Mass Effect Movie: Shepard Origin Part 4 (fan made)

[cobchob]

"Trent"s facial expressions make it so much funnier.

[FelixTheory]

Wait a sec, the Prothean beacon was found on Mars. Not Pluto

[simongenius1]

@FelixTheory LOL, god damn it!

[Garusizbeast]

@simongenius1 LOL FUNNY

[EoDChrystian]

@FelixTheory Actually no beacon was found on Mars. There was a Prothean City on Mars, and in Pluto's orbit the Mass Effect Relay. Prothean beacon was found on Eden Prime

[zenlord22]

you could of goting some one you know with a voice similar

[simongenius1]

@zenlord22 I tried that actually. She couldn't pull off Jennifer Hale and so I'm like stuff it. I just used my own voice for mShepard i.e. Trent and use voice synthesizer.

[zenlord22]

@simongenius1 wouldn't be more essayer to record her voice then use the synthesizer to make it sound lie jennifer hale as close as you can

[lonewolf574999]

ask joker what he is doing

[simongenius1]

@lonewolf574999 maybe he's watching porn. That's why he was hiding.

[redneckdipper1337]

kill the joker!!!!



[94SideKick]

I'm guess it will be these experiences that will make this Shepard ruthless.

[simongenius1]

@94SideKick HINT: Tommy is stationed on Elysium.

[darkerego]

I just listened to the other parts. Cool story.

[simongenius1]

@darkerego Yay! New follower!? Actually, the beginning is "slow" compared to when Femshep begins to kickass. BTW, you said "listen"... but there ARE pictures!!! The pictures take sooooooo long to find! If it wasn't for the pictures, I could have finished by now.

[larsmuller97]

there you can do youre magic ! ;) But latter joker picks up and shepard apologizez for beeing so rude and the joker explains.

Anyway thats my thaughts but hey ! You are the awesome one here! Good luck! :)

[larsmuller97]

omg shepards face with the comentary at 2:48 is just pure epic! XD i fell off my chair bursting into laughing tears ! XD

Anyway i just want to say that you are AWESOME! You really do care about fan respons and do make a hell of an bad ass story! KEEP UP The good work :)

And for the next part i think shepard should pause for a moment joker looks with big eyes like thinking shit and about how to maybe explain or say sorry and then shepard would burst out the door and run and from.....

[simongenius1]

@larsmuller97 Really appreciate the feedback!! I have to listen to fan response, because I only have ~140 people following this story. Trent getting punched is expected if I did a good job developing the characters. So what Shepard does next after catching Joker eavsdropping should also be quite simple (you pretty much got it but there is more). Only kneeing Trent in the balls is due to popular demands and it makes sense since Trent's body is right against Shepard's.

[TheScottishwolf]

this felt really creepy as soon as you gotto the flirting

[simongenius1]

@TheScottishwolf If audience felt for Shepard, then yea it was meant to be as creepy and cringe worthy as humanly possible. Partly because i'm trying to portray Trent negatively without the situation turning into high school drama of Jocks vs the Losers. I decided to make it more sexual harrassment than traditional bullying. The other reason is that it's going to juxtapose really well to something that happens in Part umm... 7. Or maybe it's just my voice acting.

[udaho456]

DAT GLUTIUS MAXIMUS

[SternMann93]

Lol, maleshep is the sleezy flirt. :D