U! :D

  • soooooooooooo good Lisa- glad I didnt have to wait too long for another one. :) :)

  • I aim to please! :)

  • Such a cool song!

  • Thanks Count Deachula!

  • Likey likey likey!!!

    Jonathan Coulton got himself some real competition in your lyrics! :-D

  • We do have the same "dorky-dead" theme going don't we? LOL

  • Awesome, Lisa! Those vampires, eh? Kind of a pain in the neck, huh? =D

  • HAR HARRRR HARRRRRRR :D

  • Vampire's suck. That is my attraction.

  • I see what you did there.

  • Great song Lisa! I've been a vampire freak since I read Dracula when I was 12.

  • What is this "read" word you speak of? :p Thanks Robin! :)

  • So much awesome is this song! So much is my love for you!

  • I love you toooooooooooo! (In a strictly creepy way)

  • great song lisa!!! thanks for sharing

    Ken G

  • Ha, thanks so much Ken!

  • Lisa, your songwriting-skills are CRAZY AWESOME!!! You Ukestar ^_^

  • Bah! Says SEBI! :D Thank you!!!

  • Fangs ain't what they used to be... men are such bloodsuckers,

  • A.GREED. :D

  • so fun!

  • Yay! Thanks!

  • Really fun tune lisa - ace!

    I take it that's a fluke? How are you getting on with it? Was it an Ohana you were using before? Better/Worse?

  • Thanks Julian! I LOOOOVE my fluke - obsessed, even :) I was primarily using my Mainland tenor before, but the fluke loves my abuse more :)

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