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  • yeah!!! but wat was making her have tht 'feeling' if kevin still hasnt tld her? im confused so im gunna read on to find out!! lol

  • omg this is really good. love it

  • "Either she has news or we left the toilet seat up again" Joe said laughing.

    hahaha i love Joe, that would so be something he would say :)

    Ok i love your series, i'm subbing :)

  • Awh thank you so much! That really mean a lot to me.

  • Your very welcome!! :)

    and if you wouldn't mind, you should totally check out my series :) but you don't have too. heeh

  • "Either she has news or we left the toilet seat up again" Joe said laughing.

    im loving this by far !

  • i love this chapter. there's like a ton of funny quotes. gnna go read the next one :)

  • It's really good:) Post more soon.

  • TY TY! =D

  • MORE!!!!!!!!! comment faster!!!!!!! :D

  • I know!! I cant wait for you all to read 5! ;D

  • Nice!

    Loved it!

    <333

    You're a great writer.

  • Thank You! I appreciate that.

  • No problem.

    :)

  • this is the best thing i every read plz make part 5 i send to every one i know

  • really good!!

  • TY!

  • really good job :)

  • Thank You so much! =D

  • looved it!

  • Thanks!

  • love it love it love it xD

  • Really? I feel like people are geting tired of it!

    I know its not as good and the first chapter...

  • no i like it

    its great

    a good story line xD

  • Thanks!

  • 2o more comments until next chapter!

    is becoming boring now?....

  • rlly good job! and i love what u had denise said..."and please, someone help frankie!" thats hilarious...all he'll want is his webkinz! nice writing!

  • Awsome! Ur a very good writer!

  • Thanks so much! It means a lot to me. =D

  • awesome

  • that's awesome I love it.

  • omg! luv it!

  • Thanks so much!

  • love love love love it

  • omg this is so cool

    does joe no she fell in love with kevin

  • Can't wait for the next chapter!

  • iloveit;;..

  • OMG!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!! YOU HAVE AN AMAZING TALENT FOR WRITING STORIES!!!KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!!

    Peace~Becca O3

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