Beautifully Dark....A pain that runs deep.......A beautiful soul......under siege by your nemesis.....love ya dear......a joy to listen to as always....
5* Wow...I love your deep thought provoking pieces. Honey you have such talent.
Jessica has written poetry for years....that is where most of the lyrics for her songs come from. You are very special and I do hope you keep creating....the world needs it....hugs, Joyce
Thanks:-P I wrote this one a bit different in that I really wanted people to think about it and not make it's lines such that as a story. I will always write and thank you for the encouragement. This piece has become one of my favorites indeed!
Terrific bleak wordscape (if that is in fact a word!). Leaves a strong impression of anguish and forbearance. Unfortunately my internet connection is too slow at present to watch the video, but the text speaks for itself.
I'm sorry you didn't get to watch the video, but the words are definitely the most important part of this one. I tried to stray aside my usual bounds and I am very glad you liked it!!!!!! Thanks!
I'm greatly impressed by your work. I tried to send you a short poem of my own. But you have friend lock on.
You seem like an iceberg to me. I like that.
ManageDiversity 2 years ago
Thank you and I apologize for taking so long to get back to you. I'll add you as a friend if you are not already there hun!
RayneDrops4Ever 2 years ago
Wow, great writing, one of your best!
TheFlawedPoet 2 years ago
Thank you so much! I appreciate that!
RayneDrops4Ever 2 years ago
Beautifully Dark....A pain that runs deep.......A beautiful soul......under siege by your nemesis.....love ya dear......a joy to listen to as always....
ryanshatzer 2 years ago
~*~*huggies~*~* yes the gothic me came out in this one. Thank you so much for the warm sentiments my dear!
RayneDrops4Ever 2 years ago
As always perfect!!! :*
RaniofDrac 2 years ago
5* Wow...I love your deep thought provoking pieces. Honey you have such talent.
Jessica has written poetry for years....that is where most of the lyrics for her songs come from. You are very special and I do hope you keep creating....the world needs it....hugs, Joyce
teacherjoyceann 2 years ago
Thanks:-P I wrote this one a bit different in that I really wanted people to think about it and not make it's lines such that as a story. I will always write and thank you for the encouragement. This piece has become one of my favorites indeed!
RayneDrops4Ever 2 years ago
Terrific bleak wordscape (if that is in fact a word!). Leaves a strong impression of anguish and forbearance. Unfortunately my internet connection is too slow at present to watch the video, but the text speaks for itself.
dashpoet 2 years ago
I'm sorry you didn't get to watch the video, but the words are definitely the most important part of this one. I tried to stray aside my usual bounds and I am very glad you liked it!!!!!! Thanks!
RayneDrops4Ever 2 years ago
no problem =)
jessicakobe 2 years ago
Great video and poem! =)
5*****
xoxo
<3 Jessica
jessicakobe 2 years ago
Thanks Jessica. I had no idea you watched these!
RayneDrops4Ever 2 years ago