this is a song i wrote about my gf at the time..she had miscarried a kid..so i wrote a song called "first born" meaning the kid could of been my first born but it died...its very sad song..i sung it in an off key pitch...cuz it i didnt want it to sound pretty..cuz it wasnt a pretty moment...please feel free to check it out.. "iammarshall-first born" is the title. its on youtube
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Nice poem Garvin thanx. I've just found out my sister has miss-carried. 3 months in. My heart goes out to every1 who has been through this. it has brought tears throughout the family. peace and love to all xxx
u are not.....i guess people who haven't been through it just don't understand how painful it is to have lost that child .... what stops me from screaming is knowing there are people like u out there who do understand ...so thank u
I feel like the emptiness I feel will never fade. I had a misscarriage last week...and was 16 weeks along. There isnt a day that goes by that I can't stop the tears.
Thanks for this. I just miscarried who was to be our third child last night. its so very hard and my husband and I are so very sad. thank you for this.
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this is a song i wrote about my gf at the time..she had miscarried a kid..so i wrote a song called "first born" meaning the kid could of been my first born but it died...its very sad song..i sung it in an off key pitch...cuz it i didnt want it to sound pretty..cuz it wasnt a pretty moment...please feel free to check it out.. "iammarshall-first born" is the title. its on youtube
note: my goal is to let the world know guys care too
srm101982 10 months ago
i wish my baby would have lived
amykendekeone 2 years ago
scream? you should just clock those idiots.
TheRealEricLester 2 years ago
Nice poem Garvin thanx. I've just found out my sister has miss-carried. 3 months in. My heart goes out to every1 who has been through this. it has brought tears throughout the family. peace and love to all xxx
scouserocker83 2 years ago
u are not.....i guess people who haven't been through it just don't understand how painful it is to have lost that child .... what stops me from screaming is knowing there are people like u out there who do understand ...so thank u
FuckinShit88888 2 years ago
or tell them that their body was performing "natural selection".. thanks for this poem also
StrangeLittlePoet123 2 years ago
Heartfelt words- thank you for sharing.
prkygth 4 years ago
Very beautiful, thank you. Please don't give up. I had four miscarriages before I had my beautiful boy, Nicholas.
ldawley 4 years ago
I feel like the emptiness I feel will never fade. I had a misscarriage last week...and was 16 weeks along. There isnt a day that goes by that I can't stop the tears.
honyunyun 4 years ago
i lost my second little girl on august 22nd
things like this help
breezee0622 4 years ago
this is a beautifull poem i lost my third baby in may , this poem cuts through my its so special .xxxxxx
bubblegumshy 4 years ago
Does the pain ever go away? That aching, raw emptiness inside.
The feeling of loss that's unlike anything you've ever felt before?
ladyrider260 4 years ago
Your babies are with my daughter in Heaven waiting for us to appear.You will always love them and wonder.I have for 10 years.
expresateyourself 4 years ago
Thanks for this. I just miscarried who was to be our third child last night. its so very hard and my husband and I are so very sad. thank you for this.
GaiasRose 4 years ago
I am very sorry to learn about your loss. Wishing you and your family better luck next time around.
GarvinTV 4 years ago
congratulations very nice poem...and of course very nice music..David Helfgott is a god :D
errvinny 4 years ago
Thank you for posting. I miscarried at 2 months yesterday after trying for years.
starrynightz 4 years ago
Oh dear. I am so very sorry to hear. Words are impossible. Take some time to rebuild then try again. So not a very nice thing.
GarvinTV 4 years ago
Your poem is beautiful and conveyed my feelings. It is good not to be alone. I wish you All the Best....take care
starrynightz 4 years ago