good job on the story and fantastic drawing guys, but common, he has no face, no expression, nothing to hook you in, with a power that makes no sense, and no emotion on he's face to hook the reader, you just have pure fantasy ; ]
@dreamEternal He is propably wrapping himself with the hougyoku matter just like a worm wrapping itself to transform into a butter fly. This is the time he is most vulnerable. When he is finished transforming.......the world will end
Yoruichi made her grand entrance!
Breaker3213 1 year ago
man that was gay,
good job on the story and fantastic drawing guys, but common, he has no face, no expression, nothing to hook you in, with a power that makes no sense, and no emotion on he's face to hook the reader, you just have pure fantasy ; ]
dreamEternal 1 year ago
@dreamEternal He is propably wrapping himself with the hougyoku matter just like a worm wrapping itself to transform into a butter fly. This is the time he is most vulnerable. When he is finished transforming.......the world will end
thuanvinhny 1 year ago