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  • They have lots of sparkles in their eyes,

    And is animation your dream? If so than keep at it

  • i almost cried and it the 1st part of the video TT-TT i feel bad for the girl

    btw great anime:) u got urself a subscriber;P

  • This is inspiring.

    

  • i like your anime its got a great storyline only two suggestions or things i want to point out

    1. the heads are kinda small you might want to make the heads longer

    2. the dialog is good its just you might need a better mic

    and thats about the only two problems iv seen so far so good :D

  • I would be insanely proud of this if I made it when I was twelve. ._. Keep working, and your future in animation looks bright!!

  • why don't you try finishing the anime. i think it's really good so far :D

  • The music !! It's Dango daikazoku ! *^*

  • This is so inspirational! I want to make my anime again! Thanks! ^.^This is so inspirational! I want to make my anime again!

  • This reminds me of fruits basket

  • I know this theme song!!! It's Dango! DANGO! HAHAHA!!!!! Nagisa's Theme song! Right!? Eh!?

  • For 7th grade, this is pretty damn good.

  • Is this like based from Elemental Gelade? Because the theme song is the same and your main character talks like Ren and also acts like her a bit. Just wondering...

  • @101NotTelling Nah, I do like Elemental Gelade, and I used the same song, but it's completely different~!

  • @animestrawberrykitty Oh ok. BTW I love your anime! I'm making my own anime at the moment and yours has really inspired me.

  • @101NotTelling Thank you very much~! ^^

  • this is amazing! *o*

  • i just love this it is so amazing love the story and charectors :D

  • Melody, from Pandora Hearts.

    Dango Daikazoku, from Clannad.

    I love you and your background music.

  • Chiyoko means a thousand generations thats cool

  • This is really good! Can't wait to see more! Oh, how many episodes have you uploaded?

  • i here the Dango them

  • I love how in fanime there's usually clannad music

  • I like the story

  • yours is actually great :D i'm trying to make one but im trying to get people to auddition. only one has. >.< yours is good!

  • You have made my consider making my own series. After I finish yours, of course.

    P.S. This is amazing!

  • 5:37 can anyone tell me what the name of this song is? I can not for the life of me remember.

  • @Senjo

    I believe it's called Last Kiss and it's by Tanpopo.

  • @Lemonz617 OMG thank you!

  • Great effort...you've got lots of improvement room but I think for a first project. Keep up with it!

  • so damn sugoi

  • I really like this! You took your time and thats awesome! The dialogue, the scripts and such! The voice acting could be a bit better though. And i bet youre improving anyway!

  • 5:35 what is this song called ?

  • thats cool i use ms paint and movie maker =) and a little bit of Gimp.

  • The background music at 2:15 is dango daikazoku right? Please tell me your a clannad fan :'D

  • @phineasandferbfun Of course I am~ ^^

  • @animestrawberrykitty Yay! Im subscribing now >:3

  • I'll admit this is super cheesy, but it's still a great work and effort! :D I like it.

  • I'm sorry...

    I've watched the opening sequence to see if you play ANY of the character voices...

    BUT I WAS TOO GOBSMACKED I WAS WATCHING THE ANIMATION TOO MUCH O_O

    BTW...

    2:15 I caught myself singing ":o..dango..dango..dango..... DAMMIT"

    (That song easily gets stuck in mah head :3 Though I aint complaining, I thank you for that XD)

  • this is actually shockingly well done to have done it at such a young age. when i was in 7th-8th grade i tried making my own animations, i know that i didnt even get more than 7 seconds done before i gave up, so kudos to you for having gone through with it!

  • While the anime concept itself is good, i think that the people's heads are to fat and to flat, give them a little more puff in the hair!

  • I like it

  • I think it's a good series

  • :) I won't hate since I clap for your determination for making such a thing and it kind of reminded me of CLANNAD at the start anyway good job.

  • Wow... people are so mean to dislike... nearly 1/3 dislike? I thought it was very good and cute for somebody so young. Keep practicing, study animation, and experience and you will become very good. ^___^ You seem to have so much determination.

  • @NegaPosi2011  Thank you SO much~ I really appreciate that, considering what people are saying about my work... ^///^

  • @animestrawberrykitty They are just haters.

    You may not have the resources or experience, but there is something that you have that many others don't, and that's determination. You also have natural talent. Just practice as much as you possibly can, and don't let anybody ever tell you to stop, do not let the haters control you~~ ^___^ You have a gift.

  • I'll give you an A for effort.

    The main thing I think you might need to improve is the voice acting. Needs more emotion and variation.

  • This is very cute! i love the fact that you didn't trace anything! ^^ i hate it when people do that.... >.< so yea, i'm gonna try and start animating a anime thingy of mai own but i only have the basic software. did you use movie maker for this?

  • it would be cool if u made your own music but thats okay

  • i like your drawings good work

  • To be honest, your opening theme wasn't half-bad, given the circumstances. If anything, you have a rather good sense of editing and your timing was accurate, too. While the art has room for improvement, as well as the plot itself, this is much better than anything I could have made in the 7th grade.

  • i actually really like this. it's much better than the people who trace cr@p! ^o^ so this is still being continued, right? X3

  • "this SUCKS" you're tellin' me

  • have you no shame

  • (cont.) I actually will not have anything that I will be comfortable enough to release probably until I am in college. I'm in 9th grade now. Take much more time doing these things, even great animators take weeks to make animations that are even a few minutes long.

  • @jorsully Thank you for your feedback. However, the YinYang project is more of a project I do for fun. I write stories, and I like anime. Even though I'm not the best animator in the world, this is my way of conveying the story. I didn't have the cash to buy adobe flash, so I made due with what I had. This was completed when I was in the 7th grade, and now I have a tablet, but for being a 13 year old making this in her free time, I think I did pretty good.

  • @animestrawberrykitty I see. But if you really want to improve, try starting with a simple cartoon style, and build up to anime. Observe cartoons and anime closely. And I'm sure if you look, you could find freeware similar to Adobe Flash. Some of my favorite cartoons are Ren & Stimpy, the Scott Pilgrim comic series, mcbess's drawing and paintings, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Superjail, and a couple very unique anime that I love are FLCL and Dead Leaves.

  • @animestrawberrykitty (cont.) Oh, I forgot, also Popeye the Sailor Man. I suggest you look some of these up, and observe the animation closely and see if you could possibly slow it down frame-by-frame, especially with FLCL and Dead Leaves. And before you judge me for watching My Little Pony, the average viewer of the show is actually 18-24 year old males.

  • Please, before you make a video, use Adobe Flash to make it flow a little better, practice drawing a bit, maybe get a tablet, and you probably shouldn't do anime. Try something simpler, more cartoony animation. Then build up to anime. Also, find a specific artist to get inspiration from. I usually draw from the style of mcbess. Been doing it since last year, I improved a lot, but not enough to release anything on Youtube. I plan on combining 2D animation with 3D from Blender.

  • this is awesome how did u do it?????!!!!!!!!!

  • Anyone else see yuki sohma?

  • :O

    i had the same thing for mine. kinda.

    The "To dark for angels, to light for demons"

  • What a sweet series!

  • This is cool. 7th grade? I'm in 6th grade..of course, you're 8th grade now. ^^ but this series is cool and I love the voice.

  • Love the opening!! Do not quite Making this ok?Please Finish the series...this is awsome and your idea for this inspiring!!!

  • I like it but the teacher glasses.. It's too high... And it bothers mee xDD

  • OMG your anime is exactlly like the anime i wnated to make omg omg omg it is awsome

  • Well, it's not bad, but I'd work on putting feeling behind the voice of the main character. She sounds very...uninspired. Other than that you've done a better job than I've ever done.

  • kind of creepy

  • the heads look sqaushed together

  • Finally!! An anime that has a couple of episodes :P

  • You can tell its inspired by clannad yet its sooo original at the same time....

  • I promise I'm not trying to be mean but...

    ....is her teacher Microsoft Sam? 

  • Hey I know that song in the beginning! ^-^ It's "Lacie" from Pandora Hearts! :D

  • kawaii

  • @mrpeanut134 Hmmm

  • this is very well made :3 I really like the story. GJ

  • hey your the most coolest creator ever you have the guts to post your own work

    plus you have courage to do it with your teams now my mind is settled where going to complete our project and post it wish you luck with ep 4

  • ~Dango, dango, dango, dango, dango daikazoku

    sorry, I was singing along through that whole scene but anyway I like the character designs and story concept :) (the voice acting could use a little work though :P)

    anyway, good job and please keep at this ^^

  • i think that needs to be like a real show

    :) i like it make ep 3 now

  • This is pretty good, but the voices are rather monotonous and boring to listen to. In future, perhaps you should put a bit more emotion into your voice whilst voice acting. (:

  • AWESOME background music!

  • HOLY SHIZZ ITS LACIE FROM PANDORA HEARTS!

    Just had to point that out. nice to see another PH fan. ^^

  • Im sure u didnt use JUST ms paint...cuz the backrounds look like photoshop...ms paint cant make glowing effects and grass and stuff

  • Actually this is pretty good, I heard you made this with MS paint and Movie Maker...

    I'm jealous!

  • ...Microsoft Sam?

  • I love you for the theme song.

  • @animesteawberrykitty can you like do a tutorial on how you animamate?please!!!!if you dont want to i dont mind,its just a question.

  • Hello! Im making a web for my anime, and i have this area where i post links of other animes...would you mind if i put yours? Of course ill give credit

  • @pinkcatstar123 sure~ ^^

  • @animestrawberrykitty Thanks ^^! btw how much progress have u made on web 3. IM IN LOVE WITH THIS ANIME

  • @pinkcatstar123 Aw thankies~~~ Ep 3 is going to take a few mor months...~~ But I promise I'll work as fast as I can~ ^^

  • @animestrawberrykitty ok thanks ^^! Take ur time

  • @pinkcatstar123 what is it called

  • Gosh I've watched this so many times ~ like 15 :P

    I love Chiyoko I wish she was my little sis x3

    I've been trying to animate so I always come back to this ^_^

  • the teacher's neck looks a little fat.

  • OMG this.....is....so.............­......................AWESOME!­!!! I had to read my summer reading book and i was like awwwww i want to see part two!!!!! Then i read like 20 pages and then i got sooo exited and happy and so noww i'm going to watch part 2!!! :D

  • 2:53 dango daikazuku!!! just noticed that and i watch this alot!!!

  • I really dig all the work you put into this, and keep at it, but I would work on the voice acting. If you have to whisper to get the voice you intended, you might want to look for someone to record for you, and YouTube is fulllll of people that would jump on the chance.

  • you watch way to much fruits basket! or read.... WHOOO!!!!!! I LOVE THE DANGO THING....i forget how to spell it

  • PANDORA HEARTS!!!!! i luv that little melody its called Lacie rite?? awww i miss it and im still waitin for the next chap to come out its awsome oo and awsome anime by the way u did a gd job

  • This is so cool. I once tryed to do somthing like this but it didnt look as good, for sure!

  • @princesssaramitsuki Sure~! Im actually working really hard to finish YinYang ep 2 right now, but i will definitely do that right after~ ^^ For right now, look around youtube for tutorials~ Im sure you'll b able to find sum~

  • @princesssaramitsuki Yes, if you want to play the voice of someone you will need a microphone~ And it's really not that hard to do, you just need to be dedicated~ ^^

  • @princesssaramitsuki Nothing special~ Just drew the frames in MSPaint then put it together in windows movie maker~ and a few effects with gimp~ ^^

  • :O Loved the opening, very catchy and i loooove the use of the instrumental of dango there, reminds me of Clannad almost...

    Actually scratch that, I love your musical choices so far and the storyline makes sense so far :D

  • @LoverGummi  Awww~ Thankies~ ^^

  • I LOVE this and noticed in the forward you said LIGHT for DEMONS and DARK for ANGELS (no ofence because this is the best anime EVA)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @AnimeNerd26632 Wow~ Thank you~! ^^

  • @animestrawberrykitty was that a mistake im confused lol still AWESOME

  • you...you... you speak so slooowwwwwllllyyyyy

    C: it's cute

  • Wow... that's so... those opening lines... gorgeous. <3

  • It was pretty good. The drawings could use a little work on the shoulders and up. The head seems too squished, and soemtimes the neck looks waaay too long. Other than that, good job. :)

  • Pretty good although your drawings bug me because their eyes are REALLY big and their heads are really short. Other than that though, pretty good! I enjoyed the story and your animating skills. What program did you use?

  • @101NotTelling Just MSPaint...and a little bit of Photoshop. Then I used Windows MovieMaker ^^

  • its dango instrumental!!! xD from clannad >3<

  • watching your anime make me want 2 make 1 too. I have got to get a labtop soon.

    Oh and by the way I love your anime it was very awsome. can't wait to watch more of it.

  • Whats the song after the opening titals?

    It sounds so frigging familiar

  • @MichiinaCupcake I can't quite remember what it's called, but it's in the first episode of Clannad :3

  • @animestrawberrykitty Its Dango Dikazaku or something XD

  • @MichiinaCupcake instrumental of Dango Daikazoku, from Clannad

  • @BlackLuna0 Thanks

  • This is really amazing! Nice use of sound effects and the characters are drawn and animated so well, better than I could do! I could see this being a real anime. :D I'm making my own anime at the moment called Yin x Yang but it's completely different from the plot of yours. Keep up the good work. :)

  • what program did u use ? btw good job

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  • hmmm now i wannna make an anime brb OwO

  • it's awesome! but if there was more expression in your voice.. it would be great! :D Good job

  • it's awesome! but if there was more expression in your voice.. it would be great! :D Good gob :D

  • @ICookiesMS job*

  • I think you should have a hyper voice for that girl with red and blue eyes

  • wow! amazing! ;D

  • the beginning song wasn't it from pandora hearts?

  • @furious4543 Yes it was ^^

  • Really good xx Can u plzzzzzz tell me where u got the clannad backround music from .. the song at 3:27

  • This is so cute. I really like it. Is there going to be an episode 2? I'm trying to make my own show too. If you get a chance, can you check it out and tell me wat u think? I'd really appreciate it. But ne way, keep up the good work. Also wat software did you use to make your video editing?

  • @jzoner81 Yup~! Im in the process of making episode 2 right now~ For video editing i just use windows movie maker...nothing special~ Oh, and I checked out your videos~ They're WAY awesome~ I can't wait to see more~ :D

  • @animestrawberrykitty Yay! can't wait. But thanx alot :D i have the series up now and I'm about to post episode 21 later 2day. They come out each sunday b/w 3-7pm (EST)

  • @jzoner81 Awesome~! I'll be sure to watch it~

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  • This is really good & your animation style is soo cute!~

    um..I was wondering, what program did u use to get the leaves template that u use with the tress, 'cause ive seen it in quite a few pictures & i've been wondering for awhile.

  • @4evaweRkindasisters I think it's from most versions of photoshop

  • @animestrawberrykitty I'm pretty sure that not having a cold would have helped.

  • @animestrawberrykitty ok, thanks!

  • its good, but the neck creeps me up T.T but its good~ ^^

  • Lacie O.O! Clannad!  Epicness xDD

  • Your voice sounds really depressed .

    Other than that , it`s really good !

    I`ve tried made animations like these before , and they`re so much harder than they look !

  • @YummiChokoBunniiz Lol yeahz, I had a cold and had stayed home from school when i recorded those lines~ Haha not the best idea in the world, but i did my best~ ^ ^

  • Your voice sounds really depressed .

    Other than that , it`s really good !

    I`ve tried made animations like these before , and they`re so much harder than they look !

  • Nice job on this vid :)

  • That music from clannad show!!! And is this home made anime cuz it's not intrested "sorry"!!!!!!

  • im sorry ! but may i be guesssing is the main moral is about a girl whos moved away then comes back? sorry i know theres magic and stuff lol

  • @YamiChan33 Lol not really, she didn't move away, but rather ends up looking at her hometown very differently~ It will be explained better in episode 2~ :)

  • @animestrawberrykitty ok thanks

  • What's the song in the middle? (2:24)

    it's good =]

  • @freestyleice I think it's called "on the hillside path" from the anime "clannad"

  • OMG OMG OMG AMAZING!!!!  My sister and saw it and I think it is f****** amazing!!

  • I still can't get over how cute the main girl is :)

  • thats amazing!

    your so good at animating!

  • your voice sounds a LOT like illusionsdreams.

  • BTW 2:17 the background is awesome! im crap at drawing backgrounds i reli need to learn. Ok imma critic this fully, if you dont mind :) The girl at the begining with black hair is awsome looking :) Love their uniforms. The script of this is really good too <3 basically charactors are awesome, scripts awesome, the whole damn thing is AWESOME :))

  • Suckish>? Are you STUPID?>?? Dont be sTUPID!!! NO STUPIDITY

    this is REALLY awesome!!!!!! :) LOADS OF Work went into this, i can see

    ?WELL DONE LIKE A HUNDRED FRIKIN TIMES *off to my emo corner*

  • AAHHHH!!! PARIS!!! IT'S AWESOME!!! :D and your voice doesn't sound coldish. it sounds ULtra kaWAII XD. good job!!! lolz now the next time i see you i'm gonna like freak out in person like i did in this comment. haha be prepared =)

  • @horseandanimelover O-oh myyy....i shall mentally prepare for that~ X3

  • Wow this is reallly good the drawings are cute and the voices are clear and the story in interesting

  • omg this ish awesome > w < i loved it lol i would of felt so akaward if i was chiyoko if two boys had to sit next too me @w@ x3 CLANNAD MUSIC FTW

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