THIS BUSINESS ROCKS !! The meals look tasty and I'm ready to sign up for the Program. Fresh Nutritional Dinners at less than restaurant prices and DELIVERED... CRAZY! Great Job. Regarding the ad itself - Excellent content... explains the program thoroughly. The combining of music and graphics shows wonderful creativity and attention to detail. Good variety of slides. Very Professional.
Cool video! You might consider changing the order of the messaging. Maybe starting with "Are you looking for a change..." and go right from there into how it works and how easy it is. Also, I'm not sure folks want to be reminded of the problems they're encountering with getting a meal on the table quite so vividly. Maybe for some folks you have beat them over the head. But those folks may not be your ideal clientele anyway.
Good points. I guess people already know they're having a problem getting dinner. Do you think it's clear what the product is and how it works? Should the last page summarize the benefits? Do I need to compare to the other ways of getting dinner?
I was feeling very nostalgic and had to connect somehow. :-)
Titaniumbuyer 4 years ago
THIS BUSINESS ROCKS !! The meals look tasty and I'm ready to sign up for the Program. Fresh Nutritional Dinners at less than restaurant prices and DELIVERED... CRAZY! Great Job. Regarding the ad itself - Excellent content... explains the program thoroughly. The combining of music and graphics shows wonderful creativity and attention to detail. Good variety of slides. Very Professional.
Titaniumbuyer 4 years ago
You only gave me 2 stars?! Hmm, back to the drawing board :(
drkrueger 4 years ago
Cool video! You might consider changing the order of the messaging. Maybe starting with "Are you looking for a change..." and go right from there into how it works and how easy it is. Also, I'm not sure folks want to be reminded of the problems they're encountering with getting a meal on the table quite so vividly. Maybe for some folks you have beat them over the head. But those folks may not be your ideal clientele anyway.
rkrueger202 4 years ago
Good points. I guess people already know they're having a problem getting dinner. Do you think it's clear what the product is and how it works? Should the last page summarize the benefits? Do I need to compare to the other ways of getting dinner?
drkrueger 4 years ago