37/100 For next time try to fill the time amount given. Watch your favorite movies and watch the framing, lighting is important. Come ready witha script and do many take from many angles so you have an easier time in editing.
i don't agree with mister critic here as far as filling the time amount given. When it comes to youtube it can be hard to hold viewers attention for 5 minutes, shortening the length is a safe way to go.
I agree, this film lacks in areas. It has some good points, but it seems more like some people having fun with a camera, than an actual film. I think the song at the end takes away from your video, it does not add anything.
Good luck. If you are passionate about making films, keep trying.
Thanks man, we shot the fight scene over the course of three days because ti would start to get dark and the lighting would be different. The flashbacks took about 10 minutes each.
I went to my local magic/costume shop. That's where they have most of anything that we'll need. And just for kicks we learned how to make an ear as well.
well that pie looks good. i think i may go get me a slice since we have some left over from thanksgiving. i will admit i didn't get it until I watched it a again. I mean it makes perfect sense now. i started getting it towards the end the first time when i saw that last date flashback. it's hard b/c the roommates don't look the same the whole way through i don't know if it's b/c i have to remember their faces or b/c the picture quality isn't perfect. nonetheless it isn't bad.
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sksyslses 2 years ago
what kind of pie is that?
foreveremo 3 years ago
delicious pumpkin pie
BrownBearProduct 3 years ago
Marcelo that video is great and of course u got 5 stars by cuz kyle
ksyslses 3 years ago
its like a home video
dartvader117 3 years ago
based on the rating criteria this is my review:
Lighting 2/6.25
Sound 2/6.25
Editing 2/6.25
Cinematography 2/6.25
Acting 6/12.5
Script 5/12.5
Originality 8/25
Overal Impression 10/25
37/100 For next time try to fill the time amount given. Watch your favorite movies and watch the framing, lighting is important. Come ready witha script and do many take from many angles so you have an easier time in editing.
Critic5000 3 years ago
i don't agree with mister critic here as far as filling the time amount given. When it comes to youtube it can be hard to hold viewers attention for 5 minutes, shortening the length is a safe way to go.
keenanmartens 3 years ago
I agree, this film lacks in areas. It has some good points, but it seems more like some people having fun with a camera, than an actual film. I think the song at the end takes away from your video, it does not add anything.
Good luck. If you are passionate about making films, keep trying.
YourtubeReviewer 3 years ago
Nice submission, how long did it take you to film it? We hae one too it's called IceBreker tell me what you think?
JoelLaFlamme 3 years ago
Thanks man, we shot the fight scene over the course of three days because ti would start to get dark and the lighting would be different. The flashbacks took about 10 minutes each.
BrownBearProduct 3 years ago
ok, well done! very funny, and the music too! :)
dudeulartv 3 years ago 2
Thanks much appreciated, and yes it does say cockblocking lol
BrownBearProduct 3 years ago
did that say, 'cockblocking'..lol~!
dudeulartv 3 years ago
Clever video, could be a winner. Check out ours, it's called "The Great Outdoors"
AwesomePictures 3 years ago
Not bad. Good job with the props. Where does one acquire a fake ear, by chance?
crimsong19 3 years ago
I went to my local magic/costume shop. That's where they have most of anything that we'll need. And just for kicks we learned how to make an ear as well.
BrownBearProduct 3 years ago
oh yeah lol the phone looks like a lip phone in the still at first glance. red phone whose idea was that.
roah 3 years ago
hey
well that pie looks good. i think i may go get me a slice since we have some left over from thanksgiving. i will admit i didn't get it until I watched it a again. I mean it makes perfect sense now. i started getting it towards the end the first time when i saw that last date flashback. it's hard b/c the roommates don't look the same the whole way through i don't know if it's b/c i have to remember their faces or b/c the picture quality isn't perfect. nonetheless it isn't bad.
roah 3 years ago 2
Thanks a lot, there's a link that says watch in higher quality below the volume control that could help out. If you already did that then sorry :/
BrownBearProduct 3 years ago
cool thanks i will watch it again
roah 3 years ago
this shit is unforgivable... where is the plot yo?
digitalswag1 3 years ago
You know where it is, don't be hating. Be constructive with your feedback.
BrownBearProduct 3 years ago
awesome for the second time!!!!
Ikironex 3 years ago
good job bro thanks for telling me about it
bigorangetito 3 years ago
Hilarious!!
chasechia 3 years ago
awesome!!!
Ikironex 3 years ago 2