****EXTENDED VERSION OF MY LYRICS!**** Uh, Together With All My Fears, Well I Hope Hes Happy, With That Girl He Calls Snappy? You Think I'm All Alone, But Hun Thats Where Yo Wrong. I Got My Own Man, Yeah, His Name Is Dan, Well Time Is Money And Money Is Time, 'Case you Haven't Noticed, I Really Like To Rhyme Uh, Yeah Well, Now That I See, Yo Through With Meh,i'm Mov'in On With This Song.....*That's All I Got! *
Hey Guys Id Like You To See My OWN Lyrics cause My Cam Isnt Working & I Want To Become A Song Writer. (I'm Coming Home Tune) *Skip First Verse And Onto Second* I Cant Believe I Cant Believe That He Just Left Me After All That Weve Been Through All He Said Was "Im Through With You." *Kicks up The Beat*I Can't Believe That - He Just Left Me Didnt Even Say GoodBye Huh Well I Know He Aint Shy Yeah Leavein Me All Up In Tears........ Sorry I Cant Continue My Song I Will Run Out Of Letters To Put. ):
DON'T READ THIS CAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS. YOU WILL GET KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DON'T POST THIS ON THREE VIDEOS YOU WILL DIE WITHIN THE NEXT TWO DAYS. NOW, YOU'VE ALREADY STARTED READING SO DON'T STOP. THIS IS SCARY. PUT THIS IN FIVE VIDEOS IN THE NEXT143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE PRESS F6 AND YOUR LOVERS NAM WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SCARY CAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS
Life is complicated, theres so many perspectives. So for me to judge another should never be accepted And if he's different is no exception. Theyre just getting by, trying to find acception. Its time they experience friendship, and not neglection. Wat if happiness for u, was decided by election? Show some affection. So when you see your reflection you'll think that your a good man, and you can accept it
Im A Young Artist Who Started Rapping When I Was 9 . Right Now I Dont Have Many Songs On here Because I Havent Found A Studio I Coud go to. Please Subscribe To My Channel And They Will be On Here Soon .
BIG FAVOR!!! CHECK OUT MY PAGE 4 ME EVERYBODY. I ACCEPT ALL FEEDBACK, COMMENTS, ADVICE, AND EVEN CRITICISM AND AM A VERY COOL PERSON. BUT I WOULD LIKE U ALL 2 JUST CHECK IT OUT 4 ME AND LET ME KNOW WAT U THINK. Follow me on twitter at Don_Draper_SS
fresh outta the box again strait to the block again/standin in front a pots cookin rocks to chop again/they say u fail to plan u plan to fail so i plan to win/its hard to be rightous when livin in a world a sin/i jus hope GOD understand and pray he let me in/prayers go up blessings come my reign will never end/i got no problem walkin through hell im heaven sent/the lords gift to the game tell a hater repent/cause stacks from my stash on ya head wouldn't make a dent/
real world aint real world in todays real world, people will punch you in the gut then kick you in the balls, its all about big shots and barbie dolls, stackin money, makin bones, fucking bitches, slappin hoes, smoking kush and drinkin booze, all night every day its what i do..... but its not that great unless of course YOU HAVE MONEY, but when it comes to people like me YOU HAVE NOTHING. high school drop out, no job, not even a drivers liscence! im a hippie at heart but prone to violence.
@RagingSiKKness umm, yeah, J Cole is a ghostwriter, and he wrote it for Diddy.. and also from the years 2003 - 2006 Murphy Lee ghostwrote for Diddy as well... DIDDY EFFIN SUCKS!
what I like about Sean " P.Diddy " Combs , is that he was a legend he was present in the times of the Real Rappers like Tupac & Biggie ... he lived all types of Hip-Hop worlds , the past & the present ( fake ) one ...
@FreeStylingRecords wow...not being an asshole here but why would you not... music is better than words. it expresses more emotion than 10 million words. goodbye now :)
@bellissimo129 no Skylar Grey isn't actually in the video. the two girls Dawn Richards & Kalenna Harper, are part of Diddy's new group Diddy Dirty Money.
still cant get over how badly i verbally owned the fuck out of those two retards, all while drunk as hell, dumb hatin ass bitches, trying writing a DISS next time instead of some wack ass comment about how its "garbage"
its ok, just be glad i dont know you in person so i cant put you in a song later on down the road, i can only imagine how pissed you would be when you hear Jon Juda on the radio 2 years from now rippin you a new asshole and you think back to the bullshit you shot at him on youtube ouch...i wish you could see me facepalming and shaking my head right now
like ive stated before, i think it's just some simply realize when others possess a talent greater than their own, they have nothing else better to do but provide as much negative criticism they can out of sheer jealousy, anger, and a slight amount of boredom, the epitome of the "hater"
i also have a few friends, all who have been doing this longer than myself, and they all tell me that im good, i dont ask them to lie, i tell them to tell me the truth, and i honestly believe they do, some have even asked me to go to the studio with them, as of right now, all i see are mindless comments by people who have nothing better to do than offer their opinion which falls far below that of what you would consider constructive criticism. perhaps you should try doing what im doing
taking into consideration that ive been doing this for only 4 months, not every day, and im able to tell stories, incorporate varying forms of wordplay, etc without any real experience at this, no literally education beyond high school English or having a large vast knowledge of hip hop to pull inspiration from says something. again, im offering you a chance to prove to ME that what you say, actually means something
state that it's bad or not good. my friends all tell me for the time ive been attempting this, i am better than anyone they know. they all want me to come to the studio. mind you, i only have been doing this since January, and not even every day, and without listening to every rap song, and being able to pull from years of experience and inspiration, nor do i have any literally education beyond that of 12th grade English.
still i ask, HOW is it not good. in your own opinion. tell me what's wrong with it, i know it aint perfect, because i didnt sit here for days/weeks to write the best verse i can on this one song like the PROS do (don't believe me? google how long on average it takes them to write songs) its like 4 lines, and for lack of better words, my ADD told me to keep moving to other shit, so i can get more practice. again, im asking/begging you to actually explain yourself, not just sit back and simply
actually, just go see the eminem fast lane instrumental and read what i put, yeah, its like that, that sit down shut the fuck up and turn the other cheek kinda shit cuz you dont want to get your ass handed to you on youtube, and then after about a year or two when i make it feel even shittier when you hear me on the radio and you remember how your 12 friend, random hatin troll ass just got the universal play
@TheIcon04 ok well when i realized you have 12 friends, talk shit, have nothing you've spit yourself up there, AND you got ppl leaving you bad comments, you are nothing more than a youtube troll, see, you would've done better for me if i thought you were actual competition, or at the very least someone who i thought knew what they were talking about, both of which you are not. on to the next one i guess haha
and check it, i been doin this for only 4 months, and that shit is about 3 minutes worth of writing, on top of that, like most people say, if you think you can do better, do it. check out the other shit i put up on eminems song that aint even out yet. matter of fact, check out my facebook and see all the shit i put up on the daily. i think hating should be the biggest form of flattery, not plagiarism :)
@Over9k well it wasnt that good mate haha your not a pro so keep it in your pants and if you want to hold an argument against someone saying you made a bad rhyme or whatever at least make sure he wasnt right first. XD
@LavLTC your probably just thinking of a T.I song, well, that's what it always reminded me of in the beginning, "what you know" and "whatever you like'
@TheIcon04 please, tell me hows its garbage? see, its easy to tell someone their shit is garbage, its another thing to explain why. im giving you the option ass clown, that is if you can.
the middle one looks like spock :)
noah0099 1 week ago
****EXTENDED VERSION OF MY LYRICS!**** Uh, Together With All My Fears, Well I Hope Hes Happy, With That Girl He Calls Snappy? You Think I'm All Alone, But Hun Thats Where Yo Wrong. I Got My Own Man, Yeah, His Name Is Dan, Well Time Is Money And Money Is Time, 'Case you Haven't Noticed, I Really Like To Rhyme Uh, Yeah Well, Now That I See, Yo Through With Meh,i'm Mov'in On With This Song.....*That's All I Got! *
xXMusicxX857 2 weeks ago
Hey Guys Id Like You To See My OWN Lyrics cause My Cam Isnt Working & I Want To Become A Song Writer. (I'm Coming Home Tune) *Skip First Verse And Onto Second* I Cant Believe I Cant Believe That He Just Left Me After All That Weve Been Through All He Said Was "Im Through With You." *Kicks up The Beat*I Can't Believe That - He Just Left Me Didnt Even Say GoodBye Huh Well I Know He Aint Shy Yeah Leavein Me All Up In Tears........ Sorry I Cant Continue My Song I Will Run Out Of Letters To Put. ):
xXMusicxX857 2 weeks ago
Nice instrumental!
Randomness9989 2 weeks ago
Bahh ugly Lesbians in the background! :P
MegaPupsilein 3 weeks ago
しびれた...
qa1wsx23 3 weeks ago
this is derrick rose's theme!
spikeball79 3 weeks ago
I found it. Derrick Rose HD. :)
iRoDeezy 1 month ago
huhu
Senshu510 1 month ago
hello
lol39491 1 month ago
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TheRealHDoubleM 2 months ago
2x speed or half speed is a geiler sound :D
WerderBremenForEverD 2 months ago
I made a minecraft parody song to this
wilddude8087 2 months ago
cool the song omg
Noelle8803 2 months ago
I heard this on a micheal jordan commercial. The basketball was talking and shit
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Life is complicated, theres so many perspectives. So for me to judge another should never be accepted And if he's different is no exception. Theyre just getting by, trying to find acception. Its time they experience friendship, and not neglection. Wat if happiness for u, was decided by election? Show some affection. So when you see your reflection you'll think that your a good man, and you can accept it
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Im A Young Artist Who Started Rapping When I Was 9 . Right Now I Dont Have Many Songs On here Because I Havent Found A Studio I Coud go to. Please Subscribe To My Channel And They Will be On Here Soon .
MrYoungRoger 3 months ago
im not saying that youtube rappers should stop but why not make a whole video instead of posting it where people could steal some pretty decnt lyrics
TheFilipinoBoxer 3 months ago
I noe why they call them labels,cause u fit a label now to fit a label...watsky...
onsyod 3 months ago
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AOBamaBoi 3 months ago
J.Cole wrote this shit
Bossblack13 3 months ago
COLE WORLD
latin0Heat72489 3 months ago
beat i cool song suck !!!!
truemastika 4 months ago
fresh outta the box again strait to the block again/standin in front a pots cookin rocks to chop again/they say u fail to plan u plan to fail so i plan to win/its hard to be rightous when livin in a world a sin/i jus hope GOD understand and pray he let me in/prayers go up blessings come my reign will never end/i got no problem walkin through hell im heaven sent/the lords gift to the game tell a hater repent/cause stacks from my stash on ya head wouldn't make a dent/
passthedutche 4 months ago
real world aint real world in todays real world, people will punch you in the gut then kick you in the balls, its all about big shots and barbie dolls, stackin money, makin bones, fucking bitches, slappin hoes, smoking kush and drinkin booze, all night every day its what i do..... but its not that great unless of course YOU HAVE MONEY, but when it comes to people like me YOU HAVE NOTHING. high school drop out, no job, not even a drivers liscence! im a hippie at heart but prone to violence.
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halfmetalsucks 4 months ago
Cause im knee deepin it and need TP roll to keep it clean!
-Watsky
MrJp833 4 months ago
watsky
MrJp833 4 months ago
J Cole rapped this better then diddy :)
xiSlyGaMeR 4 months ago
Why does at the start reminds me of minecraft music?
Technos72 4 months ago
@RagingSiKKness umm, yeah, J Cole is a ghostwriter, and he wrote it for Diddy.. and also from the years 2003 - 2006 Murphy Lee ghostwrote for Diddy as well... DIDDY EFFIN SUCKS!
FattieAcidProduction 5 months ago
before i turn 24 i left home,
now im coming bk and i see my mama crying off.
Huging kissing her and telling her to move on.
Just don't look at past life its gone.
put the camera on and see how life used to be, how i used to be.
now mama is smilen that is blessing.
now i got the feeling that god been listenning.
thank god im bk home pick up the phone n call em boys tell em im HOME!. every body should go home the best place you could ever be.
a life that u have never seen or ever been in.
abdulhasib91 5 months ago 4
Watsky Killed on this song!
kaisean95 5 months ago
honestly this is better than the song with words
lam0rinita30 5 months ago
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insert crappy free-style here
5thefathead 5 months ago
insert crappy free-style here
5thefathead 5 months ago
This all I cud of thought of at the funeral
3577781 5 months ago
what I like about Sean " P.Diddy " Combs , is that he was a legend he was present in the times of the Real Rappers like Tupac & Biggie ... he lived all types of Hip-Hop worlds , the past & the present ( fake ) one ...
i Salute you mister Diddy <3
VerbalTruth 6 months ago
@VerbalTruth DIDDY EFFIN SUCKS! This isn't even his song!! ITS J. COLES!
FattieAcidProduction 5 months ago
YAY WOOO COME ON !!!
BeatRider44 6 months ago
this is a not "real" song or ??!? put is good ;)
dreamgirl1444 6 months ago
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ImMadiKnow 6 months ago
Ich Liebe es! :D
12Mizoo 6 months ago
I was rapping to this song cuz i know all the lyrics. Yo
TheDillaMonster 6 months ago
sounds a tiny bit like Live your life by T.I. ft rihanna which is good :)
tommoconstantly 6 months ago
Look up "So Gone" by Primadona, its the best remix I've heard of this song yet
LaRoak 6 months ago
Eargasm! :O
Lukasitobeatz 6 months ago
I know why they call them labels -- Cuz you have to fit a label now to fit a label. - Watsky
OZeeGrassman 7 months ago 52
@OZeeGrassman If im a pussy, then i guess I did kegels
IntoxicatingYouth 7 months ago 5
@IntoxicatingYouth i got it on locks, i'll bring the bagels
sheehan35 6 months ago 4
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jjjaydog719 4 months ago
@OZeeGrassman If I'm a pussy then I guess I did my kegels.
eklyptimuspryme95 2 months ago
@eklyptimuspryme95 i've got it on lox, ill bring the bagels
BumStatusRoller 1 month ago in playlist Instrumentals
@BumStatusRoller it kinda feels like middle school again when they call
OneDuckDown 1 month ago
I am a 1,096,078 Viewer..
xDanger0ux 7 months ago
why didn't he keep on playing the piano???
fabatzzz 7 months ago
IM NOT A RACIST:neega can fly ^^
guido7095 7 months ago
@neonmix89 it was a nigga who made the song so if u don't like it then y did u look for it u really showing ingorance cause its still his song
Lyfedancer14 7 months ago
CHECK OUT MY "COMING HOME FREESTYLE" BY LAMBO NINO
LamboNino 7 months ago
much better without a nigger talking
neonmix89 7 months ago
@neonmix89 don't be racist man
crower20 7 months ago 4
GREAT !!!
funnygirl252525 7 months ago
IS THIS THE ACTUAL BEAT???
OFFICIALLYASTROKNOTZ 7 months ago 6
@OFFICIALLYASTROKNOTZ ya its the official instrumental
CriticalHype1 7 months ago 26
Dat bitch in the back ugly as fuck !! Urg !!
ChompingDiMystik 7 months ago
tr00l0l0l0l pimp XD
MrRunescapeAddicted 7 months ago
Yo Chiddy Bang Fans, listen to my take on Pro's freestyle 1.0 and let me know what you think --> /watch?v=5eC_5s_sSuc
controll27 7 months ago
So much better without rap :)
BadCrazyGuy92 7 months ago 8
in love with this.
EmmiiLeiinx3 7 months ago
i love this song sooo much it's soo beautiful
Alisha2597 7 months ago
cool
pinki90tira 7 months ago
this is sick.
quillaamay 7 months ago
51 more assholes in the world -.-
Supercraftminecraft 7 months ago 2
@Supercraftminecraft areu dumb? some people dont like instrumentals
FreeStylingRecords 7 months ago
@FreeStylingRecords why would they come to an instrumental video if they ddint?
iConnorG 7 months ago
@iConnorG to see if they would change their mind about instrumentals but i guess they didnt
FreeStylingRecords 7 months ago
Respond to this video... skylar grey is fucking ugly!!!
FreeStylingRecords 7 months ago
@FreeStylingRecords wow...not being an asshole here but why would you not... music is better than words. it expresses more emotion than 10 million words. goodbye now :)
Supercraftminecraft 7 months ago
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fruitylilmangoITSRIO 7 months ago
I think its Alex Da Kid's best beat yet.
PdubzCrew 7 months ago
Luv it!
Thespazology 7 months ago
i swear i can sing ''whatcha say- jason derulo'' with this beat loooooooooool
DuongNguyen92 8 months ago 3
49 people are lost :)
jpdmd1398 8 months ago
i hate the drums
EspenHMusic 8 months ago
its an ok beat the drums are the only thing thats good
AudioAstronaut5000 8 months ago
@AudioAstronaut5000
It's an okay beat? He got it perfect
wazuppeople1 8 months ago
tight!
SANJAYK5150 8 months ago
best beat ever, its so good tht i hear the song in ma head wit just the beat and know every lyric
xxpatschargersxx 8 months ago
49 people are homeless
SexySVR 8 months ago 2
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Kiddlunactics314 8 months ago
How do people get these instrumentals?
ShaunLalihatu 8 months ago
@ShaunLalihatu
You can make it yourself ^^
With Programs :)
TheHeartBell 8 months ago
awesome beats 2 da tune
05OfasiS 8 months ago
my channel will soon have this instrumental :D
gamestudiosnz 8 months ago
ja ok aber ich suche das ORGINALE lied und ich finds nich! ;-/
zugggerei1 8 months ago
45 did not coming home.
iZepT 8 months ago
Deutschland zuruck nach Mexiko COMING HOME!
Danferclap 8 months ago
1,000,000 Views On A Instrumental....Thumbs Up....
BRiTT3DST 8 months ago 131
awesome
nudegirl1998 8 months ago
for the beggining chorus.....Im Unemployed, im unemployed and the rest speaks for itsself lol
sickindamind1 9 months ago
Very COOL ! :DD
65Resul65 9 months ago
was ne scheisse ehhy übertreibst nich
samira01578 9 months ago
the music is awesome !!!
hakaveli1 9 months ago
45 are either retards or they were so stunned that they missed the like button.
This is the shit.
Bo0mGar 9 months ago
olmost 1 million for a instrumental. nice
hTTrick 9 months ago
44 people are homeless
Stefan7341 9 months ago
if u want this instrumental follow me on twi......youtube downloader
acstine 9 months ago
are they both skylar grey???
bellissimo129 9 months ago
@bellissimo129 no Skylar Grey isn't actually in the video. the two girls Dawn Richards & Kalenna Harper, are part of Diddy's new group Diddy Dirty Money.
ihittu 9 months ago
@ihittu so skylar just sings but doesnt star in the video
bellissimo129 9 months ago
@ihittu Skylar Gray is in the video. Look at 1:25 the girl in the long boots, in the actual music video. Its her.
WeAreZeRoGamiing 9 months ago
44 people are kicked out of their home
tv050 9 months ago
fuckin rap horse
don't have the other version without rap?
heartabear 9 months ago
fuckin rap horse
heartabear 9 months ago
I love this song so much
bubife69 9 months ago
i like this song :D
xrihannax93 9 months ago
43 people have forgotten their HOME key
stephane55ful 9 months ago
@stephane55ful am i supposed to laugh
Shinygold77 9 months ago
@Shinygold77 I'm pretty sure you did, you don't like the song?
stephane55ful 9 months ago
@stephane55ful 1# no i didnt 2# what has liking the song has got something to do with laughing at your lame comment?
Shinygold77 9 months ago
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@jaycub912 i made a beat to all fallen soldier hope ya like it check it out wix.com/jrclash/jrclash R.I.P to all the fallen
MrJRCLASH 9 months ago
@jaycub912 i made a beat to all fallen soldier hope ya like it check it out .wix.com/jrclash/jrclash R.I.P to all the fallen
MrJRCLASH 9 months ago
Don't know if I'm laughing from how beautiful this beat is or how stupid these dudes are tryin' to rap over it.
Bigstackstwo 9 months ago 2
Perfect gymnastics floor music songgggg<333333333
ItalianBaby74 9 months ago
Perfect gmynastics floor music songggg<333333333333
ItalianBaby74 9 months ago
still cant get over how badly i verbally owned the fuck out of those two retards, all while drunk as hell, dumb hatin ass bitches, trying writing a DISS next time instead of some wack ass comment about how its "garbage"
Over9k 10 months ago
39 people didn't cum.
siggascation 10 months ago
@siggascation
lol
TheYomamaLandon 10 months ago
in fact, it aint you who should be scared, it should be the industry, fuck it, the whole goddamn world
Over9k 10 months ago
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Over9k 10 months ago
in fact, im gonna start on some new shit, just for shits and giggles, show you bitches what im really about
Over9k 10 months ago
its ok, just be glad i dont know you in person so i cant put you in a song later on down the road, i can only imagine how pissed you would be when you hear Jon Juda on the radio 2 years from now rippin you a new asshole and you think back to the bullshit you shot at him on youtube ouch...i wish you could see me facepalming and shaking my head right now
Over9k 10 months ago
PZOWNED hahahahaha bitches
Over9k 10 months ago
like ive stated before, i think it's just some simply realize when others possess a talent greater than their own, they have nothing else better to do but provide as much negative criticism they can out of sheer jealousy, anger, and a slight amount of boredom, the epitome of the "hater"
Over9k 10 months ago
@Over9k You should make that a qoute
holdupdown 7 months ago
youtube is seriously fucking up with all these god damned posts that say they aren't uploaded then are, google chrome...you're a bitch too.
Over9k 10 months ago
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Over9k 10 months ago
instead of making yourself look like nothing more than a youtube troll with nothing better to do than start shit
Over9k 10 months ago
i also have a few friends, all who have been doing this longer than myself, and they all tell me that im good, i dont ask them to lie, i tell them to tell me the truth, and i honestly believe they do, some have even asked me to go to the studio with them, as of right now, all i see are mindless comments by people who have nothing better to do than offer their opinion which falls far below that of what you would consider constructive criticism. perhaps you should try doing what im doing
Over9k 10 months ago
taking into consideration that ive been doing this for only 4 months, not every day, and im able to tell stories, incorporate varying forms of wordplay, etc without any real experience at this, no literally education beyond high school English or having a large vast knowledge of hip hop to pull inspiration from says something. again, im offering you a chance to prove to ME that what you say, actually means something
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Over9k 10 months ago
state that it's bad or not good. my friends all tell me for the time ive been attempting this, i am better than anyone they know. they all want me to come to the studio. mind you, i only have been doing this since January, and not even every day, and without listening to every rap song, and being able to pull from years of experience and inspiration, nor do i have any literally education beyond that of 12th grade English.
Over9k 10 months ago
still i ask, HOW is it not good. in your own opinion. tell me what's wrong with it, i know it aint perfect, because i didnt sit here for days/weeks to write the best verse i can on this one song like the PROS do (don't believe me? google how long on average it takes them to write songs) its like 4 lines, and for lack of better words, my ADD told me to keep moving to other shit, so i can get more practice. again, im asking/begging you to actually explain yourself, not just sit back and simply
Over9k 10 months ago
face play...face play
Over9k 10 months ago
actually, just go see the eminem fast lane instrumental and read what i put, yeah, its like that, that sit down shut the fuck up and turn the other cheek kinda shit cuz you dont want to get your ass handed to you on youtube, and then after about a year or two when i make it feel even shittier when you hear me on the radio and you remember how your 12 friend, random hatin troll ass just got the universal play
Over9k 10 months ago
@TheIcon04 ok well when i realized you have 12 friends, talk shit, have nothing you've spit yourself up there, AND you got ppl leaving you bad comments, you are nothing more than a youtube troll, see, you would've done better for me if i thought you were actual competition, or at the very least someone who i thought knew what they were talking about, both of which you are not. on to the next one i guess haha
Over9k 10 months ago
and check it, i been doin this for only 4 months, and that shit is about 3 minutes worth of writing, on top of that, like most people say, if you think you can do better, do it. check out the other shit i put up on eminems song that aint even out yet. matter of fact, check out my facebook and see all the shit i put up on the daily. i think hating should be the biggest form of flattery, not plagiarism :)
Over9k 10 months ago
@Over9k well it wasnt that good mate haha your not a pro so keep it in your pants and if you want to hold an argument against someone saying you made a bad rhyme or whatever at least make sure he wasnt right first. XD
GhengisIguanodon 10 months ago
biggie didnt come home
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souvenirv 10 months ago
LOL I'm sitting dancing to the tune waiting for the song to start then realising after it's finished it's an instrumental!!
TheCrackersandcheese 10 months ago
cumming home :D
lwrestlemanial 10 months ago
EXACTLY WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR
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1.look at your floor
2.say your name 2 times
3.post this to five of your favorite songs
4.your crush will ask you out tomorrow
CaraCareBear9oSse1in 10 months ago
This instrumental sounds a LOT like another hip-hop beat, it's doing my head in. Can anyone think what it might be?
LavLTC 10 months ago
@LavLTC your probably just thinking of a T.I song, well, that's what it always reminded me of in the beginning, "what you know" and "whatever you like'
mrhankey12345 10 months ago
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QueenAnime99 10 months ago
@LavLTC You're probably thinking of "Live Your Life" by T.I. and Rhianna. Those songs are almost exactly alike.
QueenAnime99 10 months ago
@QueenAnime99 Thank you! That's exactly what I was thinking of.
LavLTC 10 months ago
@LavLTC Awesome! Good day.
QueenAnime99 10 months ago
i can play skylars part on piano:) now if only i could learn the rest haha
caligrlie08 10 months ago
yeah,
im coming home...
or more like
home is where the heart is, so i walk a fine line like ya hair and the part did
combin out the details, i make a train derail, young money star kid imma show ya where the charts is
high like me, but i had to go where sharks swim, in above ya head, dont you see me at the top bitch?
Over9k 10 months ago
@Over9k garbage, why is it everyone thinks they can rap when someone posts an instrumental, please stop embarrassing yourself
TheIcon04 10 months ago
@TheIcon04 please, tell me hows its garbage? see, its easy to tell someone their shit is garbage, its another thing to explain why. im giving you the option ass clown, that is if you can.
Over9k 10 months ago
@TheIcon04 Completely agree with you about the rapping comments. But if they want to do so, we won't hinder them, haha XD
NorskPanda 10 months ago
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Over9k 10 months ago
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Over9k 10 months ago
Chuck Noris
Xaziss2 10 months ago 2
@Xaziss2 The awnser to everything.
FishingNinja1 10 months ago