You are actually a pretty good songwriter, storyteller mostly. This was cute. May I humblypass along a few hints I was given by a grammy winner from whom I happened to take a class? Your words are great but jumbled. Kill all extra words. Eg, "I just don't understand this new vampire obsession" - 13 syllables. Try (just a suggestion) "I don't understand vampire obsessions" - 10 syls. It says the same thing, but is easier to sing. Cleaned up with a cool/funny video & this could be great.
This was great! Very catchy. If you love the ukulele, you might want to check out The Rugg Brothers here on youtube if you get a chance. Keep the funny songs coming!
oh my gosh!! haha. i love this. i normally turn away from ANYTHING vampire because of how overhyped it is. this is AWESOME lol. you are so freaking talented.
Wow Lisa! You're a natural songwriter. Two in one week, and they were both awesome! You're a great storyteller in song. I don't understand this vampire obsession either!
Cute song, you should try and record the music track and the vocal track seprately and then mix them at the same level. The uke was alittle loud it wad hard to hear you. Otherwise it was nice.
This is another excellent song and a great bit of observational humour. The undead were not considered sexually attractive in my day either which is why my friends couldn't understand my crushes on Freda Jackson, Yvonne Monlaur, Martita Hunt, Carolyn Jones, Yvonne De Carlo, Fenella Fielding or Margaret Thatcher!
Hahaha oh my gosh this is so perfect. It made me puke sunshine. I like how you talked between the verses, I liked the chord progression, and I loved the ending!
Great song!!!! I really like horror stuff and all sorts of monsters but the vampire thing has gotten way out of hand. Ever since Twilight came out the entire young adult section of the bookstore is vampire related.
You are actually a pretty good songwriter, storyteller mostly. This was cute. May I humblypass along a few hints I was given by a grammy winner from whom I happened to take a class? Your words are great but jumbled. Kill all extra words. Eg, "I just don't understand this new vampire obsession" - 13 syllables. Try (just a suggestion) "I don't understand vampire obsessions" - 10 syls. It says the same thing, but is easier to sing. Cleaned up with a cool/funny video & this could be great.
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malbean24 9 months ago
This is hilarious!!!!! ! LOVE it! XD I love the things you said between verses,
"Honestly, you have no idea how hard it is to find a Serta mattress that fits in a coffin"
LOL
"Losing you was like a stake through my heart."
"As I told him to bite me.....and he did." :D
LunaBellaFemme 10 months ago
This was great! Very catchy. If you love the ukulele, you might want to check out The Rugg Brothers here on youtube if you get a chance. Keep the funny songs coming!
shelovesukeyayaya 1 year ago
Nice Book Collection!!!!
SoLiDSt33L 1 year ago
Great video! Love your talent and sense of humor!
333CreativeGirl 1 year ago
Terrific! I forwarded it to everyone on my list
Pwl47 1 year ago
that was too funny
SmoothCollision 1 year ago
Great song and performance!
OrlokLives 1 year ago
Great !!!
rollerist 2 years ago
Yes - loved it, great words and tune. You are on a roll!
GCEAtuning 2 years ago
Awesome! Thanks so much! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
I "Died" laughing!
bestbytesmedia 2 years ago
I see what you did there! ;)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
oh my gosh!! haha. i love this. i normally turn away from ANYTHING vampire because of how overhyped it is. this is AWESOME lol. you are so freaking talented.
faithtruthlove07 2 years ago
Haha! Glad you liked it! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Super cute and awesome. Just like you :)
kylerco05 2 years ago
Oh TYYYYY! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Bahahahahaha!
Sammyboy72 2 years ago
Sam laughed - mission: accomplished :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
S'wonderful, my teenage daughters are gonna love this one!!
menehunenyc 2 years ago
I do it for the children! ;)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
LOL! I LOVE IT!!!!
ctrymaus 2 years ago
YAY! THANK YOU!!!!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
you are too amazing.
always. too amazing.
uketreehugger 2 years ago
Says ALY!!! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
That was perfect! I love it.
GrumpyCoyoteTunes 2 years ago
Awesome - it is now Grumpy APPROVED! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Awesome!
Rzr416 2 years ago
Thanks Ramon!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
That is excellent! Funny, timely, relevant. Great arrangement and splendid performance.
pearmanator 2 years ago
Wow - thanks!!!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
This made me laugh aloud! You are so great.
helloukulele 2 years ago
My job here is DONE! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Really excellent songwriting! (and playing and singing)
Well done.
phillipsderek 2 years ago
Thanks so much!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
awesome!!!
davedavedavecowan 2 years ago
thank you!!!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
clever song Lisa! vampires are "hot" but not hot at the same time.
russbuss415 2 years ago
LOL - best sentence ever.
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Wow Lisa! You're a natural songwriter. Two in one week, and they were both awesome! You're a great storyteller in song. I don't understand this vampire obsession either!
fourteentwelve 2 years ago
It's traveled to Australia too!? We have an EPIDEMIC on our hands! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
fix dem shelves , i cant concentrate on the uke'in
sooooperb
krabbers 2 years ago
HAHAHA - yessssss :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Cute song, you should try and record the music track and the vocal track seprately and then mix them at the same level. The uke was alittle loud it wad hard to hear you. Otherwise it was nice.
TBone5699 2 years ago
I see what you mean! Thanks for the advice! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
ohhhh lisa, hahaha
this made me giggle
arent they like, demons or something?
shanifawni 2 years ago
Oh Shani, I'm so glad you embrace my nerdiness :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
We need the album, you are very talented! Thanx Thanx Thanx GreatLisa! rain of stars as usual! :°)
Little6ster 2 years ago
I'll get my umbrella! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Love it. More originals!
ukeshale 2 years ago
Your wish is my command! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
That was sooooo creative!! I absolutely LOVED it!! Great!! T:)
agrlfmtx 2 years ago
Yay! Thank you so much!!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
This is another excellent song and a great bit of observational humour. The undead were not considered sexually attractive in my day either which is why my friends couldn't understand my crushes on Freda Jackson, Yvonne Monlaur, Martita Hunt, Carolyn Jones, Yvonne De Carlo, Fenella Fielding or Margaret Thatcher!
casetone2514 2 years ago
Never a dull moment with you Tony! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
I agree with Leroy - when's the album out?? Excellent job as usual :)
Sheepstar15 2 years ago
I'll have my people call your people :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Another one for the album Lisa, whens it out?
errol4bz 2 years ago
I'll have to ask my agent ;)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Vampires suck but not you, you're awesome!
ahnkochee 2 years ago
Haha - thanks! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
LISA! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! EVERYTHING YOU DO IS AMAZING! You are perfect! :D
richardpaulgriffin 2 years ago
RICKY! STOP YELLING AT ME! :D Thanks love!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Excellent Lisa, great song, great lyrics and beautifully played and sung.
johncaudrey 2 years ago
Thanks so much John! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Hahaha oh my gosh this is so perfect. It made me puke sunshine. I like how you talked between the verses, I liked the chord progression, and I loved the ending!
applebritta 2 years ago
Puke sunshine eh? I suddenly feel another song coming on... :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Cool!
floydbluethereal 2 years ago
Woot!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
this is pretty damn terrific
weesamin 2 years ago
Thanks Lisaaaaa! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Excellent song, Lisa! How does it feel to be a vamp? And where did he bite you??? Ah, yes, at the front door, you said that in the song... ;-)
mugambismonkey 2 years ago
Cheeky!
casetone2514 2 years ago
I second that! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Oooohhh Yesssss! J Coulter is an apt comparison. Amazing!
But, a steak thru the heart is okay, if it's angus.
UKISOCIETY 2 years ago
mmmm - prime dracula rib.
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Nice one- you are on a roll! I always figured girls liked vampires because of all the bruised necks I saw in High School.....
UkesterBrown 2 years ago
OW OW! (I wasn't one of those girls by the way...really...no, really) :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Great song!!!! I really like horror stuff and all sorts of monsters but the vampire thing has gotten way out of hand. Ever since Twilight came out the entire young adult section of the bookstore is vampire related.
MrPlatypus70 2 years ago
RIGHT!? Ridiculous...glad you could join in the hate with me! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Just make sure you practice safe sucks --- ahahah ... sorry ... couldn't resist!
liz1060 2 years ago
Now THAT is clever!!! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Ha Ha! Excellent!! U R a great writer!
2924sunny 2 years ago
Thank U! :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
soooooooooooo good Lisa- glad I didnt have to wait too long for another one. :) :)
UnluckyMum 2 years ago
I aim to please! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Such a cool song!
deach69 2 years ago
Thanks Count Deachula!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Likey likey likey!!!
Jonathan Coulton got himself some real competition in your lyrics! :-D
jikvig 2 years ago
We do have the same "dorky-dead" theme going don't we? LOL
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Awesome, Lisa! Those vampires, eh? Kind of a pain in the neck, huh? =D
BigVinny142 2 years ago
HAR HARRRR HARRRRRRR :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Vampire's suck. That is my attraction.
robfaricelli 2 years ago
I see what you did there.
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Great song Lisa! I've been a vampire freak since I read Dracula when I was 12.
BaronK69 2 years ago
What is this "read" word you speak of? :p Thanks Robin! :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
So much awesome is this song! So much is my love for you!
ukulelezo 2 years ago
I love you toooooooooooo! (In a strictly creepy way)
lisaxy424 2 years ago
great song lisa!!! thanks for sharing
Ken G
ken6675 2 years ago
Ha, thanks so much Ken!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Lisa, your songwriting-skills are CRAZY AWESOME!!! You Ukestar ^_^
thesebinextdoor 2 years ago
Bah! Says SEBI! :D Thank you!!!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Fangs ain't what they used to be... men are such bloodsuckers,
weegingayin 2 years ago
A.GREED. :D
lisaxy424 2 years ago
so fun!
jeri7594 2 years ago
Yay! Thanks!
lisaxy424 2 years ago
Really fun tune lisa - ace!
I take it that's a fluke? How are you getting on with it? Was it an Ohana you were using before? Better/Worse?
julianmartin10 2 years ago
Thanks Julian! I LOOOOVE my fluke - obsessed, even :) I was primarily using my Mainland tenor before, but the fluke loves my abuse more :)
lisaxy424 2 years ago