Poem: Taking Responsibility

[fisheyedcunt]

great steppin up .

communication is power .

read mine comment .

[crispycreme12]

you don't need to memorize the whole poem for it to sound good u read it perfectly

nice continuity, stong subject matter and

heartfelt emotion came through greeeaaaaaat job

[gyasiross]

That's was real cool, i like your style. Your last line was really relevant to the peace and stuck out, I wonder how it would sound if you memorized the whole thing.

[AbstractPoetNerd]

I used to be able to memorize stuff really well. Tell you what, if I ever get it down, I'll try to upload it here so you can hear it without all the breaks to read it.

[bonymann1]

this was good can i use it for a project

dont worry they will see the vid so i want be using it as my own thanks

[AbstractPoetNerd]

sure. Yeah, as long as proper credit is given, then I'd be happy to let you use the poem. May I ask what kind of project it is?

[bonymann1]

its a group thing me and my freinds are trying to prove the point that people world wide should stop blaming others for their problem and "take responsibility" for their own actions i needed a poem or song to get the message across thanks a again and continue posting good and positive things like this i enjoyed listening to it you also have an incredible speaking voice ever tried spoken word

[utubegurl1]

that was really good i liked it

[AbstractPoetNerd]

Thanks for the reply. I really appreciate it when someone takes the time to comment :)