ya after the start then all balck why ?
dineshx248 3 years ago
why everyting so black ?
its black meh see the begining
ZackZyril 3 years ago
critiques dont recommend things...
revenge is typical but it's still a great storyline.
saying something's wrong with it you have to be more specific with it.
and bad grammar in the video , so what ? it's the internet .
you have no capital letters in your critique & you have incomplete sentences & "ur" isn't a word .
iturtlelol 3 years ago
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Watermiracle 3 years ago
critique: *pokes video* theres something wrong with it and bad grammar(in vid.). urm... revenge? detest? TOO TYPICAL! But the rest of ur story was pretty interesting... xP
I might need to check...
wow, I shocked. this guy has a revenge story that stands out? we might reconsider ;D
raystormx 3 years ago
ya after the start then all balck why ?
dineshx248 3 years ago
why everyting so black ?
dineshx248 3 years ago
its black meh see the begining
ZackZyril 3 years ago
critiques dont recommend things...
revenge is typical but it's still a great storyline.
saying something's wrong with it you have to be more specific with it.
and bad grammar in the video , so what ? it's the internet .
you have no capital letters in your critique & you have incomplete sentences & "ur" isn't a word .
iturtlelol 3 years ago
Comment removed
Watermiracle 3 years ago
critique: *pokes video* theres something wrong with it and bad grammar(in vid.). urm... revenge? detest? TOO TYPICAL! But the rest of ur story was pretty interesting... xP
I might need to check...
Watermiracle 3 years ago
wow, I shocked. this guy has a revenge story that stands out? we might reconsider ;D
raystormx 3 years ago