Work on your voices. Try to cut down on the hard "s" sounds. Try positioning your mike a bit farther away. Also, make your characters' voices a bit more distinct. Give each of them they're own accent and speech quirks. One final thing: if you're talking and you're trying to be heard over gunfire, don't be afraid to shout and then reduce the gunfire SFX. Overall, I like it so far and will give it a bit of time to develop. And Jackson's voice needs to drop the lisp. It really ruins the character.
this is a brilliant plot and could be a brilliant movie... i will give it a 9/10 because of the audio lag and machine gun sound overpowering the speech you didn't get a 10/10 but could be solved
I think the biggest issue is audio, the volume is a bit off on a few parts, voice acting could use work, I can't distinguish the jokes from the serious action. Other than that it's coming along pretty well.
When you're talking, do you have a lisp or happen to bite your tongue or something? Also, hearing voices is difficult over loud SFX such as machine gun bullets.
Also, you should always make sure that the Background SFX of the level are in-sync and don't turn off even when people are talking, e.g. 2:22
i just dont know guys. it wusnt all that well don. the voice acting neaded work, the guns are not in sync with there sounds. you guys need to drop the joks and stick with makeing it awsom :) on the bright side the music and the camra wus well don. and the fact that you guys are canadians is cool to :)
3/5 you need to sync the shots and sound a bit better the voice acting was okay also the concept to me seems like five different hollywood blockbusters put together i'm gonna wait for the 2nd episode to come before i decide to watch the series but overall seems alright (not saying it's horrible)
it is really good itsthe voices that are ruining it but don't worry it is still good 8/10
Lrules0202 2 years ago
Work on your voices. Try to cut down on the hard "s" sounds. Try positioning your mike a bit farther away. Also, make your characters' voices a bit more distinct. Give each of them they're own accent and speech quirks. One final thing: if you're talking and you're trying to be heard over gunfire, don't be afraid to shout and then reduce the gunfire SFX. Overall, I like it so far and will give it a bit of time to develop. And Jackson's voice needs to drop the lisp. It really ruins the character.
Phoenix6424 2 years ago
The plot is great but the voice acting could be a little beter, also you need to sync the shots more but overall it was good. 7/10
NarutoDude134 2 years ago 2
this is a very good plot for machinima however u could improve the music and u could use a little comedy obut otherwise awesome!
SILENTHAWX 2 years ago 2
this is a brilliant plot and could be a brilliant movie... i will give it a 9/10 because of the audio lag and machine gun sound overpowering the speech you didn't get a 10/10 but could be solved
guitarherofan1232 2 years ago 2
I think the biggest issue is audio, the volume is a bit off on a few parts, voice acting could use work, I can't distinguish the jokes from the serious action. Other than that it's coming along pretty well.
I should get my lines in within this week,
Zac 117
zacnumber00001 2 years ago
Whens the next one going to be finished? its a good plot so far just a little problem with the voice acting 5/5
Allen1342 2 years ago
no idea but all i know the voice acting is due at the end of the month
eblade9 2 years ago
I would have to agree with these guys here.
When you're talking, do you have a lisp or happen to bite your tongue or something? Also, hearing voices is difficult over loud SFX such as machine gun bullets.
Also, you should always make sure that the Background SFX of the level are in-sync and don't turn off even when people are talking, e.g. 2:22
4/5.
ForerunnerLuke 2 years ago
i just dont know guys. it wusnt all that well don. the voice acting neaded work, the guns are not in sync with there sounds. you guys need to drop the joks and stick with makeing it awsom :) on the bright side the music and the camra wus well don. and the fact that you guys are canadians is cool to :)
ambeatch 2 years ago
*5 ^^
Gvido29 2 years ago 2
3/5 you need to sync the shots and sound a bit better the voice acting was okay also the concept to me seems like five different hollywood blockbusters put together i'm gonna wait for the 2nd episode to come before i decide to watch the series but overall seems alright (not saying it's horrible)
Gears0798 2 years ago