that come fulfill at something like 2/3 of it and goes outloud for a short time then go back to background, and a reemixed conclusion that would gather the hearth and body of what ur trying to express here.
you are absolutely right, that is why my latest song I have made sounds really good, but I have not uploaded it yet. it is more than 5 minutes long and is alot better than this one. my mom says it is my best one yet. (in fact, my latest song makes this one sound like childs play.) do you want me to send you a P.M. when I upload it to youtube? thank you for your comments and your honesty,
that come fulfill at something like 2/3 of it and goes outloud for a short time then go back to background, and a reemixed conclusion that would gather the hearth and body of what ur trying to express here.
nicbaldwin 2 years ago
you are absolutely right, that is why my latest song I have made sounds really good, but I have not uploaded it yet. it is more than 5 minutes long and is alot better than this one. my mom says it is my best one yet. (in fact, my latest song makes this one sound like childs play.) do you want me to send you a P.M. when I upload it to youtube? thank you for your comments and your honesty,
Tom
tom1234505 2 years ago
id be honored tom :)
i do appreciate being usefull to artist such as u :P
nicbaldwin 2 years ago
cool, just check out my channel and click on " a great techno/trance song."
Thank you!
Tom
tom1234505 2 years ago
sry for the way iexpress mysefl im not english but french. i c image in music. and what i can tell u is that ur missing something
a background beat from the heart
nicbaldwin 2 years ago
id say this song is pretty good u have talent as a composer but it do miss some sort Of conclusion
or a big BOUM ! in the middle something like in a metal tune a solo of some sort
its like i c a great body but with no heart .
nicbaldwin 2 years ago
u are good
what could i say mmm,,, im not good at this .
nicbaldwin 2 years ago