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  • Amazing dude! Just amazing!!!!

  • :"D i wanna pet dragon lizard thingie!!!! <3333

  • Awww... X3

  • who the heck are you talk to lol

  • may i remind you that this is not like the sims expansion because it's a whole new game that get install to work with the 1st and only game. no more gears of war 2 or 3 or 4 or 16. is just gears of war. and the expansions are the new games. this would save the gaming industry from stress and market crash and save them self lot's of money and the consumers.

    the games would be much better cause they can improve on the first game and it would be more fun you know have more worlds to explorer.

  • just want to clarify the expansion new idea. let say you buy gears of war 1 and then 2 came out. and you just have to have to continue the series but you still have to pay let say $69.99 plus tax ouch!! really hurts the 2nd time. now my idea would be to improve and add new world characters and everything else to the first game at a fraction like $20.00.so now you can enjoy the "SAME" game with added new things like oblivion and shiver isle same game with another game attach to it make a bigGame.

  • instead of playing a new same game.

  • sorry part 2 final point/ just look at the gaming industry all games are the same shit you play 1 you play them all. y is that because their think like you they think about doing this in a traditional format now nobody has good gaming ideas they just ran out they are stuck. i,m glad for hackers cuz then you have to buy the same game more than once. how about instead of new games they build upon an existing game and improve on it. like just keep adding expansions and reduce cost.

  • last words i promise/ I use to think traditional was cool but it's just a hack a fraud to make money. that's why they only air 1 or 2 show at a time back in the days to hide the truth from us. each and every show is the same shit with minor different. and now you know what they do those big shots Hollywood bastards they mix it all up. and just put what ever comes to mind into their movie projects. no more stories just wright down anything and we will publish it. it's all a fucking scam! 4 cash.

  • i mean traditional in the past only work because their was no internet around and their for everything seem different all the time. but now the internet let's you see everything in 1 big continues loop and you what we notice. that is all the same shit over and over and over again and again. like all my comments that just get boring and annoying right! the internet has open my eyes.

  • let not forget our dear Gorge w. bush. who reck everything but did what he wanted.

  • do you need some kind of inspiration then think.then just look at some of the best artist around use them to your advantages. like as before bruce lee, micheal jackson, hitler, shigeru miyamoto (the guy who created super mario ). walt disney himself not his cartoons only.all of them have something in comment they are there own person they spat on other peoples faces and went their own way. fuck traditional it's stupid and a big waste of fucking time. make your own traditional.

  • you know what you should do just take out all of your stories or scripts and burn them all/ start fresh with a new idea never done before just do it. because if you continue then you will end up animating the same old boring stories one after another than no one really likes. each new story should be different and is totally you. do like bruce lee when he created his own martial art and even disrespected his own country with betrayed of kung fu to jeet kwon do "be water my friend".

  • ps: your not a bad artist, your just a corrupt artist with the rest of them and the media. separate your self from them or even the world. so you can find something new and good without remorse.

  • an artist has to stop being so serious about his work. your suppose to have fun with it not berry your self in problems by being serious. and that's why you fail at this u got serious and and forgot how to have fun. you want your audience to have fun with your work, you want your time and effort to mean something. just forget about your ultimate ego (fame-money-and even what fans you will get and reviews) think about how much fun this is just immerse yourself with your work become it.

  • don't tell me this is your first animation. because if it is then you fail at yourself as an animator and artist something teacher just do teach. to have a true artist ego set aside and do what a true artist must do. and just about every artist just fails and that is to bring out your real 100% work out first before you send your crappy stuff out. it's all about first expressions not be too quick about uploading the first project you work on save those for after your real one.

  • in stead of a book to read she can read the line of a tree because tree have their ways of communication and she understand them she actually read the line threads of trees. which helps her with knowing all of like secrets or mysteries. this will now be an opening to a whole new venture for you to create a new form of life or new ideas. and when she talks to the trees it's in a whole new dimension and she has to listen for frequencies like a radio to mars kinda thing i don't know it's ur story.

  • here a few pointers and new fresh ideas or ideas that hardly get's used anymore for this particular scene.just scratch your head a bit and think how about maybe instead of using that dino guy why not use a fresh made up unique creature some new and bizarre even. just a new face for a change and the girl should be on steroids and all puffy and muscular. with a long tail coming from her back of the head (but she still a kid but musculus) that can makes her pick up small surrounding vibrations.

  • when you make excuses like this it only show how weak you really are. you tell your self i will just do what comes to mind but unconsciously your just doing something someone else is doing. and that someone else is doing what the other guy is doing. it's a loop because people like you think this way.

  • i will uploaded in dew time. but do you ever listen to your self i mean is this the type of excuses you like making for yourself.yes their everything in the world that's y i can't do anything else different i have to follow others because is what's expected of me. the harder you think of something the harder it is to make just relax let it be flow with it and you will see a whole new arsenal of new fresh ideas. just look at Hollywood all there movies are the same crap it's boring.

  • mmmm wel mmm where have i seen this pattern of behavior before. ahh! yes at Disney land. from like numerous of titles like lion king ,jungle book, Tarzan , mickey mouse, and pokemon. not so original. man i,m tired of all these copycats who can't come up with their own original and style. your just a hack like family guy copying the Simpsons.

  • @toonyfatninjas

    Considering there's a story about practically everything in this world, it's pretty hard to come up with an entirely original story. If you, however, can come up with one then by all means upload it and show us. I'm sure everyone's just DYING to see it...

  • Well done!

  • You know... if you flesh out the story ideas you could pitch it online to any mayor cable corporation, same thing happened to adventure time, see if you like the idea of pitching for cartoon network or another channel. ^_^

  • What? That was it? I WANT MORE!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! GREAT JOB!! I loved the girl's pants :)

  • i just loved the dragon!!...so cute and likes to make jokes

  • Very nice!

  • IT LOOKS LIKE A MIXTURE OF TIGER, HORSE, DOG AND HECK IF I KNOW WHAT IT WAS MIXED WITH!

  • very very impressive I loved it!! great job. I want a pet like that, and pants like that too.

  • 8 people do not value the work that I need to make this video

  • that was so adorable <3

  • The dragon was so cute! <3

  • wooooow!!!! .OO

  • thumb up if you cracked up at the dragon's face at 1:08

  • im gonna go to my mum and ask her if i can get a horse dragon :D

  • I just fell in love with your dragon-creature. x3

  • I don't get it

  • hard work, congratulations!!!!!

  • awsome beans

  • That's very pretty and cute. I'm equally thrilled that it's completely original - that's really something you two can be proud of! Does that mean the bird sounds are from where you live?

  • Very nice!

  • lol, my first reaction... "OMG, it's Korra!" (legend of korra) the walking animations felt a bit akward, but didn't ruin anything. I didn't really pick up on any story though. The relationship between the girl and the monster was established and thats the end. But maybe I missed something with the book...

  • I just love the style and the animation!

    Kudos to all that hard work and effort. :-) ^^

  • Then... they had sex. No questions asked

  • sweet

  • it's great!

  • absolutely perfect and calming! ~

  • i want a horse dragon lizard thing

  • @rockeen0 I want one too X3

  • das beste

  • Beautiful! How cute can a dragon be? I love the dragon <33

  • this music made me want to fall asleep. it was nice

  • It's our special motion theatre "The Book of Pandora" the book that holds a secret to pandora's civilization, so secretive, we need a blind hero.

  • Very beautiful animation, all the hard work has paid off! :)

  • This is gorgeous, and you've told so much in such a brief exchange of glances and sounds without ever having to utter a single word. Beautiful.

  • wow this is cool.i wish i could do this.

  • Aww! That was so cute ! That big guy was just so adorable. His expressions, ah! I loved this.

  • amazing=) very good work ^^

  • SO cute! I loved it ^^

  • Adorable animation!

  • 1:13 sooooooo cuuuute!!! moe overload ~ 8D

    i'd love to see a work of yours hit the big screen :}

  • Loved it!! So magical with the Dragon and so inspiring to read books! But what I like the most is that the girl has this native american look, they are not models that often...

  • man u are good!

  • major lols at 1:10 X3

    so cute =^-^=

  • Good animation! I love at how you brought the characters to life! You expressed them perfectly!

  • aww so cute

    i love that dragon/horse/dog thing...so cute <3 :)

    I want one!

  • Thank goodness it wasn't a box.

    Beautiful animation.

  • I do like it a lot, it's just that there are some movements that are rather choppy, or simply lack anticipation.. but overall its really good.

  • Good facial expressions and animation and everything! This is so cute!

  • Awesome animation! 5/5

    I love the character designs and the personalities through their movements and facial expressions! The music went well with it too.

  • I LUV IT!!!

  • i love it plz help me can't do animation good

  • Do allot of research on what you are going to animate by using reference photographs, studying film reals and or doing actions in front of a mirror.

  • Muito belo, parabéns

  • cute!

  • I think you both did an amazing job on this. Very nicely animated! I love how serene everything looks... makes me want to sit under a tree and read myself!

  • kooool!

  • This is one of the cutest things I've ever seen!

  • I love the smile of the dinosaur-like thing (forgive me, I'm not familiar with your work or anything yet) with the book in it's mouth. That was very cute and very well done. Nice job on this :)

  • Amazing, Etoli, the characters and music are enchanting, you and you friend have done a magnificent job on this.

  • Great work, it says alot when you can make something appealing without dialogue based on the charm of the principles of animation.

  • lol, happy dragon thing! It reminded me of a dolphin.

  • this short animation is good it would make a great introduction

  • That was great and also loved, the touch of magic......

  • I loved it :)

  • That was cute. Great music. Good luck in the future!

  • 1:10 = :3

    I love wordless shorts. These two characters are simply charming. And the animation is great too. <3 5/5

  • The music in this is enchanting and sweet as is the beautiful animation. it's welcoming to the viewer and warm thoughts of beauty entrance the imagination. Beatiful. I love the dragon and the cuteness between the characters. The drawings are smooth and clean as is the animation. In my favorites. What film festival was this played at?

  • wish i could draw as good as you

  • i think she was missing some toes? but overall pretty cool. i cant draw for crap.

  • The dragon's smile made me laugh.

  • Cute, I wish I could draw =P

  • very cute

  • aww that was cute :D I liked it

  • OMG This is a disgrace to humanity! It is clearly stated in the bible that any use of 'magic' or 'witchcraft' is the devil's work. Just look at that ABOMINATION of an animal. GOD didnt create that!!

    ...haha just kidding just kidding.

    Just mocking the super-uber christians that say bad stuff about anything.

    GREAT Animation short, absolutely love wordless shorts. It has a certain feel of serenity and simplicity to it. I look forward to more of your work.

  • got me there for a second... ^.^

  • so cute!!! ^_^

  • thats some skill right there!!

  • so cute

    =)

  • I want a dragon-puppy thing...

  • sooo it that kid a boy or girl??

  • i... think, it's a girl (cause it's pandora's book) but i could be wrong

  • WE MUST STOP MANBEARPIG

  • Talk about tastless humor.

  • love it

  • nice

  • Wow. That was, quite simply put, amazing.

    Good job, to you both! *claps*

  • what is the dragon's name? he is so cute!

  • I believe the dragon's name is Kahlu.. or Kaluh can't remember for certain but it was something like that

  • wow, how long did that take? How hard was it to do? did you use toonboom, flash, or a little of both?

  • wow, how long did this take? how hard is this to do? did you use toonboom, flash, or a little of both?

  • This was really nicely done :) xx

  • Really nicely animated, and you've done the expressions really well.

  • Good job!!! It's really well done of you and well animated.

  • I love that innocent look he gave her. It made me laugh.

  • Beautiful!~

  • aww man! the other music I think was much better! It gave it a more mystical feel it was wonderful when it had the old music. I love the animation just I liked the old music better.

  • more beautiful than ever! good luck at festival!

  • so purty! X3

  • This is awesome as always!

    May I ask how you managed to get a flash movie on this site though? I'd love to know. Thanks!

  • Very good staging. For close-ups and detail shots, try animating the whole character in a comfortable size, and cutting it to final size later.

  • Eh, DeviantArt is too slooooooow, but I managed to watch half of it before my computer died. ;_; So all I can say is, beautiful music, and...nice tweening with the grass at the start. O_o.

  • Amazing, good luck!

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