may i remind you that this is not like the sims expansion because it's a whole new game that get install to work with the 1st and only game. no more gears of war 2 or 3 or 4 or 16. is just gears of war. and the expansions are the new games. this would save the gaming industry from stress and market crash and save them self lot's of money and the consumers.
the games would be much better cause they can improve on the first game and it would be more fun you know have more worlds to explorer.
just want to clarify the expansion new idea. let say you buy gears of war 1 and then 2 came out. and you just have to have to continue the series but you still have to pay let say $69.99 plus tax ouch!! really hurts the 2nd time. now my idea would be to improve and add new world characters and everything else to the first game at a fraction like $20.00.so now you can enjoy the "SAME" game with added new things like oblivion and shiver isle same game with another game attach to it make a bigGame.
sorry part 2 final point/ just look at the gaming industry all games are the same shit you play 1 you play them all. y is that because their think like you they think about doing this in a traditional format now nobody has good gaming ideas they just ran out they are stuck. i,m glad for hackers cuz then you have to buy the same game more than once. how about instead of new games they build upon an existing game and improve on it. like just keep adding expansions and reduce cost.
last words i promise/ I use to think traditional was cool but it's just a hack a fraud to make money. that's why they only air 1 or 2 show at a time back in the days to hide the truth from us. each and every show is the same shit with minor different. and now you know what they do those big shots Hollywood bastards they mix it all up. and just put what ever comes to mind into their movie projects. no more stories just wright down anything and we will publish it. it's all a fucking scam! 4 cash.
i mean traditional in the past only work because their was no internet around and their for everything seem different all the time. but now the internet let's you see everything in 1 big continues loop and you what we notice. that is all the same shit over and over and over again and again. like all my comments that just get boring and annoying right! the internet has open my eyes.
do you need some kind of inspiration then think.then just look at some of the best artist around use them to your advantages. like as before bruce lee, micheal jackson, hitler, shigeru miyamoto (the guy who created super mario ). walt disney himself not his cartoons only.all of them have something in comment they are there own person they spat on other peoples faces and went their own way. fuck traditional it's stupid and a big waste of fucking time. make your own traditional.
you know what you should do just take out all of your stories or scripts and burn them all/ start fresh with a new idea never done before just do it. because if you continue then you will end up animating the same old boring stories one after another than no one really likes. each new story should be different and is totally you. do like bruce lee when he created his own martial art and even disrespected his own country with betrayed of kung fu to jeet kwon do "be water my friend".
ps: your not a bad artist, your just a corrupt artist with the rest of them and the media. separate your self from them or even the world. so you can find something new and good without remorse.
an artist has to stop being so serious about his work. your suppose to have fun with it not berry your self in problems by being serious. and that's why you fail at this u got serious and and forgot how to have fun. you want your audience to have fun with your work, you want your time and effort to mean something. just forget about your ultimate ego (fame-money-and even what fans you will get and reviews) think about how much fun this is just immerse yourself with your work become it.
don't tell me this is your first animation. because if it is then you fail at yourself as an animator and artist something teacher just do teach. to have a true artist ego set aside and do what a true artist must do. and just about every artist just fails and that is to bring out your real 100% work out first before you send your crappy stuff out. it's all about first expressions not be too quick about uploading the first project you work on save those for after your real one.
in stead of a book to read she can read the line of a tree because tree have their ways of communication and she understand them she actually read the line threads of trees. which helps her with knowing all of like secrets or mysteries. this will now be an opening to a whole new venture for you to create a new form of life or new ideas. and when she talks to the trees it's in a whole new dimension and she has to listen for frequencies like a radio to mars kinda thing i don't know it's ur story.
here a few pointers and new fresh ideas or ideas that hardly get's used anymore for this particular scene.just scratch your head a bit and think how about maybe instead of using that dino guy why not use a fresh made up unique creature some new and bizarre even. just a new face for a change and the girl should be on steroids and all puffy and muscular. with a long tail coming from her back of the head (but she still a kid but musculus) that can makes her pick up small surrounding vibrations.
when you make excuses like this it only show how weak you really are. you tell your self i will just do what comes to mind but unconsciously your just doing something someone else is doing. and that someone else is doing what the other guy is doing. it's a loop because people like you think this way.
i will uploaded in dew time. but do you ever listen to your self i mean is this the type of excuses you like making for yourself.yes their everything in the world that's y i can't do anything else different i have to follow others because is what's expected of me. the harder you think of something the harder it is to make just relax let it be flow with it and you will see a whole new arsenal of new fresh ideas. just look at Hollywood all there movies are the same crap it's boring.
mmmm wel mmm where have i seen this pattern of behavior before. ahh! yes at Disney land. from like numerous of titles like lion king ,jungle book, Tarzan , mickey mouse, and pokemon. not so original. man i,m tired of all these copycats who can't come up with their own original and style. your just a hack like family guy copying the Simpsons.
Considering there's a story about practically everything in this world, it's pretty hard to come up with an entirely original story. If you, however, can come up with one then by all means upload it and show us. I'm sure everyone's just DYING to see it...
You know... if you flesh out the story ideas you could pitch it online to any mayor cable corporation, same thing happened to adventure time, see if you like the idea of pitching for cartoon network or another channel. ^_^
That's very pretty and cute. I'm equally thrilled that it's completely original - that's really something you two can be proud of! Does that mean the bird sounds are from where you live?
lol, my first reaction... "OMG, it's Korra!" (legend of korra) the walking animations felt a bit akward, but didn't ruin anything. I didn't really pick up on any story though. The relationship between the girl and the monster was established and thats the end. But maybe I missed something with the book...
Loved it!! So magical with the Dragon and so inspiring to read books! But what I like the most is that the girl has this native american look, they are not models that often...
I think you both did an amazing job on this. Very nicely animated! I love how serene everything looks... makes me want to sit under a tree and read myself!
I love the smile of the dinosaur-like thing (forgive me, I'm not familiar with your work or anything yet) with the book in it's mouth. That was very cute and very well done. Nice job on this :)
The music in this is enchanting and sweet as is the beautiful animation. it's welcoming to the viewer and warm thoughts of beauty entrance the imagination. Beatiful. I love the dragon and the cuteness between the characters. The drawings are smooth and clean as is the animation. In my favorites. What film festival was this played at?
OMG This is a disgrace to humanity! It is clearly stated in the bible that any use of 'magic' or 'witchcraft' is the devil's work. Just look at that ABOMINATION of an animal. GOD didnt create that!!
...haha just kidding just kidding.
Just mocking the super-uber christians that say bad stuff about anything.
GREAT Animation short, absolutely love wordless shorts. It has a certain feel of serenity and simplicity to it. I look forward to more of your work.
aww man! the other music I think was much better! It gave it a more mystical feel it was wonderful when it had the old music. I love the animation just I liked the old music better.
Eh, DeviantArt is too slooooooow, but I managed to watch half of it before my computer died. ;_; So all I can say is, beautiful music, and...nice tweening with the grass at the start. O_o.
Amazing dude! Just amazing!!!!
0WolfDemonGirl0 3 weeks ago
:"D i wanna pet dragon lizard thingie!!!! <3333
HisDarkAngel4911 3 weeks ago
Awww... X3
NekosanShun 4 weeks ago
who the heck are you talk to lol
NamiNomiCupcakeStar 1 month ago
may i remind you that this is not like the sims expansion because it's a whole new game that get install to work with the 1st and only game. no more gears of war 2 or 3 or 4 or 16. is just gears of war. and the expansions are the new games. this would save the gaming industry from stress and market crash and save them self lot's of money and the consumers.
the games would be much better cause they can improve on the first game and it would be more fun you know have more worlds to explorer.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
just want to clarify the expansion new idea. let say you buy gears of war 1 and then 2 came out. and you just have to have to continue the series but you still have to pay let say $69.99 plus tax ouch!! really hurts the 2nd time. now my idea would be to improve and add new world characters and everything else to the first game at a fraction like $20.00.so now you can enjoy the "SAME" game with added new things like oblivion and shiver isle same game with another game attach to it make a bigGame.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
instead of playing a new same game.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
sorry part 2 final point/ just look at the gaming industry all games are the same shit you play 1 you play them all. y is that because their think like you they think about doing this in a traditional format now nobody has good gaming ideas they just ran out they are stuck. i,m glad for hackers cuz then you have to buy the same game more than once. how about instead of new games they build upon an existing game and improve on it. like just keep adding expansions and reduce cost.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
last words i promise/ I use to think traditional was cool but it's just a hack a fraud to make money. that's why they only air 1 or 2 show at a time back in the days to hide the truth from us. each and every show is the same shit with minor different. and now you know what they do those big shots Hollywood bastards they mix it all up. and just put what ever comes to mind into their movie projects. no more stories just wright down anything and we will publish it. it's all a fucking scam! 4 cash.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
i mean traditional in the past only work because their was no internet around and their for everything seem different all the time. but now the internet let's you see everything in 1 big continues loop and you what we notice. that is all the same shit over and over and over again and again. like all my comments that just get boring and annoying right! the internet has open my eyes.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
let not forget our dear Gorge w. bush. who reck everything but did what he wanted.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
do you need some kind of inspiration then think.then just look at some of the best artist around use them to your advantages. like as before bruce lee, micheal jackson, hitler, shigeru miyamoto (the guy who created super mario ). walt disney himself not his cartoons only.all of them have something in comment they are there own person they spat on other peoples faces and went their own way. fuck traditional it's stupid and a big waste of fucking time. make your own traditional.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
you know what you should do just take out all of your stories or scripts and burn them all/ start fresh with a new idea never done before just do it. because if you continue then you will end up animating the same old boring stories one after another than no one really likes. each new story should be different and is totally you. do like bruce lee when he created his own martial art and even disrespected his own country with betrayed of kung fu to jeet kwon do "be water my friend".
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
ps: your not a bad artist, your just a corrupt artist with the rest of them and the media. separate your self from them or even the world. so you can find something new and good without remorse.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
an artist has to stop being so serious about his work. your suppose to have fun with it not berry your self in problems by being serious. and that's why you fail at this u got serious and and forgot how to have fun. you want your audience to have fun with your work, you want your time and effort to mean something. just forget about your ultimate ego (fame-money-and even what fans you will get and reviews) think about how much fun this is just immerse yourself with your work become it.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
don't tell me this is your first animation. because if it is then you fail at yourself as an animator and artist something teacher just do teach. to have a true artist ego set aside and do what a true artist must do. and just about every artist just fails and that is to bring out your real 100% work out first before you send your crappy stuff out. it's all about first expressions not be too quick about uploading the first project you work on save those for after your real one.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
in stead of a book to read she can read the line of a tree because tree have their ways of communication and she understand them she actually read the line threads of trees. which helps her with knowing all of like secrets or mysteries. this will now be an opening to a whole new venture for you to create a new form of life or new ideas. and when she talks to the trees it's in a whole new dimension and she has to listen for frequencies like a radio to mars kinda thing i don't know it's ur story.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
here a few pointers and new fresh ideas or ideas that hardly get's used anymore for this particular scene.just scratch your head a bit and think how about maybe instead of using that dino guy why not use a fresh made up unique creature some new and bizarre even. just a new face for a change and the girl should be on steroids and all puffy and muscular. with a long tail coming from her back of the head (but she still a kid but musculus) that can makes her pick up small surrounding vibrations.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
when you make excuses like this it only show how weak you really are. you tell your self i will just do what comes to mind but unconsciously your just doing something someone else is doing. and that someone else is doing what the other guy is doing. it's a loop because people like you think this way.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
i will uploaded in dew time. but do you ever listen to your self i mean is this the type of excuses you like making for yourself.yes their everything in the world that's y i can't do anything else different i have to follow others because is what's expected of me. the harder you think of something the harder it is to make just relax let it be flow with it and you will see a whole new arsenal of new fresh ideas. just look at Hollywood all there movies are the same crap it's boring.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
mmmm wel mmm where have i seen this pattern of behavior before. ahh! yes at Disney land. from like numerous of titles like lion king ,jungle book, Tarzan , mickey mouse, and pokemon. not so original. man i,m tired of all these copycats who can't come up with their own original and style. your just a hack like family guy copying the Simpsons.
toonyfatninjas 1 month ago
@toonyfatninjas
Considering there's a story about practically everything in this world, it's pretty hard to come up with an entirely original story. If you, however, can come up with one then by all means upload it and show us. I'm sure everyone's just DYING to see it...
DisneyDoII 1 month ago
Well done!
Thomaszz85 1 month ago
You know... if you flesh out the story ideas you could pitch it online to any mayor cable corporation, same thing happened to adventure time, see if you like the idea of pitching for cartoon network or another channel. ^_^
videosammy 1 month ago
What? That was it? I WANT MORE!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! GREAT JOB!! I loved the girl's pants :)
princessthyemis 1 month ago
i just loved the dragon!!...so cute and likes to make jokes
QueenofDragon 2 months ago
Very nice!
RedWingedAngel02 2 months ago
IT LOOKS LIKE A MIXTURE OF TIGER, HORSE, DOG AND HECK IF I KNOW WHAT IT WAS MIXED WITH!
ytvration 2 months ago
very very impressive I loved it!! great job. I want a pet like that, and pants like that too.
morsafeliz 3 months ago
8 people do not value the work that I need to make this video
kachisakunya 3 months ago
that was so adorable <3
LimitNine 3 months ago
The dragon was so cute! <3
animegamer1234 4 months ago
wooooow!!!! .OO
2k2i2s2h2a 4 months ago
thumb up if you cracked up at the dragon's face at 1:08
LynguriZ 4 months ago
im gonna go to my mum and ask her if i can get a horse dragon :D
wildface97 4 months ago
I just fell in love with your dragon-creature. x3
Hijinxify 4 months ago
I don't get it
kiramanning 5 months ago
hard work, congratulations!!!!!
TWOWINGEDCAM 5 months ago
awsome beans
japisme 6 months ago
That's very pretty and cute. I'm equally thrilled that it's completely original - that's really something you two can be proud of! Does that mean the bird sounds are from where you live?
iFire13 7 months ago
Very nice!
PaulinoAuyon 8 months ago
lol, my first reaction... "OMG, it's Korra!" (legend of korra) the walking animations felt a bit akward, but didn't ruin anything. I didn't really pick up on any story though. The relationship between the girl and the monster was established and thats the end. But maybe I missed something with the book...
EnvyMy75 8 months ago
I just love the style and the animation!
Kudos to all that hard work and effort. :-) ^^
Zephyrrix 10 months ago
Then... they had sex. No questions asked
2BCBattlefield 11 months ago 19
sweet
Stallnig 1 year ago
it's great!
lovegood1990 1 year ago
absolutely perfect and calming! ~
akurachaan 1 year ago
i want a horse dragon lizard thing
rockeen0 1 year ago
@rockeen0 I want one too X3
KittyKat200785 1 year ago
das beste
MrPsycho8588 1 year ago
Beautiful! How cute can a dragon be? I love the dragon <33
TheWolfsMoon 1 year ago
this music made me want to fall asleep. it was nice
srocket122 1 year ago
It's our special motion theatre "The Book of Pandora" the book that holds a secret to pandora's civilization, so secretive, we need a blind hero.
bogercs 1 year ago
Very beautiful animation, all the hard work has paid off! :)
TheDigitaLeon 1 year ago
This is gorgeous, and you've told so much in such a brief exchange of glances and sounds without ever having to utter a single word. Beautiful.
PinstripedFanny 1 year ago
wow this is cool.i wish i could do this.
FightsRightsAlways 1 year ago
Aww! That was so cute ! That big guy was just so adorable. His expressions, ah! I loved this.
RuinofDarkness 1 year ago
amazing=) very good work ^^
botenfalke 1 year ago
SO cute! I loved it ^^
Arabelladarcy 1 year ago
Adorable animation!
ZealonChaosMagi 1 year ago
1:13 sooooooo cuuuute!!! moe overload ~ 8D
i'd love to see a work of yours hit the big screen :}
illurvenistasartir 1 year ago
Loved it!! So magical with the Dragon and so inspiring to read books! But what I like the most is that the girl has this native american look, they are not models that often...
Aeore506 1 year ago
man u are good!
johnvip123 1 year ago
major lols at 1:10 X3
so cute =^-^=
kuuchan12 1 year ago
Good animation! I love at how you brought the characters to life! You expressed them perfectly!
SimlishSammy 1 year ago
aww so cute
i love that dragon/horse/dog thing...so cute <3 :)
I want one!
nddlj 1 year ago
Thank goodness it wasn't a box.
Beautiful animation.
crazy4sian 1 year ago
I do like it a lot, it's just that there are some movements that are rather choppy, or simply lack anticipation.. but overall its really good.
tomvanharmelen 2 years ago 4
Good facial expressions and animation and everything! This is so cute!
KirbyPug232 2 years ago
Awesome animation! 5/5
I love the character designs and the personalities through their movements and facial expressions! The music went well with it too.
Rachey827 2 years ago 47
I LUV IT!!!
origal678 2 years ago 3
i love it plz help me can't do animation good
Kittygrl71 2 years ago 2
Do allot of research on what you are going to animate by using reference photographs, studying film reals and or doing actions in front of a mirror.
laserkatana 2 years ago 3
Muito belo, parabéns
Observadornegro 2 years ago
cute!
josiemahre 2 years ago 3
I think you both did an amazing job on this. Very nicely animated! I love how serene everything looks... makes me want to sit under a tree and read myself!
VenetianSky 2 years ago 2
kooool!
fullmetalvoice 2 years ago
This is one of the cutest things I've ever seen!
someubersweetness 2 years ago
I love the smile of the dinosaur-like thing (forgive me, I'm not familiar with your work or anything yet) with the book in it's mouth. That was very cute and very well done. Nice job on this :)
CristyaBlade 2 years ago
Amazing, Etoli, the characters and music are enchanting, you and you friend have done a magnificent job on this.
Karaeborg 2 years ago
Great work, it says alot when you can make something appealing without dialogue based on the charm of the principles of animation.
oOKitty86Oo 3 years ago
lol, happy dragon thing! It reminded me of a dolphin.
0taytechnicolor0 3 years ago
this short animation is good it would make a great introduction
08071987 3 years ago
That was great and also loved, the touch of magic......
magicalwriter 3 years ago
I loved it :)
ArekkuTrax 3 years ago
That was cute. Great music. Good luck in the future!
slownsilent 3 years ago
1:10 = :3
I love wordless shorts. These two characters are simply charming. And the animation is great too. <3 5/5
trivinia 3 years ago 2
The music in this is enchanting and sweet as is the beautiful animation. it's welcoming to the viewer and warm thoughts of beauty entrance the imagination. Beatiful. I love the dragon and the cuteness between the characters. The drawings are smooth and clean as is the animation. In my favorites. What film festival was this played at?
GingerAnne 3 years ago
wish i could draw as good as you
dragonstame 3 years ago
i think she was missing some toes? but overall pretty cool. i cant draw for crap.
LuckyDuckster15 3 years ago 2
The dragon's smile made me laugh.
ShadowSoldior 3 years ago
Cute, I wish I could draw =P
writergirl123 3 years ago 3
very cute
tlsafir 3 years ago
aww that was cute :D I liked it
lyssnessxoxo 3 years ago 2
OMG This is a disgrace to humanity! It is clearly stated in the bible that any use of 'magic' or 'witchcraft' is the devil's work. Just look at that ABOMINATION of an animal. GOD didnt create that!!
...haha just kidding just kidding.
Just mocking the super-uber christians that say bad stuff about anything.
GREAT Animation short, absolutely love wordless shorts. It has a certain feel of serenity and simplicity to it. I look forward to more of your work.
sablesoul 3 years ago 4
got me there for a second... ^.^
lkjh371415 3 years ago
so cute!!! ^_^
lyradancer 3 years ago
thats some skill right there!!
dancingandmusic 3 years ago
so cute
=)
cajoja13 3 years ago
I want a dragon-puppy thing...
KitsuneFai 3 years ago
sooo it that kid a boy or girl??
bumbelbee21 3 years ago
i... think, it's a girl (cause it's pandora's book) but i could be wrong
Monkeyman701 3 years ago
WE MUST STOP MANBEARPIG
wemuststopmanbearpig 3 years ago
Talk about tastless humor.
TheCr1mson 3 years ago
love it
dudemanio 3 years ago
nice
violetphoenix13 3 years ago
Wow. That was, quite simply put, amazing.
Good job, to you both! *claps*
TriXter21 3 years ago
what is the dragon's name? he is so cute!
Gylfie13 3 years ago
I believe the dragon's name is Kahlu.. or Kaluh can't remember for certain but it was something like that
flegglespleen 3 years ago
wow, how long did that take? How hard was it to do? did you use toonboom, flash, or a little of both?
NoBudgetFilms7 3 years ago
wow, how long did this take? how hard is this to do? did you use toonboom, flash, or a little of both?
NoBudgetFilms7 3 years ago
This was really nicely done :) xx
XxAlissienxX 4 years ago
Really nicely animated, and you've done the expressions really well.
AntarcticDreamer 4 years ago
Good job!!! It's really well done of you and well animated.
Grunt8696 4 years ago
I love that innocent look he gave her. It made me laugh.
TinorialPeredhil 4 years ago 2
Beautiful!~
Ratchet9899 4 years ago
aww man! the other music I think was much better! It gave it a more mystical feel it was wonderful when it had the old music. I love the animation just I liked the old music better.
neji11 4 years ago
more beautiful than ever! good luck at festival!
Corai 4 years ago
so purty! X3
GaitiaTan 4 years ago
This is awesome as always!
May I ask how you managed to get a flash movie on this site though? I'd love to know. Thanks!
bladesfire 4 years ago
Very good staging. For close-ups and detail shots, try animating the whole character in a comfortable size, and cutting it to final size later.
fabianfucci 4 years ago
Eh, DeviantArt is too slooooooow, but I managed to watch half of it before my computer died. ;_; So all I can say is, beautiful music, and...nice tweening with the grass at the start. O_o.
etrurianmage 4 years ago
Amazing, good luck!
Bampy 4 years ago