did you win??
uktah 2 years ago
nicely done there man likin the melody.. lyrics for verses are good but chorus is aiite. (a little to cliche sounding no offense) but im lovin how u busted out a nice solo riff... rock AND roll man keep the shiznat up and dont stop!
mikeb7791 3 years ago
the sense of melody in both the verse and chorus are great... and RIVERS chose it! it's not too pop but still is.
laffypaulie 3 years ago
Thanks! I think he chose the other one of mine, but lets all start churning out some awesome lyrics!
danthewelch 3 years ago
Would like to inform I meant that in a good way. lol.
bleed0range 3 years ago
Haha, thanks!
TRIPPppPppPppppYyyYyyyYyyYyyYyy.
did you win??
uktah 2 years ago
nicely done there man likin the melody.. lyrics for verses are good but chorus is aiite. (a little to cliche sounding no offense) but im lovin how u busted out a nice solo riff... rock AND roll man keep the shiznat up and dont stop!
mikeb7791 3 years ago
the sense of melody in both the verse and chorus are great... and RIVERS chose it! it's not too pop but still is.
laffypaulie 3 years ago
Thanks! I think he chose the other one of mine, but lets all start churning out some awesome lyrics!
danthewelch 3 years ago
Would like to inform I meant that in a good way. lol.
bleed0range 3 years ago
Haha, thanks!
danthewelch 3 years ago
TRIPPppPppPppppYyyYyyyYyyYyyYyy.
bleed0range 3 years ago