Kool Aid and Frozen Pizza (Remix)

[LOUTREESPLZ]

check out the loutrees rmx shits dope

oh check out my channel 2

[4lifecmb]

ggayyy haha jk pretty good shit

[StarStatusSwag]

hey if anyone could give me some advice on good software to download or purchase, that'd be greatly appreciated! Thanks guys!

[n7j7c7]

i heard you smoke pot?....its your bro aweavy

[StarStatusSwag]

@n7j7c7 yeah, but it's only for medicinal purposes

[nickdrewdustin85]

Voice is too squeaky but decent rhymes

[EnergyEfficientFilms]

not bad keep workin on it though and try to not sound so much like mac miller

[Larblar2]

Search cool aid and frozen pizza-mac miller to hear the real version. Theyre exactly the same.

[Larblar2]

1. you just got Mac millers song and did pretty much nothing to it.

2. you didnt even use your own beat

3. nothing is different about the song. you are a douche

[CrackedEpics]

@Larblar2 Your so damn dummbb.....!

[Tj5464]

yea bro ur ryhmes are pretty good but work on ur rythm a lil bit and as far as the big dick rhyms, yea its pretty gay but ey people listen to shit like that these days lol take big sean for example the nigga said "100 inch dick, yup and 20 pound genitals" and hes fuckin famous lmao

[razzdia123]

pretty decent rhymes dudes, work on that flow

[yungskeeme]

This shyt is pretty tight. The lyrics are hot and the beat is crazy. Nice work. Check me out and let know wat you think

[h0neybud]

You know I thought it was gonna be pretty weak but this isnt that bad.. keep it up

[HBMAN1995]

Just watch the pronunciation and vocal inflection. Like at 0:50. Some of it is sloppy or sounds too similar to Mac. And definitely come up with some of your own beats, or sample something but reaaaaally change it. You've got potential, just work on delivery and only pick the best rhymes you come up with. If a line ends Ok, don't put that shit out until its LEGIT.

[trattface]

gd :)

[WeArePrimeSlayers]

you two got haters already ;), that's a good thing, ppl already jealous !

Keep it up, make more =D

[LeonDGM]

not bad, probably better than what most of th people hating could do. but it sounds like a parody don't rap about twilight and how big your dick is. concentrate or increasing the depth of your lyrics and fix up the flo.

[zezsn1p3r]

Well, I just have to hand it to you straight. You have no real talent and you should consider killing yourself. Oh and grow a pair before you do, because you need to have accomplished something in your life before you end it all,

sincerely,

zezibun

[jayhoward21]

Haha the darth vader reference is too funny =P i honestly saw this video an thought wow this kid is gonna suck but you actually can rap =] Good job keep it up !.. an don't talk about your dick so much hahahah

[xAbRaHaMsAiDx]

sick

[tunjilove25]

Well, i am a big fan of Mac sooo i agree that you could use your own beat. when it comes to your lyrics, I have nothing bad to say because those are expressions and opinions you are entitled to, but I will say that you should work on your delivery. Im sure you have artists that you admire for their artistry. Whoever it is, study them and also study the music of this time ya know. Dont COPY, many artists fuck up that way. Have your own style and all, but remember to do your homework. :)

[kodi991]

Sick As fuck dudee Keep on Rappin. Fuckin Loved it.

[2peezed31]

aye if this is yur 1st song this is dope keep it up yu still need some work but i hella see the potential

[demonerwan]

it's ok

[StarStatusSwag]

thanks for the advice and views guys, it really means a lot

[stabilopod16]

this song made my day

[TheKickassSuperhero]

nice!! next video will be a hit

[rokewrites]

that was fresh is there a media fire link? :D and 50 cent's vid bought me here bro.

[StarStatusSwag]

@rokewrites no sorry, if you'd like i can email it to you

[camtheace]

I seen your comment on 50 cents vid and thought you were spamming but your got talent man keep it up :)

[happyheadpopper]

not bad pal

[MegaStrale]

excellent rap man!

[UncleBully71]

Pretty good flow and the lyrics were good. dont worry about anyone here rap, about anything that you want man

[Musicmixer1994]

youre pretty good, haha bu the other person was right dont rap about your dick, rap about life. I actually think you will get more respect.

Example: Lupe Fiasco and Nas

[MrDubPro]

@Musicmixer1994 How can he rap about life when he's only 17 years old, he hasn't lived life yet.

Start rapping about life when your about 20-25.

[kingbeezy72]

youre badass!

[lovelOOvelove]

Good stuff! Hope your mom will buy you all the equipmemt things (:

[ajbrown11]

you rapped about ur penis twice?

[miles5501]

HOLY SHIT UR GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BETTER THAN ANY UNPRO IVE EVER HEARD IM PUTTIN THIS SHIT ON FB

[Anonymous01000010]

I'm tryin the same thing on my channel, i got the equipment already so i'll admit i have the advantage of a decent microphone, but tell me what you think /watch?v=FIdMQ2ltFMU

[utahutesguy]

Hey nice job, hope your mom can buy you that studio stuff :)

[Brotherblaze]

Fresh, next make your own beat it will be fresh

[CliffSavage239]

Beast shit.

[BJ0296]

Your really good with a little work you could be very good the best of luck to you

[tunakTALK]

Goodluck man , you've got potential

[YOUNGE104]

you could do better every time u record a song try to get better at something you did wrong last time you do that i see and work on ur flow and delivery and i see something in this game for you may not be big but its somthing and take a look at mine maybe we can work together some time

[oooKR3Wooo]

Its cool dude, Keep it up

[Dcpwn3r]

dope

but

no

[VersusModeADR]

2 views really?

[Borogirl6]

That was amazing!

[jepsen27]

work on flow and delivery, haha and dont rap about how big your dick is. it makes you guys look kinda gay.

[StarStatusSwag]

@jepsen27 thanks for the advice man

[blues3531]

u use the exact same flow and rhythm as mac did in  his song. so this fails unfortunately. some of the rhyming is decent though.

[StarStatusSwag]

@blues3531 alright thanks we'll try to switch it up next time!

[hkORBiT]

@blues3531 What other flow are you supposed to use??

[supaduner]

Fuck you, this guy is a no life that thinks could rap. He wish he was like 2pac. Talking shit about 2pac thinking he's better than him. Your music sucks! If you want real music, search up "Tupac" Or a username that goes by "Superyoungpac". These songs are bullshit!

[StarStatusSwag]

@supaduner haha man i love tupac im sorry if you misunderstood something

[fairfieldknights98]

SHITTT!!! That was tight you guys have great lyrics you guys are definelty going somewhere if you just keep goin

[TheySayImGreat]

amazing. keep going you guys got a sickass flow and good lyrics. keep it up and you'll make it somewhere

[MegaGamersUnited]

nice rap keep it up!!