Living Spaces Jingle Contest Peyton and Cole

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the voice is tottaly not nice... keep your voice straight because changing your tone just makes it bad 0:20 is a example your son (brother or cousin) lowered hes tone really quick, and 0:24 you are currently blocking your mouth from the voice coming out, im not a expert but this is what i think about this video,pls dont think im offending you,you are not going to be a winner one thing for sure but you will get your place if you get some views,wish good luck to you and your son(brother or cousin)