Good film. Very simple. You could still cut about 20 seconds off it though. There is always room for improvement. For example, I think it would have been more effective if you had had quicker cutting when he was undressing. You cropped the line off the bottom so well done on that.
Good work, and you do have the skills. =)
ASoleWolf 1 year ago
I liked this. The tone and mood especially.
HungerCultFilms 1 year ago
5/5 Great Short!
MrBlomu 2 years ago
Be danged if I soil my nifty Super Crotch underwear by killing myself
GUERRILLATHRILLAS 2 years ago
Lol
Protobleach 2 years ago
Good film. Very simple. You could still cut about 20 seconds off it though. There is always room for improvement. For example, I think it would have been more effective if you had had quicker cutting when he was undressing. You cropped the line off the bottom so well done on that.
lollerz16 2 years ago
persuasive drama - I like the silences.
JackNightingale 2 years ago
Impressive. Even when I knew where it was going, I still wanted to keep watching. That's a good sign.
Your vids are getting really good, mate. Keep it up!
jye71 2 years ago
Really good filmwork mate, you have the skills!
SilentBombr 2 years ago