This is one of the lowest recordings I've heard of this, speaking of transposing wise... I'd suggest finding another arrangement that was transposed in a bit of a higher key, or hell use Finale or Sibelius and cut out the middle man. :-) lol. Overall, considering the limitations of how low this recording is, I think you did a good job. Just find a higher version and you'll do better, me thinks.
Your singing in your throat not your diaphragm and i can tell the wear in your voice. This isn't your song and your really breathy and its kinda annoying and i heard a fake vibrato. Have you considered voice lessons or not singing for a while so your voice will not be hoarse
there is no such thing as right or wrong key you idiot:) it's called transposing and learn how to spell....I never said It was going to be a perfect rendition
well not really...hence the :) after idiot....I just don't appreciate people who just comment without thinking ...your comment for example was great, full of constructive criticism:)
I agree with Brianaxxblondie as far as accent and pronounciation goes. But you are super good!
There was this kid i knew that used to brag about the fact that he got joseph in the musical and how awesome he was, but you stomped his performance and left it in the dust.
Use more air (and diaphram) when you sing. It should help clear up the higher pitches. It was very chopy and uneven. Some notes were flat. (just some, for the most part you were fine) You aren't a bad singer, but you aren't the greatest you can be yet.
When reaching for the higher pictches, think low, and bend you knees.
Its an alright take on the song. You paused too much, far too much. Try not to be so choppy and watch your diction. If I didn't know the lyrics of the song, I might have issues not knowing what you're saying.
Try a different style of music to work on this. Try something like celtic or newfoundland folk music which is what I studied. It could really be beneficial to you in regards to air and pronounciation.
i really dont think this song works for you, you pause too much and you ripped donny osmond off with that end bit. he wont be to impressed! if you're gonna rip some1's individuality of a song, atleast do it well!
I dont think this is the right sort of song for you to sing, but i like your voice. You need to work on your pronuncation and aunnunciation - the ends of quite few of the words and even the phrases get lost. You need to keep your flow of air constant.
I wouild mayb stick to something that isnt quite so demanding of your voice - you dont a have a "show" voice but its got a good quality which should be showcased in something more suited to you
A well sung song wainblatrobert. I found the lyrics moving and especially that you bothered to sing it. Towards the end of the song, at the very last part, when the voice started to strain in a high pitch it made me laugh.
This is one of the lowest recordings I've heard of this, speaking of transposing wise... I'd suggest finding another arrangement that was transposed in a bit of a higher key, or hell use Finale or Sibelius and cut out the middle man. :-) lol. Overall, considering the limitations of how low this recording is, I think you did a good job. Just find a higher version and you'll do better, me thinks.
ghostlat 2 years ago
Pretty good man, still need a little practice I think :') Just sang this song myself, it's beautiful ;D
SuperRandM 2 years ago
not bad
thisisthomasjordan 2 years ago
my shit could sing better than this stupid fucker
MasterofDuckies 2 years ago
It is not your songs. Sorry.
nikanovak 3 years ago
Too low a voice and not strong enough voice for this song!
ColinMeloy91 3 years ago
I can't say I like it very much. It's a beautiful song, but this performance isn't.
noxbasta 3 years ago
Your singing in your throat not your diaphragm and i can tell the wear in your voice. This isn't your song and your really breathy and its kinda annoying and i heard a fake vibrato. Have you considered voice lessons or not singing for a while so your voice will not be hoarse
capcanes 3 years ago 3
You don't sing from your diaphragm sir, otherwise you'd be singing as you breathe in. And the voice isn't hoarse, he's just singing through his nose.
daniel72389 2 years ago
the last note just kills it for me. you sound like you're straining.
ChrisManning 4 years ago
This is in the wrong key and it definately sucks!!
hyland999 4 years ago
there is no such thing as right or wrong key you idiot:) it's called transposing and learn how to spell....I never said It was going to be a perfect rendition
wainblatrobert 4 years ago
that is rude
capcanes 3 years ago
well not really...hence the :) after idiot....I just don't appreciate people who just comment without thinking ...your comment for example was great, full of constructive criticism:)
wainblatrobert 3 years ago
not eneugh pause in between the words but that is ok great though
MKAlover12 4 years ago
its a bit rubbish at first but its k after tis gud yeh
xxkezxxrawksxx 4 years ago
agrreedd you sound like the pantom off pantom of the oprea (Y) x
millyJP0 4 years ago
You have a pretty good voice! A little training needed, but it's still brilliant.
Cairnth 4 years ago
I agree with Brianaxxblondie as far as accent and pronounciation goes. But you are super good!
There was this kid i knew that used to brag about the fact that he got joseph in the musical and how awesome he was, but you stomped his performance and left it in the dust.
MandersTheMystic 4 years ago
hey just give me your e-mail and I'll send you the mp3...cheers
wainblatrobert 4 years ago
i find you try to sing some words with an accent.
try not to do that
it makes it sounds wierd.
but other wise good
BrianaxxBlondie 4 years ago
Not very good. Work on your tone. Keep singing higher. The vowels are iffy, and the low parts really do suck.
jebleprls 4 years ago
Use more air (and diaphram) when you sing. It should help clear up the higher pitches. It was very chopy and uneven. Some notes were flat. (just some, for the most part you were fine) You aren't a bad singer, but you aren't the greatest you can be yet.
When reaching for the higher pictches, think low, and bend you knees.
Joeturtle 4 years ago
Its an alright take on the song. You paused too much, far too much. Try not to be so choppy and watch your diction. If I didn't know the lyrics of the song, I might have issues not knowing what you're saying.
Try a different style of music to work on this. Try something like celtic or newfoundland folk music which is what I studied. It could really be beneficial to you in regards to air and pronounciation.
HHMgirl 4 years ago
i really dont think this song works for you, you pause too much and you ripped donny osmond off with that end bit. he wont be to impressed! if you're gonna rip some1's individuality of a song, atleast do it well!
jamesrox123 4 years ago
I dont think this is the right sort of song for you to sing, but i like your voice. You need to work on your pronuncation and aunnunciation - the ends of quite few of the words and even the phrases get lost. You need to keep your flow of air constant.
I wouild mayb stick to something that isnt quite so demanding of your voice - you dont a have a "show" voice but its got a good quality which should be showcased in something more suited to you
hope thats hope helful
Hannig 4 years ago
id give up knw
1234benn1234 4 years ago
lol rob i love to hear you sing
i actually know this song we sung it in chorus!
your getting better! your high notes are not ridiculously flat anymore
DUKE 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bsol07 4 years ago
For some reason I don't like the Church Choir pic. It feels out of place to me. Have you seem ysabellabrave?
ftbotsb 4 years ago
A well sung song wainblatrobert. I found the lyrics moving and especially that you bothered to sing it. Towards the end of the song, at the very last part, when the voice started to strain in a high pitch it made me laugh.
Tekhelet75 4 years ago