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  • Very touching poetry... Wonderful! Ireland is really a land of great poets.

  • @Aruena99 thanks, this is my most important poem to date. Glad you enjoyed x

  • mind blowin....thanks for reading it on Monday....just loved it

  • @littlemicu thanks for listening!

  • Beautiful poem Stephen! Very real. Made me cry. I look forward to hearing you live...

  • @deljazzer Thanks for your ears! and your kind words! while it is perhaps a sad piece it has helped to repair and relationships so no more tears please!

    Hugs

    S

  • Beautiful... real

  • @TheBeautyEverywhere thanks for listening!

  • I remember this from a Monday night reciting. It's lovely and I'm sure your mother thinks so too.

    Kat

  • incredible poem and you totally nailed it in this performance. brave and brilliant

  • @thebrownbreadmixtape cheers dude apart from the wee feck up!

  • sounds amazing with elder playing along squire!absolutely amazing.

  • @Lonelyschizophrenic so you are saying it is not amazing anyway? what would you know with your aabb schemes! haha just buzzin off you! ya smelly whore x

  • @mrstephenjamessmith excuse you man whore. I wrote the last song in an AAAA rhyming scheme so in your face bitch lol

    it is amazing in anyway and you know it! :D

  • @Lonelyschizophrenic oh excuse me! haha thanks dude x

  • ...there's nothing more beautiful than a poem for your mother...& I sometimes think of my grandmothers mother...a visual poem one day to make...& words cut through her skin...those last words seared on her lips..."your life (.....) your beautiful life..." & our words seem hopeless, never to match the sufferings of our mothers hearts! The least we can do is give them a poem from our hearts to theirs, a thank you for all they've done!!!

  • @avisualfeel thanks for lending me your ears! i agree i wrote a poem for her before but i was asked to write something for mothers day and we were going to print them out and raise money for charity. it was crap! too contrived, this is warts and all a real piece i feel. thanks for sharing your experiences with me and again for listening. this one means a lot to me. keep it lit now and fighting the good fight!

  • @16242T well i tried and tis the least i ca do! thank you for your ears!

  • i've been playing this all day,please keep this work up,unbelievable and totally inspiring and educating in the real way,martin.

  • @heirstonothing oh wow! even better! are you responsible for all 80 views! haha!

  • jesus man,it just gets better and better!!!

  • @heirstonothing thanks for that!

  • nice 1 Stephen - good stuff bro

  • @allinwith2s thanks for listening horse!

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