@Kendyx23 Thank you! I would just write about how you feel. If you feel strongly about something (good or bad) just write down everything you feel. It doesn't have to rhyme, just write down lots of thoughts and ideas. Then once you get going, piece together the ideas and turn it into lyrics... turn the lyrics into a melody... and if you play an instrument, add that in too! I would just start with how you feel because it's easier to write about something you know. I hope this helps :)
omg sarah i'm in love with this! i LOVE the chords and the lyrics are beautiful and really relatable. amazing job :) i always look so forward to your originals and they never disappoint!
I loved it Sarah! First I thought it was Beatle Paul's great timeless song but it's a fabulous original. I love your writing,I get into it. The words are really well done beautifully put,you give us a glimpse of your thoughts about a love that's gone bad and they happen a lot so we can all relate to it. It's like reflecting and you do a great job of singing it so sweetly like you always do and your strumming is sweet,I love it. Your guitar is beautiful,is it a new Christmas gift?
I do the same thing get the chord progressions first then work on the melody line then add words. You're so fabulous my dear! And the most gorgeous easily! Happy New Year to you precious wishing you the best in everything for 2012. Keep rocking us here on Earth and on Neptune,I show the Neptunites your music and thay have you high on their charts. :)) xo Love you
@cbrb40 I know I really don't like that it's the same title as the Beatles song because I'm a huge fan of the Beatles and when I hear "Yesterday" I think of their song first. But I didn't really know what else to name this song haha. Oh well. Anyways, thank you so much!! Reading your comments was a perfect way to end my day :) Happy New Year to you as well!
@SarahJonesMusic Haha it's ok Sarah,many songwriters repeated the old titles I've done it too without thinking about it. Sometimes it's the best title for that song like you said. and it was. You write fabulous words,express yourself so well. You'r welcome sweetheart I adore everything about you! You're the coolest! Keep it going in the new year give us more vids,like maybe 5 or 6 day? can you do that? I'm kidding ;)-p Thank you Wishing a Happy Healthy New Year for you my dear. :))) xo
@cbrb40 Yeah, you're right, I guess everyone repeats the same titles haha. But thank you so much! I don't know about 5 or 6 a day, but I have a new video coming soon :)
Really liked this one, Sarah! I thought you played and wrote it real well! I've also started writing, but I don't have too much to write about. Only thing I've written about so far was a girl, lol. Anyway, great job once again!
@SarahJonesMusic I've definitely been writing but the only time I have time to mess with them and make music is super late in the wee hours of the morning! So hopefully I can finish this song I've been blabbering about on FB!
yu are an amazing song writer, i wish i could write songs like this but i can never finish one ....any advice?
Kendyx23 1 week ago
@Kendyx23 Thank you! I would just write about how you feel. If you feel strongly about something (good or bad) just write down everything you feel. It doesn't have to rhyme, just write down lots of thoughts and ideas. Then once you get going, piece together the ideas and turn it into lyrics... turn the lyrics into a melody... and if you play an instrument, add that in too! I would just start with how you feel because it's easier to write about something you know. I hope this helps :)
SarahJonesMusic 1 week ago
Great songwriting!!!
dflack1000 1 week ago
another amazing song :)))) <3
kellymusic94 4 weeks ago in playlist More videos from SarahJonesMusic
This is an amazing song!!! You're a great writer!!! :)
lovelovelove7131 1 month ago
@lovelovelove7131 Thank you :)
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
i like and i love it the lyrics and the melody....keep it up and thank you....
aivhanne 1 month ago
i love n i like it very much,keep it up,thank you....
aivhanne 1 month ago
omg sarah i'm in love with this! i LOVE the chords and the lyrics are beautiful and really relatable. amazing job :) i always look so forward to your originals and they never disappoint!
katexmusic1 1 month ago
@katexmusic1 Kateeee thank you!!! Same to you! I'm gonna go listen to your latest original now :)
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
WOW!!! IT'S BEAUTIFUL!! AN ORIGINAL SONG IN FACT!!! WOW!!! WELL DONE!!! WONDERFUL!!! ENJOYED IT!!!
hungerdunger1 1 month ago in playlist More videos from SarahJonesMusic
@hungerdunger1 Thank youuu! I really appreciate all the nice comments you've left!
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
Great writing Sarah!!! Love the feel that this song has! <3
arabellajonesmusic 1 month ago
@arabellajonesmusic Thanks so much Arabella!
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
Beautiful :)
jacksun3 1 month ago
@jacksun3 Thanks Jai! I wrote the song for your daughter the other day! :) Hoping to record it today or sometime in the near future.
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
u r so good at the guitar ;)
coversbybruh 1 month ago
Very Good Sarah
I Knew It had a Sound to it that I was Familiar with, & I see that Soneone thought much the Same, A beatle's Track. A Massive Well Done.
MrStablelad 1 month ago
It sounds Beautiful : )
kiddiva07 1 month ago
I loved it Sarah! First I thought it was Beatle Paul's great timeless song but it's a fabulous original. I love your writing,I get into it. The words are really well done beautifully put,you give us a glimpse of your thoughts about a love that's gone bad and they happen a lot so we can all relate to it. It's like reflecting and you do a great job of singing it so sweetly like you always do and your strumming is sweet,I love it. Your guitar is beautiful,is it a new Christmas gift?
cbrb40 1 month ago
I do the same thing get the chord progressions first then work on the melody line then add words. You're so fabulous my dear! And the most gorgeous easily! Happy New Year to you precious wishing you the best in everything for 2012. Keep rocking us here on Earth and on Neptune,I show the Neptunites your music and thay have you high on their charts. :)) xo Love you
cbrb40 1 month ago
@cbrb40 I know I really don't like that it's the same title as the Beatles song because I'm a huge fan of the Beatles and when I hear "Yesterday" I think of their song first. But I didn't really know what else to name this song haha. Oh well. Anyways, thank you so much!! Reading your comments was a perfect way to end my day :) Happy New Year to you as well!
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
@SarahJonesMusic Haha it's ok Sarah,many songwriters repeated the old titles I've done it too without thinking about it. Sometimes it's the best title for that song like you said. and it was. You write fabulous words,express yourself so well. You'r welcome sweetheart I adore everything about you! You're the coolest! Keep it going in the new year give us more vids,like maybe 5 or 6 day? can you do that? I'm kidding ;)-p Thank you Wishing a Happy Healthy New Year for you my dear. :))) xo
cbrb40 1 month ago
@cbrb40 Yeah, you're right, I guess everyone repeats the same titles haha. But thank you so much! I don't know about 5 or 6 a day, but I have a new video coming soon :)
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
great lyrics :) inspiring and true.
singingdoodle 1 month ago
@singingdoodle Thanks so much! I really appreciate that
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
wow Sarah, what amazing song!!! Your performances are always very beautiful!! Congratulations!
Batmoon245 1 month ago
@Batmoon245 thank youuu :)
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
Really liked this one, Sarah! I thought you played and wrote it real well! I've also started writing, but I don't have too much to write about. Only thing I've written about so far was a girl, lol. Anyway, great job once again!
Dfraz96 1 month ago
@Dfraz96 haha well girls are typically good topics to write about, right? thanks so much for the nice comment
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
@SarahJonesMusic Yeah! Lol. And no problem!
Dfraz96 1 month ago
Beautiful song, singing, & playing. Good job Sarah !!!
MrMuziekfan 1 month ago
Well done
AussieTalentShowcase 1 month ago
Awesome
brndnmshr68 1 month ago
Wonderful song Sarah! Terrific!! Well done! :) *David*
Zuparstar23d 1 month ago
Wonderful song! I love the lyrics and the chords. Perfect end to my day. :)
wmg2289 1 month ago
Sarah Rocks hehe , hope you well kid , great way to start the new year off . best wishes
BeautifulGirlByDana 1 month ago
You're such a great writer! Keep it up!
GogogadgetYoh 1 month ago
Sarah ... Love ur composition, just a beautiful song! Sweet!
Al (Idolx2)
IdolXfactor2 1 month ago
I love this Sarah!! The lyrics are really good, great use of words. And I really love the melody!! :)
xoxo
Angel
xoxoAngelYang 1 month ago
@xoxoAngelYang Thanks girl! Have you been writing anything lately? I wanna hear some more originals from you :)
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
@SarahJonesMusic I've definitely been writing but the only time I have time to mess with them and make music is super late in the wee hours of the morning! So hopefully I can finish this song I've been blabbering about on FB!
xoxoAngelYang 1 month ago
beautiful sarah! i love the line "So today I will change and stop watching it rain" !
megkathleensings 1 month ago
@megkathleensings Thanks Meg!! :)
SarahJonesMusic 1 month ago
SO damn GOOD! *-*
goosh. lol.
<3
didiuanna10 1 month ago
So good! I love ittt!!
courtelizz1 1 month ago