Is that two One Piece posters in the background? Awesome!!
But on topic here, this fanfic was really horrible. I personally don't like the parings in Scooby Doo. that was probably one of the worst fanfics I've ever read.
wow this is bad..The idea..and flow is good..I mean the flow as in they have personals down and their way of acting/speech..but dialog is bad....but he/she..jumped into it to fast..I give it 4 stars out of 5 for effort..
@PFXProductions I agree, I have no problem with the "Shelma" pairing, but the pacing was way too fast. "Oh, no! You can't be getting married! BTW, I love you." THE NEXT DAY... "Like, sorry, Mary Jane. I've changed my mind and wanna marry Velma." If this were the author's only fanfic, I might agree with the effort part, but he/she has written several fanfics of this quality.
Is your deviant art the same name too?
fantasyfiction101 5 months ago
Hey I'm a shaphne fan too! oh and what's your fan fiction account I would love to read your scooby fics.
fantasyfiction101 5 months ago
@fantasyfiction101 I'm the same "bijoukaiba". :)
bijoukaiba 5 months ago
What's your fanfiction name? I write for Maximum Ride and I'd like to read some of your stories?
kaylatiffany1 6 months ago
I love how you used hand jestures while telling the story to us. :)
PaniniXChowder 7 months ago
Is that two One Piece posters in the background? Awesome!!
But on topic here, this fanfic was really horrible. I personally don't like the parings in Scooby Doo. that was probably one of the worst fanfics I've ever read.
supercola3405 8 months ago
@supercola3405 Thanks. I got them both in Japan. :)
bijoukaiba 8 months ago
OMG hey! Do you still write? I really want to read your stories xD
Wow, that story was HORRIBLE! The way you read it made me laugh and made it more... bearable? Lol, that would be a way of putting it xD
imaginationroxmysox 1 year ago
link, somebody?
slyfertail 1 year ago
wow this is bad..The idea..and flow is good..I mean the flow as in they have personals down and their way of acting/speech..but dialog is bad....but he/she..jumped into it to fast..I give it 4 stars out of 5 for effort..
PFXProductions 1 year ago
@PFXProductions I agree, I have no problem with the "Shelma" pairing, but the pacing was way too fast. "Oh, no! You can't be getting married! BTW, I love you." THE NEXT DAY... "Like, sorry, Mary Jane. I've changed my mind and wanna marry Velma." If this were the author's only fanfic, I might agree with the effort part, but he/she has written several fanfics of this quality.
bijoukaiba 1 year ago
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PFXProductions 1 year ago
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PFXProductions 1 year ago
i can DIE laughing at this story!!! i can't even breathe!!!! i never finish a story but still this is horrid!!!
churchluvr13 1 year ago
ur a faty nerd u should go hit ur head on a wall
josephranzino123 1 year ago
@josephranzino123 Don't tell me YOU wrote that fanfic... or are you just a common troll?
bijoukaiba 1 year ago 5
@bijoukaiba wow ..nope i did
josephranzino123 1 year ago
O.O
Two lines in; "I LOVE YOU!"
Wow, that was... direct.
DancesWithThunder 2 years ago 4
OMG!! Lol. *dies laughing* I litteraly JUST read that yesturday... well I tried, lol. I agree.... it was very un-scooby-dooish
Gothicthundra 2 years ago 6
god that was horrible-_- and very unrealistic.
animefighter1717 2 years ago 3
I stopped listening before it even reached two minutes.
>.>;
ItachiMoon17 2 years ago
Oh, but you missed the analysis! Just "fast forward" to 3:40, that's where the fun begins... >:-)
bijoukaiba 2 years ago
What are some of the flaws here?
EVERYTHING.
= A =
SugarsNightmares 2 years ago 6
wow that bad? i mjake sure to give it a bad review sometime
Iceclaw77 2 years ago